
The Fight Against the Sky Begins with Han Feng
斗破苍穹从韩枫开始
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- Completed
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- 594k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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Is Han Feng's brain in the original novel not very good? Under such good conditions, Yao Lao was stabbed in the back? After backstabbing, he is still a Dou Huang, and his skills are all incomplete Xuan-level Burning Techniques. Any high-level Xuan-level ordinary skills are better than this 😁
Before Yao Chen died, he was a ninth-level Dou Zun, one step short of a half-saint. Not 9 stars
6. I want to write about Han Feng, and I also want to write about the original character to attract traffic. What a beautiful idea.
Let me explain again Timeline issue The timeline here will be modified. Otherwise, according to the timeline in which Han Feng did not betray Yao Lao, there would be no chance for Xiao Yan and other important characters to appear. So, in order to ensure that familiar characters can appear, my timeline here will be different from the original work. Then Xiao Yan, I like the character of Xiao Yan very much, so I will not wrong Xiao Yanzi. As for the issue of the heroine, we will make adjustments based on everyone's feedback. Emphasize that it is not a single female protagonist.
Is there any Xun'er? The comic version is so awesome. I like it. It's best not to have Aunt Yun. It's just a vase and it's useless.
You, a disciple of Dou Zun, went to work in the Jia Ma Empire?
. . . . . . . I don't want to watch the heroine Medusa when I see it Why, there is no other woman in Douqi Continent, right?
If Yao Lao really accepts Xiao Yan, it will definitely be a little poison.
Yao Lao will not accept a disciple just because Xiao Yan is more talented than ordinary people, not to mention the protagonist's recommendation. If he really accepts Xiao Yan as a disciple and starts to take up most of the novel, the plot will only follow the original novel and become like two protagonists.
Two questions, one is water, and the sky is full of water. The journey can be divided into two or three chapters, and the packing can be written into one chapter. Refining the strange fire can be divided into four steps, one chapter for each step. Second embarrassment, inexplicably blushing and feeling moved, but also shy and moved, just because of a trivial matter like breathing, and because of it, a chapter is made.
There are only two known ways to defeat the emperor, which are to defeat the Emperor Grade Young Pill with the strength of the Nine-Star Fighting Saint, and to practice Fen Jue to obtain the inheritance of the ancient emperor. The enemies include: Nine Star Fighting Saints, the Four Human Soul Emperors, Gu Yuan, Nihility, Dragon Emperor and Emperor Dan can also be counted. The protagonist takes Fen Jue and is destined to inherit it. The Emperor Pill can help his father-in-law (whether it is Gu Yuan or Dragon King), but what can he do to help Xiao Yan? 🤔🤔🤔
It's unreasonable. Since you're teaching the protagonist Fenjue, why not give him a Bone Spirit Lenghuo Zihuo to upgrade Fenjue at the beginning? You really just teach the skills and then forget about it.
The protagonist wants to abandon his cultivation and practice the Burning Technique. Why not go to the desert first to get the more powerful Qinglian Earth Core Fire, which is a Medusa Fighting Emperor. By the way, he also got the Canaan Academy's strange fire. He didn't do any preparation and just started practicing as soon as he got it. What did the protagonist think?
After all, it is still a matter of timeline. According to the timeline of the original work, your collection will not be so small. Many people are still not used to reading it. For those who like the original work, it will be very awkward.
Die, Cai Lin's younger sister, has a gentle and kind personality.
One of the candidates for Queen Medusa
I still feel that the fan work looks awkward after one character design and one timeline have been tampered with. There is really no need to forcefully carry those young people up before they were born. It would be better to watch Han Feng pry into his teacher's harem. Ask Xuan Yi, Qing Xianzi and Su Jiujiu to take off a piece of clothing, and he will help send a love letter. . .
After seeing Chapter 56, let's talk about my opinions.
1. Overall, it's pretty good. The image of Yao Lao, Medusa, is quite comfortable to look at. There is no deliberate stiffness or slap in the face 2. Regarding Xiao Yan, Xun'er can tell that the arrangements for Xiao Yan are not limited to the behavior of recruiting younger brothers in fan fiction. I really want to cultivate Xiao Yan as much as possible without conflicting interests (it's good, after all, Xiao Yan's character is indeed fair) 3. Regarding Fenjue, how do you do Jindi Fentianyan? Can you draw it from other members of the ancient tribe? 4. Regarding the ancient tribe, there is no Yao Lao to suck the fighting spirit. I feel that the insect is a back-up used by the ancient tribe to limit the rise of the Xiao tribe. In other words, it may be that all the ancient soul tribes will fall, and the combat power will easily collapse. This point needs attention 5. Regarding the ancient jade, both the ancient clan and the soul clan have some tricks. If the Xiao clan is caught, the whereabouts of the ancient jade cannot be hidden at all. This is not easy to arrange.
By the way, Qingtan was able to run from the Great Thousand World to Tianxuan Continent when she was a baby. I wonder how she did it? The original text of the Great Master mentioned in the section about going to the White Dragon Plane that it is more difficult to go from the Great Thousand World to the Lower Plane than from the lower plane to the Great Thousand World. 🤔
It's okay, except the timeline is a big flaw. Worth reading.
My favorite Queen Medusa
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Did the author Medusa forget how long it has been and there is no news at all?
Mu Qingluan seems a bit mediocre, right? Are the little doctor fairy Qinglin and Ya Fei better than this woman? The Little Medical Fairy and Qinglin can help the enemy or even block them to death, and Yafei's business and money-making management can help the protagonist develop his power. . . This guy should be collecting Xiao Xun'er (the best memory is Xiao Yan climbing a tree?) He skipped warming up his body, (collecting) 🤫
Well written. Come on. Come on.
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Invincible since the destruction of the family, we sincerely invite all book friends to come and give us guidance. Although this book does not include Xiao Yan, Medusa and Xiao Xun'er, there are veteran players such as Yao Chen, Little Doctor Fairy, Yun Yun, Nalan Yanran and Hai Bodong.
I thought of it by chance, but I didn't expect a new book to be published