Yitian: Starting from the Beggar Gang

The protagonist, a time-traveler, doesn't know the plot is a poisonous point, and the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon still needs to be deduced! Practice what you have, and if you don't have it, go find the dragon-slaying knife! Don't the swords contain the Eighteen Dragon-Subduing Palms? Where do you need to deduce it?

I've already written almost 100 chapters about escorting a minion. What kind of main story should I write? It must have several thousand chapters.

The protagonist is not like a time traveler, but like a native

Do you know how to deal with the beggar's garbage? Those kidnappers

It's not very good. It's a time-travel setting. I don't know the result. I don't know the result. I can only practice some common martial arts, and learn some rubbish martial arts here and there. The plot is draggy and the writing is okay, but I really don't want to watch it. It's boring.

Is it simply relying on heaven, or the heavens, or the worlds, or the film and television heavens?

Wang Qiao? Nothing in the middle? I still need an ax in my hand 😁😁😁

If you learn one or two top kung fu skills, you will be able to fight against all the invincible masters in the world. Some protagonists want to learn everything in time travel and want everything. Why should they learn so much? It is better to just master one or two.

The author wrote about a total of twenty or thirty cavalry Yuan troops. The protagonist met and killed one, seized the horse and killed one, immediately shot away three, dismounted and killed a hundred households, and killed six in total. As a result, the remaining cavalry ran away? Counting at least 20 people, then there are at least 14 Yuan soldiers? Disappeared into thin air? The protagonist caught up with a few Yuan soldiers who ran away and killed two more. Then there was an arrogant Yuan soldier who was killed by the protagonist? Where are they all?                                                                  If you add a sentence in the middle of saying that after killing a hundred households, the morale of the remaining Yuan soldiers collapsed and they dispersed in a hurry, it would make sense. Maybe the author forgot to explain, or maybe some people think I'm being picky, but I think this kind of loophole really affects the perception.

It stands to reason that internal strength should be very precious. It is impossible for someone to train it from the beginning.

He's procrastinating. It's almost 100 chapters and he still hasn't seen the shadow of the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon. It doesn't matter if he learns all 10 palms. It's not fun at all. He's been very toxic recently. He escorted Wu Liupo inexplicably and licked Ji Xiaofu inexplicably.

If we follow the settings of Jin Yong's newly revised version of the century, I think Kunlun Mountain is no longer the first treasure hunting place for time travellers, Peach Blossom Island is 😁. Peach Blossom Island has the Nine Yin Manual, Hong Qigong's exquisite martial arts, and some of Huang Yaoshi's martial arts. Internal and external martial arts are both active 🤓. It is more cost-effective than going to a valley in Kunlun Mountain to find a copy of the Nine Yang Manual in the belly of an ape 🤭

Who is the most beautiful Zhou Zhiruo in your heart?

It is more logical and the life context is reasonable. Seedlings that can be raised

He actually accepted Ding Minjun, which is also very rare among Yitian fans. I don't object to having more female protagonists in the harem, but you have to be picky. You can't accept all the bad things. It will make the protagonist feel like he has never seen a woman in eight lifetimes. For a protagonist who can't see women, no matter how great his skills are, what's the use? A honey trap can kill someone.

It's so funny to practice internal strength right from the beginning Are you literate, do you understand the meaning of martial arts terms in the mind method, can you identify acupoints and pulses, and start practicing? Internal strength, even if it is a well-known and upright sect, Zhongzheng Hepinghe Internal skills, even if they go wrong, will go crazy and your skills will be exhausted. How dare you learn it? Hong Qigong has become a five-level master and has not practiced any internal skills; They all have internal power, but it is mainly generated from the outside in. The method of operating internal power is figured out by themselves.

It's Huntian Kung, not Hunyuan Kung. Please change it, Chapter 86

These two heroines? A self-disfigured, poisonous and salt-free beggar should also eat something good.

I have just finished reading two chapters, and I feel that the conflict in the temple was a bit too cliché, a conflict purely for the sake of conflict, and a conflict between the left and right brains of the first chapter.

If you don't want to conflict with Liu San, then the protagonist won't run away after grabbing food? Are you still staying in the ruined temple?

I don't say anything about the free chapters, but it's a bit too much for the paid chapters to be so watery. We are not fools. Everyone can tell at a glance whether you are good or bad.

The heroine must have a woman in yellow shirt

It's very well written. I'll give you some tickets. Come on.

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