People Are Fighting, Buy Qinglin at the Beginning

Is it a female author? Men don't like to call strange creatures mom, and they don't have such a weird habit.

A smell of yandere🤭

This introduction! Call me mom? A bit interesting

If you don't mind the novel being about soul traveling, you can read it first.

If you don't believe it, just read Chapter 3

I have been writing a book for so long and still write about seizing the body. Why not do it through prenatal care?

Green scales

In the novel "Dou Po Cang Qiong", you should choose to read all the beauties. Many novels about "Dou Po Cang Qiong" are about reading and collecting all the beauties.

There are 6 level 2 books with hundreds of thousands of words in them. I'm a bit afraid to read them.

Why do I feel like the protagonists in these pictures are so weird, as if their bodies have been taken away from them?

I think the early plot is reasonable. Most people don't watch it because they think the early stage is unreasonable, but the original work is also unreasonable. It's a wild place, so many chance and strange fires, and Schrödinger's geographical location: Canaan Academy's Black Corner Area It's an ordinary cliff jumping, a place where a strong man fell with a map of the Pure Lotus Demonic Fire. Why are there so few resources? Why does Mr. Yao always have what Xiao Yan needs when he meets him? Isn't it that the world revolves around the protagonist? Nothing major happened in Zhongzhou for so many years. Why did all kinds of major events happen one after another as soon as Xiao Yan left? The same reason applies to Douluo Continent. Is it reasonable to say that the past 10,000 years have been just 10,000 years, and the changes have been small and pitiful, and have even worsened?

Seize Xiao Yan's opportunity to achieve great success, and the wealthy couple will find their rightful place

The supporting characters in the first few chapters were too poorly created.

These people only think about selfishness, various calculations, whether all considerations are reasonable, and capitalist efficiencyism. They will not consider that people are emotional beings, not social beings. Even in these prototypes of fantasy novels about immortality and various martial arts novels, the love, hatred, grievances, and grievances in the world will not be considered. It's completely social, with all kinds of emotions and all kinds of complicated relationships, but they don't exist in the eyes of critics like them. According to their point of view, martial arts novels are rubbish, world famous books are rubbish, and even the original texts of these fan fiction are rubbish. What is the best? What they think in their own minds is the best, but they can't write it themselves.

The writing of emotional interactions has made great progress. Basically, all the heroines are eaten, and it is relatively logical. There is not so much fighting between life and death, just using a little skill to make a difference.

I suggest the author to read how other Dou Po fanfics are written. Recommend "Starting from Dou Po and Reaching the Top" and "Dou Po: Yang Emperor" Personally, I think the plot logic of these two books is quite good. The author can refer to it for reference.

It's pretty good. At least there is a process for recruiting female protagonists. What satisfies me the most is the daily intimacy between the protagonist and his own woman (not Se Se). I used to feel strange when I read Dou Po fandoms. Those authors seemed to have never been in love, and the couple usually didn't kiss or hug each other. The shortcoming is that the aura the author gave to the protagonist is too big, so big that I can no longer watch it. How can a person without any golden fingers be able to surpass the Little Medical Immortal Qing Lin and Xiao Yan (currently the protagonists fighting spirits) in terms of cultivation. Not to mention that the protagonists also have to practice physical training, make alchemy and learn how to control beasts. I looked at the table of contents and there is also weapon refining at the end. Does the author think that taking drugs can catch up with the protagonist group? According to the protagonist's cultivation level described by the author, it is considered fast for people like Little Medical Fairy, Qing Lin, Xiao Yan, and the protagonist of Douzong to fight against the king. Fighting skills, exercises, alchemy, weapon refining, and beast control must be followed by soul cultivation methods. How do you want me to believe that the protagonist can catch up with the protagonist group by practicing drug abuse on his own?

Will Queen Medusa Yafei and Princess Yaoye accept it?

I don't really like the one worn by Soul Reaver! If you don't mind, you can take a look

The author's writing of this fight is obviously better than the previous one of emotional writing.

I'm so angry after seeing this bunch of barrages and comments.

I like deleting comments. It's interesting.

I am Chaowei, please change it for me. What is Anti-Inflammation? Qinglin is already 19 years old before participating in the three-year appointment. Fans can be changed, but it can't be so outrageous. Let's not mention the characters of Hai Bodong and Nalan Yanran. At least the age of the characters can't be outrageous. In the original work, Qing Lin was one or two years younger than Xiao Yan, but now he is one or two years older than Xiao Yan. When writing a fanfic, you should at least respect the basic settings of the original work.

The protagonist is also an alchemist, doesn't he need strange fire? Why are you looking for strange fire for Xiao Yan?

After reading a lot of feedback from brothers, it is said that the protagonist's deal with Hai Bodong is seeking death. This is actually a problem with my writing skills, my writing is too poor. Originally I wanted to refer to Gao Qiqiang's use of An Xin's name, which is the video tape boss. But it may be that my writing was too poor, which made it look like I was being stupid.