Warhammer 40K: The Hammerlord’s Third Empire

I feel like the author chose the wrong track and wrote it without knowing much about the Warhammer setting. There are several big problems. First of all, the Star God rewrites the laws of physics, and it is impossible to awaken spiritual energy. With the Star God in the spiritual energy, it is completely useless. The two powers are completely and absolutely opposed. Secondly, the grats and greenskins are just big mushrooms, they don't seem to have any necessary feeding needs, and it is completely impossible for them to be physically enslaved by slave collars. Moreover, the tone of imitating the Central Plains is not funny in this scenario, but it feels a bit vulgar. In the end, there is no such thing as a slave collar in the Empire, because the Empire does not have the setting of slaves. Why? It's not that the empire is a good person, it's just that there are no easy-to-use servitors. I have servitors and want slaves to dry their hair, and the residents of the empire don't live as well as slaves. They directly follow the route of religious devotion and directly bully you. Slaves seem to be only found in the Dark Eldar of Commorragh, so your book is too abstract, and it feels like you are using the setting of the Ring World to set up Warhammer.

Cut the eggplant and write it back here for me. I'm chovy. Don't force me. I beg you to stay in jail.

Hello Lao Xia, I like your works very much, but I found that your books do not have a later outline and are written based on ideas, especially the two books of Pinocchio and Wei Lai. The supporting characters are also in need of polishing. Finally, I hope Lao Xia's works will get better and better.

Coming from Tomato, I've been following this author for 3 years. Don't let Xia go downhill. If it doesn't work, let's go back to Western Fantasy. Valor, Pinocchio, and Wei Lai are all waiting for you.

Damn eunuchs, come here to beg for food. The writing is always better and better. This is the first time I have seen it getting worse and worse. The more you write, the more eunuch you write. But if you want to write about Warhammer, I just want to say that you must have enough hammer flavor. If you don't have enough hammer flavor, your book will still be eunuch.

In fact, the Confucian language in that book is quite good. That's it, it's a pity. Blocked.

I suggest that since the persimmon book is about eunuchs, then don't write the main plot, and write something more exciting to make Gowther feel better. Anyway, it can be corrected in the future, and it doesn't violate the character. It's okay to stay undercover on Slaanesh's side for the time being. It's not your fault that you were banned. Just work hard at the starting point and your brothers will support you.

Lao Xia Hui Tomato writes a Western fantasy. I want to see the follow-up to the word game.

I want to watch Deer Hero😭

Isn't this similar to the one next door that impregnates the undead? It's also disrespectful of the setting. When I read the introduction, I felt something was wrong. If you want to conquer the greenskins, you have to win waaagh, and you have to lead them to fight. Zerg as food? I admire your courage! You are really not afraid of becoming a chicken thief after eating them all. Recruiting rebels? Have you ever wondered why they became rebels? Chun Chun is completely contaminated by Chaos, you still want to clear your name? Comparable to all five poisons