
Lord: My Troops Can Evolve Without Limit
领主:我的兵种能无限进化
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 300k Words
- Genre
- Gaming
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Game Otherworld
- Updated
- 3d ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
136Chapters
143Votes
1.1kRecs
24Fans
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Looking confused
There is no description of the talent effects, only descriptions of actual use. There are obviously two ways to present your dog food, one is by cards and the other is by soldiers. Can both of these methods be used as dog food or only one can be used? If both are possible, then why not build one barracks every day? Even if there are resource constraints, why not go farming? If you want to write about pure heroes, then why did you set such a talent? The setting still needs to be improved. At present, it seems that it is an adventurer and not even a landlord. Not to mention the lord
At present, it seems that it has little to do with the lord article. The author feels that he is a novice.
The current chapters in this book are different from ordinary lord articles, but rather seem to be written about summoners. The title given by the author clearly meant to write a lord story, but I feel like he was inexperienced and wanted to write something different from other lord stories, but the result was superfluous. It's more like building a barracks by yourself. It's more like a lord story than playing slowly.
The way you write it, the territory is of no use to the protagonist, and binding life and death is simply a trap. You can directly transfer to a summoner hero, and then find a first-tier lord to work. It is safe, efficient, and the upper limit is not low.
It would be better to write about Lords of All People traveling through another world. You alternate between gaming and reality, but your writing skills are not good enough, and you don't even have a key point! Moreover, the protagonist is too childish, and he deliberately contacts the authorities and wants to take the exam. This kind of writing is extremely poisonous. You can think about the specific reasons!
Isn't this a summoner? Does it have something to do with the territory?
Games, reality, invasions, and virtual battles, too many
When writing, you must have a focus. Either a game, reality, or imagination. Evolution, not much imagination. The game is a bit bland. Reality is like playing house. Personal opinion, cheers for the author.
The ratio of your content is also inappropriate. The progress in the game is already very slow, and there are so many real-life things written. In the early stage, more should be placed in the game. A ratio of 2:8 between reality and game is more suitable. After the progress catches up with the second echelon, real-life content can be added.
Illustrate
Sorry, this is my first time writing a book. I may have some problems with the rhythm and characterization in the early stages, and I wrote some useless pages. I would like to apologize here. In addition, I am not very good at arranging climax plots, and the writing is a bit bland and slow. This may be due to my personal personality. I will work hard to adjust if I have the opportunity in the future. But I will finish writing it carefully, [Scate of the Undead], [Tide of the Dark Moon], [War in All Nations], it may not be until the third chapter that the protagonist's strength can be considered to be on the stage of history. The previous chapters are all about accumulating strength Finally, I would like to ask for a wave of support. I will give you free recommendation votes and follow-up readings. Thank you all!
There is a problem with the setting of the commander value! Everyone knows that the combat power of the ghost race is lower than that of other races, relying on the natural disasters of the undead and the sea of skeletons! Your commander value will kill the ghost race.
You are really obsessed with taking exams. More than 2,000 people are vying for one position, taking advantage of us ordinary people.
It's so damn verbose, just 10 or so pictures will cause a wave of weirdness.
Western fantasy genre, not blazing its own path
Collect it first, then read it slowly when you think about it later
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Suggestions on upgrading and downgrading quality
First of all, it is possible to upgrade and downgrade the quality, but it cannot directly turn it into a blank slate. Although the author has explained that the attributes will be retained, it also raises a question, can a person born with second-level purple be able to defeat a first-level legend and upgrade to a second-level blank? If you beat the low-level legends, there is no need to upgrade them, which means there is no need to cultivate them. If you can't beat him, then those who are born at level 7 and level 8 will definitely not be able to beat those who rise from level 1, and there is no need to train him. I know the author wants to trick the protagonist, but he must also consider the uniformity. The cheating must also be implemented in the entire system. According to the author, a person who is born at level 9 It is said that the attributes of a ninth-level legend trained from the first level may be several times or dozens of times different. It is better to give the protagonist invincible command from the beginning. It is recommended to lower the quality by one level. If there is a setting of 1-3 as low level and 4-6 as mid-level, then 3 to 4 will lower the quality by two.
Your progress is too slow😅
Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!