Ashfield Boundary Monument

Name: Ashfield Boundary Monument
Author: The Mountain and the Moon Don't Know Me

烬野界碑

by The Mountain and the Moon Don't Know Me (山月不知吾)

Status: Ongoing
Length: 59k Words
Genre: Eastern Fantasy
Audience: Male
Subgenre: Otherworld Continent
Updated: 2mo ago
Source: Qidian

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Synopsis

Three thousand years ago, a meteorite tore the world apart. Ember traces leaked ether, monsters roamed the wilderness, and a handful of people awakened as mages. Most people have no talent. They are just human beings. Fang Yan is the son of a merchant from the outer area of Tower City. He doesn't know magic and has no background. Monsters howled outside the city wall. He picked up a second-hand dagger and walked into the knights' trial ground. He wants to live. He wanted his sister not to have to grow up in mud. He wanted to prove that people without talent are worthy of standing on the city wall. And deep in the wilderness, something is waking up. Not a monster. It's a secret older than monsters. To the east of the Sea of Storms, there is rumored to be another continent. The people there do not believe in gods and use steel to create giant beasts that can travel thousands of miles a day. This is the story of a man without talent, finding his place between the chosen one and the Iron Stranger.

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Thoughts on the first chapter
I have no desire to read the second chapter. Let me talk about what I saw in the first chapter: A description of an imaginary city. Advantages: The writing is very detailed, although there is a strong AI flavor in many places. The scene description is very detailed. If you read it carefully, some of the content can build up a picture in your mind. Disadvantages: 1. AI-heavy sense Part of the content is generated by AI at first glance. The biggest feeling of AI is that it is impersonal. At least this is the case with current AI. It is said that the editor is very disgusted with AI articles. I don't know the details. After all, I haven't signed them. 2. No content. Your first chapter must have more than 4,000 words, but it is very empty. Actually, you wrote quite a lot, and the textures of Zaun and Piltover have been described. The description of the market in Zaun is also very accurate. You describe the protagonist's family structure, the power system of the world, and what the protagonist wants to do in every detail. However, it is very empty and has no content. Because there is too much nonsense. You describe all the perspectives the protagonist sees, allowing the reader to follow him along the way. To be honest, let alone opening the second chapter. Chapter One I wanted to close more than once. First of all, there is nothing wrong with such a perspective description, but it cannot be more. You will suffer from visual fatigue. If you are a great person, someone will definitely say that you are a bad person. Fortunately, you are not. At most, you just don't look at it. That's all. There is no need to talk about other content. At least not necessary for now. Above.
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Advantages, fine. Disadvantages, fine. Nowadays, online articles don't have so much time to slowly introduce the environment and explain the background to you. So. I think it's okay to start from Chapter 3. The above is my simple opinion. ————Dividing Line———— Qidian's new book "Infinite Loading Final Bone Rider Won't Let Me Pass the Game" is waiting for the boss's recommendation, evaluation, and addition to the bookshelf. The boss's attention is the motivation for me to continue to update. (づ ●─● )づ
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