Rise of the Witch

Does the author know what the Three Sovereigns and Five Emperors are? Only the invincible in heaven and earth is the emperor. The battle between Zhuanxu and Shaohao is the battle between the two. The other saints are younger brothers. The so-called saints are also older brothers.

Witches are human beings with extraordinary abilities. The so-called Lich War is a fight between human representatives of force and beasts.

Why don't you take out the original chapters of the Douluo fanfic and make a separate book? It's really quite in-depth.

It feels like the protagonist is like a domesticated dog. I don't see how he has the will to fight. He is either frying fish in the fish pond or using his own war witch template to crush others. He doesn't have his own ideas about what others say. You still have the nerve to say that training is to be able to choose. Do you still have to give you a choice with your push-and-leave temperament? Isn't it inevitable what you choose? I would like to ask if the main character's reason for passing the Heart Questioning Level is because he likes being a dog? It feels like the author just wants to write about being invincible but can't control the speed and it always gives people the feeling of dawdling.

Sanqing, the saints and the so-called twelve ancestral witches are also worthy of touching the Three Emperors and Five Emperors. Except for Nuwa, who is the sage, can the remaining few stop touching the soles of the Three Emperors and Five Emperors with their heads. After all, it is difficult to clean the soles of the shoes.

The self-dwarfing butt is disgusting to look at.

The protagonist becomes a treasure-delivery boy from the moment he agrees to trade as a bodyguard. Especially after that, the women, who are weak and subordinates, have no sense of self-consciousness. Instead, they have an inexplicable superiority.

This fantasy has been written down into history. Even though the introduction seems off-putting, I don't even have the desire to read it.

This book has always been on the edge of poison! Even if it is not poisonous, it is still hanging around!

I feel really sick

Let me go, there are so many female characters with names before they are put on the shelves. Author, do you still remember them later?

My opinion is that it's okay, but it's a bit too much to help the wife... Husband and wife should support each other, but the other party gets the best of it. Don't give anything back! Moreover, her status seems to be a bit noble, but she can't help the male protagonist at all (and needs the male protagonist's protection). In my opinion, isn't this just another weakened version of Ling Qingzhu? I hope the author can have a reasonable explanation. The last point of view is that the role of the heroine is not as good as that of the two spiritual chef sisters.

The combat power system is very interesting. I hope that the combat power will not collapse and the harem will not be opened. Otherwise, the character descriptions will not be so vivid and interesting, and there will still be few chapter updates. I hope that the subsequent writing will not be unfinished.

Your book was put on the shelves very early. It has a small number of words, and the later parts of it become more and more procrastinating. The main line and branches are too protracted, and the more you write, the more boring it becomes.

Not enough, update soon (voted monthly)

The way of writing "Witch" is "Heaven upholds earth". It means the person who links to heaven. In ancient times, they were priests who performed sacrifices. The setting of Honghuangliu is actually the most rubbish. Because according to myths and legends, all materials except earth and sky were transformed by Pangu. According to this setting, the Witch Clan is transformed by their heart's blood. It can only be called the eldest son lineage of Pangu. The Golden Crow and Jade Rabbit transformed from the Sun and Taiyin belong to the Di sub-system. The rest, including the three souls, all belong to the bastard. Especially those three souls. Only spiritual thoughts, no memory and no bloodline.

It's well written, but why doesn't it feel like no one is reading it? Isn't it even possible to read it now that there is no golden finger system?

For the time being, it suits my taste. Give me food + food.

Are you still sending it today?

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The combat power system is very interesting. I hope that the combat power will not collapse and the harem will not be opened. Otherwise, the character descriptions will not be so vivid and interesting, and there will still be few chapter updates. I hope that the subsequent writing will not be unfinished.

The subject matter is pretty good. Others... It depends on personal preference.

Each of the two books is serious and complete. The key point is that each book is well written. The combination of classical immortality theory and Confucianism with the novel is just right. The author, you are really the boss's in-charge!