Mortal Immortal Official Biography

I just finished reading it and wanted to talk about it. I felt it was very bland and unsatisfactory. I looked at your category and it was fantasy. The beginning gave me a way of writing about urban rebirth and selling watermelons to make money, and the transition in the middle was too fast. I can probably understand the reason why the early plot is not important, but the first few pictures are indeed too white, and at the moment The princess who appeared before (it is not yet decided whether she will be the heroine in the follow-up) died too quickly, too blandly, with no memorable points, and her death was completely meaningless. The mortal meeting in Chapter 5 has not yet seen any characteristics of the protagonist. The characters that appeared in the middle are too complicated and just like a quick glance. It is really difficult to follow after reading five pictures.

Today, to express my gratitude and apology, the third update

My book friends: Arigado, I wish you good night today.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~