Start with Chrome Dragon

See if I don't scold you to death! But if you write this book seriously and finish it, then you are my brother.

Isn't this just three days after the academy changed the skin to a dragon and engaged in various small groups of campus bullying? There is no description of the fantasy world at all. It is very boring, just like watching children fight 😂

Stop cheating in reverse, okay? The blue dragon is so good-looking, but it turns out that the personal maid took the initiative to betray the benevolent protagonist because of her homosexuality, and colluded with the centaurs to deliver military intelligence. It is simply speechless! ! ! !

Blue Dragon is half finished and the Black Dragon Codex is also unfinished. What are you doing as a writer? You don't even have the most basic ability to finish the book.

What attracts me most about Huansheng's dragon novels is that he writes that dragons are like dragons, not like other dragon novels, where they are just humans wearing dragon skins. This level is the pinnacle of the author's level in "Blue Dragon". What best reflects this is why the protagonist's subordinates are loyal to the protagonist. The red dragon relies on each other's mutual progress in fighting against each other, the black dragon relies on him knowing that following the protagonist can improve himself, and at the same time, in order to repay his kindness, the green dragon tries to conquer by force (or recognizes his strength as his spouse), the blue dragon and the white dragon rely on him to see the potential of the protagonist to help themselves achieve their goals, etc. Dragon nature is evil and greedy. I don't want the supporting characters in this book to be inexplicably loyal to the protagonist. But now these dragons look too human. I don't know if it's because these dragons are young and understand that they are members of the family, so they don't seem to have so many ideas. The most obvious point is that these dragons are too loyal to the group. There are not many dragons who want to leave the family. After all, the dragons think that the boss is the boss and I am the second child. How can they agree that they will be trapped in the family for the rest of their lives. Writing so much is mainly to give the author a reminder.

Wait and see, this b likes eunuchs too much

Will there be another situation like the previous one, Blue Dragon, where maids are given to subordinates, and then there will be situations where the subordinates rape the silver dragon and then offend the golden dragon to advance the plot?

I hope you can finish the book this time. You and that demon monk Hua Wuque are like a pair of smiling tigers and two horned sharks🙂

Let's talk about it, it's a lot better than Blue Dragon. But unfortunately, with this amount of updates and this bad reputation, it's hard to get good grades for the time being.

If the blue dragon was at the starting point... If the author had been more diligent... If the blue dragon hadn't ended unfinished... It was so dangerous that the author almost got mentored by the real dragon. What a risk, it almost made the author a lot of money. What a risk, the author almost became the Twelve Heavenly Kings🙂 As expected, hard work is more important than failure, And choice is more important than hard work hhh

Normally speaking, this is indeed a skewer, but I don't want to be a skewer. I really want to ask, have you ever been a dragon? Just write. Because this one is really different from the Black Dragon one. The human flavor of this book is so strong that even if you remove the word "dragon", it won't feel inconsistent if it is regarded as a family novel. It doesn't mean that the author's writing style cannot be used here to read any type of writing, but mainly because the dragon novel comes in, I am still a little disappointed. This book should not insist on being the same person like the previous one. It is really unreasonable to remain the same person later. Even according to the author's xp heroine, I have already thought about it. Lively and cute luoli elves, even flower fairies, or silver dragons that are many years old for the little protagonist. . . .

I don't know what to say, but let me tell you. The first time I read was the book Alien Beasts. I read it on a pirated website. It left a deep impression on me when I was in junior high school. I read it 4 or 5 times. My eyes suddenly lit up, I discovered DND streaming, and I read it about 2.3 Times. When I looked at the author's name, I realized that there was always laughter and laughter. It felt very magical. The two books I liked very much were both written by this author. As for Blue Dragon, I read Teenage Dream, and I also liked the old flavor, but it was newer. . . I hope the author will work hard and readers will support you. I have been reading your books for seven or eight years. Anyway, I feel that your Black Dragon Codex is the best dragon text I have ever read. So far, there is nothing better than it (I won't read the pirated version this time, after all, I have some spare money)

The author's reputation is so bad that when he goes out to promote your book, most people are scolding him 😰

I feel that the protagonists of the dragon novels written by Huansheng all have the same characteristics, typically high attack, high speed and low defense. But Shillong, I would say too weak is really too weak. That Destiny Alliance is useless, Chun Chun relied on her own efforts. Being beaten by Raton and bullied by Dalong was really frustrating. I'm not saying that, as far as more than 100 chapters are concerned, Chrome Dragon's combat power is really low, but that doesn't mean that its combat power must be very high. The main reason is that it is really aggrieved and incompetent. If it were Caesar, he wouldn't be able to twist off the young green dragon's head on his own at this age, but he should be able to beat him twice. If it were your Uncle Su Kai, he would already be enjoying the meal at this time. Also, shouldn't there be knives behind this so-called destiny inscription? But don't let everyone who joined the alliance die, and then Shillong transforms into the Death Star Plutonium Dragon. That would be really uncomfortable.

Blue Dragon really had his vagina cut off, so sorry...

Under the red dragon, the green dragon is all written by dragons, and there is a blue dragon that they can all learn from. Now on the new fantasy book list is Bengo no Dragon King, which is also based on The Blue Dragon. Lan Long writes so well, do you think eunuchs are just eunuchs?

The author didn't dare to reply. 🤭🤭Hahahahahahahahaha 😁

In fact, I feel that the young dragon period at the beginning of this book is much better than the black dragon. In fact, the part I read over and over again about the Black Dragon Society is the part about the establishment of the empire and the implementation of the Elegy card. I always feel that writing a short story from this relatively low perspective will add some different texture. As I seem to remember now, some of them were very proud of the decks they used. But maybe this evaluation is just because I didn't really re-read it, because the description of the time traveler at the beginning of Black Dragon is indeed relatively lengthy from my current perspective, and even the name change takes a longer number of words.

It's a pity that it was dragged down by the reputation. Otherwise, with this quality, the score should be much higher. The book friends who have written and accumulated in the past will have become gods long ago. At least it will not be worse than the current Red Iron Dragon, but it is also made by myself. Please support the seven monthly tickets first

The black dragon and the blue dragon are both so beautiful, but they still didn't die well. It's a pity. I always thought that you should lead Longwen, but another Longwen author took a corner and overtook me. Make Dragon Great Again

🙂 The same routine as Blue Dragon, so Boy Dream can't make money?

Now I know why I need to set it up a little before I can speak. Look at the pictures and understand for yourself. 666 I have never seen a dragon with such a weak digestion ability. This talent is too powerful

Shillong, the Death Omen Star, the following is from the Black Dragon Codex

The Valley chapter is actually the most relaxed and comfortable chapter. It is very well written. The characteristics of the five races of ferrous dragons are vividly displayed. In addition, various childish games in the young dragon stage are also very interesting. The annual dragon birthday is also well written. The description of Taigo's scale claw naturally shows the full picture of the dragon family. The only dissatisfaction is that the tungsten dragon line seems to have been cut, becoming the only race in ferrous dragons without a representative character. Moreover, Shillong's strength gradually increases in the Valley Chapter. From daily training, meditation, to rising in the rankings of the dragons, and finally leading the dragons to challenge Raton, the whole process gradually establishes bonds, improves strength, and becomes the leader of the young dragons. The process is very interesting. But when it comes to the Mesa Chapter, the look and feel is immediately different. Familiar characters have been split into different locations. Insta, who plays an important role in the second dragon, has almost been eliminated, not to mention the small transparent Spiny Gravel. I don't know the last time this Spinosaurus appeared in the plot. The process of conquering the dependents in the Platform Chapter is not interesting. To sum up, the mountain goblins are conquered first, the bears take the opportunity to launch a sneak attack, the mountain king is dismissed, the dragon is shaken to form a group, and the second and fifth cubs are taken over. The above plot is too boring. Except for highlighting that Tago is a tyrant leader, squeezing his family members to feed the dragons, and further improving Tago's image, there are no fierce conflicts. The same is true for the bear people. After the leader died, the second and fifth boys led the team to surrender. The mountain king, the boss at the end of the level, has no character development. It is a pure mechanical deity. I thought that there would be a classic farming and training dragon lord hoarding resources to develop on the platform, but in the end I didn't go into details about this aspect. I just captured the Youtie, and was imprisoned for another half a year. After I was released from prison, I had to fight. Coming to the war chapter, it was a disaster within a disaster. Except for Zen's change of family, Shillong was the vanguard for almost the entire process. There was no strategy or tactics at all. The green dragon was also unbearable. He didn't use any brains in the whole process, just chopping melons and vegetables and he died. The Blue Dragon side is slightly better, but Yug was too hasty in getting off the line. After all, he had a foreshadowing role. In the end, he didn't even have the will to fight to the death. He died more clown than Bane. The surname Clangmore is still too embarrassing. All of the above are fine. The most unacceptable thing in the war chapter is the sudden death of Gadrosa and Tago. Gadrosa's dissatisfaction is that the reinforcements arrived just after she died. This kind of writing is difficult to hold up. The cheers may be to create a plot in which she is only a little bit able to save her, but it gives people the feeling of being angry. The protagonist group's desperate charge has no effect on the result. If the allies hadn't arrived at the right time, the blue dragon's reinforcements would have been successful. If I were Zain, I would be angry too. This broken family really doesn't want to stay any longer. Every dragon is violating her orders. What I am dissatisfied with about Tagore's death is that there is too little description before his death. As the leader of the Dragon Family, Tago has only appeared in other people's descriptions. From other people's words, I pieced together the whole picture of Tago - his power, his way of ruling, his ideals, and his actions for the revival of the heavy dragon. These foreshadowings are enough. I can even imagine that Tago will usher in the final highlight of the character in his final death, completing the last piece of the puzzle of this wild sun. But the cheers were overwhelming. It was hard to imagine that such an important figure could only exit with a few hundred words. He didn't even say a word before he died. Tiger's exit was not heroic enough, nor majestic enough, had no sense of picture, and could not leave a deep impression. It was not as good as the Blue Dragon Horse King next door's exit. So my impression here is: Valley>Plateau>War, Huansheng should quickly adjust his work and rest, and don't update the underworld time every day.

After all, the writing is there, and combined with the situation of the Blue Dragon and Black Dragon codes, the first 500 pictures are definitely guaranteed. As for whether this can be completed, I can't say. It would be best if it can be completed in one go. If it can't be done, just like the Black Dragon, it can be interrupted for more than half a year and then come back to complete it. After all, in the DND-like dragon text, only the Tang, Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing Dynasties and Huansheng can handle it.

Where did Diao Mao change his work schedule? He said he changed his work schedule. Isn't this an update of the old time? All day long, I know how to find reasons to delay the update. If you like dogs, you will like dogs.

It turns out that two-in-one is just 8 points. Raise a book

To be honest, there is a bit of a problem with these two Yugos. There was so much foreshadowing, but when it comes to the real fight, a timid person will die. It is a bit too hasty, and he was scared when he saw Shillong's eyes with despair. This is too outrageous. I can agree that your bloodline refinement was withdrawn because of your timidity, but I never agree with it. A young dragon leader, a dragon creature, knew that this was a war to exterminate heavy dragons, and even though he fought an ancient race and survived without being reclaimed by his bloodline, he still did not have a reasonable psychological expectation for this war and was therefore unable to face death directly, which led to the subsequent real death. This was too hasty in handling the death of Yog. Oh, ordinary dragons don't have the courage to face death to pass the level. You have laid so much ground for Yug to pass the test. You have already made its status clear, and you can still write it so sloppily. I can only say that it is deus ex machina. The turn of the battle is too outrageous. Obviously, the iron dragon twins in front of it are so responsible (even the little dragon is responsible) ), the color dragon will directly become the roadside, and the dragons with status and talent will be the roadside. Unless you say that all the subsequent blue dragons are this kind of thing, and write Yug's waste as a common problem of this blue dragon family, otherwise it is not clear at all. A genius dragon who can come to the table to discuss matters cannot be a stupid dragon who does not know the dangers of war, right? It's still a stupid dragon that survived in Norton's hands. You can't say that surviving in Norton's hands is also fake. Just a glance from 800 miles away is worth mentioning by those blue dragons alone, right?

The ending of this war was like a historical one. It felt too rushed. Tago was killed by the deus ex machina without even saying a word. The author said that this was a deliberate side description. To be honest, I didn't feel that the description was very good.

Some like the Valley Chapter, and feel that the ethnic background is warm and heartwarming Some don't like the Valley Chapter, and feel that it is too repetitive and boring to watch Some like Zaen entering the harem, thinking that driving a big car is exciting Some don't like Zaen entering the harem, feeling that it is disgusting to accept a child who has given birth to a child and force Shillong to recognize his mother. Some people like the overall outline and feel that the thoughtful writing is good and the emotion is first-rate Some people feel that the outline is no different from Blue Dragon, and feel that the production line is produced by changing the standards.