
I Control a Tokyo Girl and Become the Master of the Secret Sect
我操控东京少女,成为密教之主
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 177k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mystic Fantasy
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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72Chapters
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I don't feel that it has much to do with Tantric Buddhism, and I haven't seen any trace of Tantric Buddhism in it after writing dozens of chapters. It's not so much a secret sect, but it's me being reincarnated back in time and using a game console to control a lost girl, like this. The Renaissance belongs to yes.
Change your name. I must immediately control Tokyo Idol JK Girls and the like. Just add the esoteric elements to the tag. The way you write it, those who come for the esoteric religion will not chase after it. On the contrary, most people who read your book are the audience for romance and light novels. Anyway, that's how it feels to me. So your title should be targeted at this audience.
It's quite interesting, except why doesn't the protagonist buy lottery tickets?
? What does it mean to suddenly finish?
A sudden reaction to complain
Speaking of which, the reason why the immortal in the bookstore erased his memory is really embarrassing. Index, but Index is fake and you are real. Just to respect the setting of never mentioning the name, I made up such a weird reason, and then the protagonist also madly made up a lot of settings based on this bit of information... If you write about the process of reading a lot of books in this bookstore, so you know a lot of things, you won't say anything. But in a confused situation, just like the COC running group successfully passed the inspiration die, kp breathed a sigh of relief and had reason to give out many clues so that the game could continue. You are writing novels, brother, not playing games. The prerequisites have not been met, and the system does not have this function. Everything is known, which is too outrageous. What, is the protagonist some kind of ignorant and detached reality distorter? I think what I think is reality, right?
Change the name. If you can change the cover, use AI to make a customized cover. Otherwise, who can click on it? 🙂 It's actually quite good. This pitiful heroine is like a fragile glass doll.
Keep writing
Speaking of which, I have seen this book many times, but because of the title and reviews, I never added it to my bookshelf and didn't read it. It wasn't until I saw it again today that I clicked in and took a look. I found that it's actually pretty good, with nothing wrong with it, and it's good to read.
In some small places, it feels like a novice author. Overall, it's very good. It's much better than other daily guides. The rhythm and storyline are quite interesting. It's worth watching!
Newcomer? There are a lot of problems. Don't write too much about the character's heart, and don't express emotions. The first is that the reader feels it is watery, and the second is that there is no sense of involvement. What you have to do is to guide rather than force the reader. Narrative is the main structure of the novel.
Where has the Tantric religion gone?
After reading Chapter 40, there is no secret sect. The protagonist is not bold enough in his actions. He is lucky enough to change the world, but he does not have the ability to accurately describe it. If winning in a comic is the same as winning by eating popsicles, then going directly to gambling or the stock market will be the fastest way to make money and quickly get rid of the impending bankruptcy of the original family. Meet the operator, manage your secret sect identity, and finally become the big BOSS behind the scenes. This is a relatively stable route, but it is prone to problems such as losing your life.
Oh my God, is this the end of the book?
Not bad
The story is interesting and the writing is smooth
It looks good but it's too watery. I want to see a girl's counterattack and shock the boss lady.
Come on! Author, stop rushing to the street! ! Although I think it's not well written
Ah, this book reminds me of one I read before. Who wrote it to do it? What's it called? The small world is full of fun. It can be controlled by a game console. Ah? Completed copy unlocked. Engage in spiritual recovery
Haki Orange, finish writing well! Very nice!
Idol girls are really in the game world
It feels like YOASOBI, a cover of Masayuki Suzuki
Chapter 72 completed? This is bad, right?
I lost my investment and got a monthly pass!
It's awesome and it's not even on the shelves, it's not even a V, it's dead.
Keep writing
I quite like it. Don't be a eunuch.