We Are in Yitian, but We Have Traveled Twenty Years Ahead of Time

Emei Kungfu is great! So good! Emei Kung Fu is great! Awesome! I am the Nine Yang Kung, the invincible Nine Yang Kung! You are Emei Palm, I am Emei Palm!

There are three great adventures in Yang Guo's internal power. One is the five-level skill, the other is the cold jade bed in the ancient tomb, and the third is the snake gall in the Xiangyang Sword Tomb. When the snake gall arrives in Xiangyang, it cannot let go of Dugu Qiufei's sharp sword, which is just right for the protagonist. After that, he goes to the ancient tomb to borrow the cold jade bed from Yang Guo's descendants.

If the people from the Ancient Tomb Sect saw this, they would definitely think that their ancestors were resurrected! Will think of Yang Guo's reincarnation!

Moreover, she doesn't even know where Peach Blossom Island is, or the plan to slay the dragon in heaven. It has been revised over and over again. As long as she knows the martial arts of Peach Blossom Island, the Emei Sect's martial arts intentions cannot be so low. Some people have said that the purpose of establishing the sect is It is for the survival of his own Taoist tradition, so he cannot use the martial arts he created to teach. However, it is very funny that Emei's inherited mental method is the incomplete Nine Yang Kung. Since the incomplete Nine Yang Kung can be used to modify the martial arts of Peach Blossom Island for preaching, it is very funny. Why don't you learn some martial arts and create new ones? The result is that the Emei sect has no foundation in Taohua Island martial arts, let alone the Nine Yin Manual. They say that Guo Xiang is talented in martial arts, but if she is talented in martial arts, it is impossible for Huang Rong not to be Through her Jiuyin, even Xiao Wu and Xiao Wu knew the martial arts of Peach Blossom Island and Dragon Subduing. As the "most favored little daughter with a high talent in martial arts", there was no trace of her own martial arts 😎😎 Da Longnu

The more I read, the more boring it becomes. The author still fails to understand that the fun part of this book is the Yang Guo template and the original plot characters. If you ask me, just jump to the timeline instead of writing those meaningless original plots and characters. The writing is average, and what you wrote is not good-looking. I have to write it.

Should we block Zhang Wuji's spring?

Like the title, it's just average. If readers had never eaten fine bran ten years ago, they would have thought your idea was okay. It's a pity that the writing is not top-notch, and the data is generally normal despite the decline of martial arts. . And it's embarrassing if your timeline is not up and down. In the early years, you can touch the tail of the divine eagle, and Guo Xiang is in his prime. In the later years, you can take over Yitian, which is just a wave of love and murder between the six major sects and the Mingjiao. You can't even rebel at this point in time. It's too far away from the collapse of the Yuan Dynasty and the people are in dire straits, and the Tatar army's combat effectiveness is still strong. . You have written 20 or 30 chapters in Emei, which are both detailed and concise. The protagonist is either learning martial arts or on the way to learn martial arts. Before he has mastered it, he has to compete with Kunlun, and he has to go down the mountain to uphold justice and protect his senior sister. Do you really think of yourself as a nuclear-powered donkey? ? And if your martial arts skills are so weak, why are you dancing like this? The elders of Emei are not dead yet, right?

The plot begins with Yu Daiyan being deposed, Zhang Sanfeng's ninetieth birthday, and Zhang Cuishan living on Ice and Fire Island. These things happened within one year. Twenty years before the plot begins, that is when Zhang Sanfeng was seventy years old. Guo Xiang is four years older than Zhang Sanfeng, and would be seventy-four years old at this time (if he is still alive). When Zhang Wuji met Master Miejie in Butterfly Valley, Master Tai was about forty-five years old, that is, when Zhang Sanfeng was one hundred years old, Miexie was forty years old. When the plot started, Miejie was thirty years old, and Master Fengling might still be alive! Twenty years have passed since the plot began, and the extinction has just been ten years old. First of all, Mie Mie had never met Guo Xiang. Mie Mie had been a disciple of Emei for many years and Guo Xiang had died many years ago. Mie Mie had been a disciple of Emei since he was a child. He met his senior brother Gu Hongzi and made a private commitment to him for the rest of his life. Later, when Gu Hongzi died, Mie Mie became a monk. He no longer became a lay disciple and officially became a nun. During this period, Yan Ming must have been in his twenties and was hurt by love. After all, the older he was, he would definitely be married to Gu Hongzi. So the bug is that I didn't see Guo Xiang when I was about 10 years old. Guo Xiang must have been dead for many years. Twenty years before the plot started, I was about ten years old, so Guo Xiang had been dead for many years by this time! ! It is absolutely impossible to teach the protagonist to practice martial arts! !

Yang Guo's template and Guo Xiang's idea was good, but they chose it too late. It would be better to wait until Guo Xiang is about 35 years old, so that she can still be a heroine. Now that Guo Xiang is seventy or eighty years old, it is still too early to be the heroine of Yitian. It's okay to write an original plot, but it's obvious that the author doesn't have the writing style and flavor to write it. Therefore, this book has a good idea, but the timeline is wrong and the writing is terrible, which is a pity.

Look at you! Even though he pretends to be a time traveler, he actually has quite a lot of ambition! You actually want to write about traditional martial arts? The writing is just okay, but the pace is slow and stiff! You can't control the rhythm at all and write wherever you want. The problem is that your strength cannot support your ambition! I recommend you learn to swordsmanship in the Tang Dynasty. The essence of fan fiction is to practice your skills. Don't put yourself on such a high pedestal. The characters you create are too rigid and stereotyped.

Yang Guo's arsenal is like this. He only has the ancient tomb martial arts that the narrator boasted about his Qing Kung, the Quanzhen martial arts that he didn't learn well, a part of the Nine Yin Manual, the toad martial arts, the dog beating stick technique, He Huang Yaoshi seems to have learned a little Peach Blossom Island martial arts, the incomplete Dugu sword technique, and what else. I really don't understand why some people think that Yang Guo's martial arts is better than that of Guo Jing.

There is a question. Twenty years ago in Yitian, Yang Guo was not dead yet. . . How did you decide this time?

What the hell is this woman? Is the author's account sold?

There is an idea. Before Guo Xiang died, Yang Qing said to Guo Xiang, Xiang'er, big brother is here to pick you up🤓🤓🤓

Being several generations shorter for no apparent reason, Guo Xiang's martial arts skills in the later stage are likely to reach first-class level, but probably not to the top level. In terms of martial arts talent and creative ability, Guo Xiang has a little, but not much, and most of the Emei sect actually use swords.

In addition to being handsome, he is handsome. There's no other description, right? There are no other advantages, right?

I'll give you a million rewards... I'm afraid you'll enter the palace

Guo Jing's arsenal is like this. Six monster martial arts, which can be practiced while walking, sitting or lying down. Quanzhen Internal Kung Fu, Jin Yan Gong, Complete Nine Yin, Eighteen Dragon Subduing Palms, Nine Yins plus Subduing Dragon have the best effect. In terms of pureness, Yang Guo has been surpassed by a few streets. Yang Guo is learning the epee from the divine eagle, and it is not unreasonable to eat snake gallbladder before he starts to rise.

As expected, he is still a eunuch.

Is it you, right? It's so hard to guess.

I have never seen martial arts in daily life, eh ~ I saw it today. Is this a martial arts novel fan?

I'm really convinced that a female protagonist appears out of the blue and I can't resist...

Sixteen years old, morning and evening in Xiangyang, sixty years in the north and south. How many times does Spring and Autumn last? The family and the country are in vain, and the clouds on the temples are stained with frost. Fengling Ferry is destined to come and go, Emei's golden peak wipes out Longquan. Trouble never ends. The frost blade in my hands is unyielding.

No, you didn't even send a testimonial when you posted it?

What Yang Guo template, I want to abandon the Emperor of Heaven template.

Is the heroine Ban Shuxian or Miyue or Cheng Kun is the junior sister?