The Era System Glitched and Insists Buns Are Immortal Pills

The people around him were having so much internal monologue that the male protagonist looked like a fool, speechless and unable to retaliate.

It's pretty good. It's just that those female characters are really annoying. The author probably has some kind of peculiar hobby; they like writing about protagonists being talked about without fighting back. In the latest installment, not only the female supporting characters, but even the male supporting characters openly harass the protagonist, and the protagonist doesn't resist. This is truly masochistic.

The book is riddled with typos, relies on daily system introductions to pad the chapter count, and drags on with the plot. Although the novel's premise is good, it's destined to be abandoned!

I mean, has the author never seen bamboo before? Bamboo is a perennial herbaceous plant; you can't possibly say you can't find bamboo, can you? How could you not find bamboo in winter?

Judging from the synopsis, Yin Yi should be the female lead. I'm quite curious about the purpose of writing about Han Caiju. It feels like she's involved in more scenes than the female lead. Now even her father has appeared, and everyone around her thinks the male lead is interested in her. Only the male lead feels that he has nothing to do with her, but he only explains it verbally.

The cultivation system seems to have gone astray; this phrase has been emphasized multiple times in one chapter. Can't you stop emphasizing it all the time? It's exhausting to read!

So much abuse, and they're being called incompetent, constantly criticized.

Shouldn't updates be continuous after each release?! Don't cut it again!

You've already made this money, so why can't you just write a good book? Your previous books were quite good, but by messing things up like this, you've driven all your readers away.

Don't write down anything that hasn't changed in the attribute panel; it makes it too difficult to read.