People in Tokyo, Dungeon Ancestors

The author is an old two-dimensional person and smells like a homebody, so I had to read it.

In order to enter the main plot, it is reasonable to advance. Later, the author piles up settings that are not integrated with the plot. Instead, he uses the protagonist's mouth to talk about the plot when it is related to the plot. It is so many and detailed that it is not necessary for the current plot. It is completely incomparable with the accuracy of description of the main plot. It does not feel like telling a story, but like introducing a different world in one's own dreams.

There are so many memes that you're self-pleased. Author, do you want to write a book for ordinary people to read, or are you the one person out of ten who can perfectly understand the memes you write and match your brainwaves?

Lao Tie, your mental state has been getting better and better since you stopped updating the first book for a while. The last few books are too strong. I feel that you can try some subtractions, such as Zhutian or Traditional Unlimited Flow.

Although I don't know what it means

It's weird, I found it interesting to watch, but I couldn't stand it after reading two chapters. I put it away for a few days before I could continue to read it. I soon became interested, but soon found myself unable to read it anymore.

Just four chapters prove that the author is a second-time veteran. These words are too strong. I declare that you are the real two-dimensional person.

From the first chapter, it can be seen that the protagonist is the protagonist of the author's previous book, but it is very unfriendly to new readers who have not read it. It is a mess and has various confusing psychological descriptions, which makes it difficult to read. Discourage, very dissuade readers.

As the title suggests, the protagonist of this novel is a bit of a middle-class character. The author's description of the setting is very detailed, but sometimes it is too detailed, which made my head hurt when I read it. If you can get up to middle school along with me, you may be able to catch the airwaves. If not, you will feel that the description of this book is a bit jumpy and the content is watery.

It's a Tokyo behind-the-scenes novel about me being my own, but the memes are a bit dense. Σ_(꒪ཀ꒪‖∠), If you've run out of memes, what will you use next?

I feel that the thoughts and actions of the protagonist are worthy of the thought attitude and behavior style of a strong man who has entered the fantasy apocalyptic world. It perfectly fits the thousand calamities, and the death of a hundred times is just a passing cloud, just one death.

The story is okay, and the golden finger design is also really good. But the problem is not small. The first is nagging, a mistake that every novice author will make. The setting of the whole story, the nonsense of a large block, the story line can be clearly explained in half a picture. It has to be told in two, three, three or four pictures. The setting mentioned before will be explained again later. The second is that the settings are too complicated. In fact, your two golden finger designs are not very complicated, but the key is that what you wrote is too complicated. Most people come to read novels to relax. Do you expect readers to take the time to carefully read your settings? Just make it easy to understand. The other thing is that you can't even figure out which category you are in. The overall style of writing is light novel, but your content is behind the scenes. The key is that you haven't grasped this degree yet. The content of light novels and behind-the-scenes stories is inherently conflicting. If you don't grasp this balance well, the written content will be completely different.

The dungeon is okay. Use the Iron Throne before the protagonist of the second part sacrifices. You can sacrifice five people and it will be delicious. If you use the demigod body to enter the dungeon, you will directly elbow the ancestor to seize the god's heart.

After looking at past works, I have already cut three copies.

I saw Chapter 11, Kamito desuwa The beginning has a lot of missing settings, and there are a lot of things I haven't seen yet, but the plot is very interesting and awesome, and it looks okay. That's it I'm going to God

I don't know how to cut this episode. I was so scared when I was a kid watching this episode.

I don't dare to laugh. My family is really in decline and I have already started to ride in the carriage. Let me reiterate that I am not tortured because of the continuous emptying of heroes.

Beautiful😋Why are there so few posts and I almost missed it

Qidian reminded me today, and I realized that the number of words should be enough.

It's one of those rare books that I like very much but can't understand at all. It feels like it has a lot of jokes but I don't know what it's talking about. It's obviously not what it should be like.

It's not like you were out there fighting wits with the air and creating it out of your fantasy. It didn't exist in the first place. It was all about spreading prophecies and imaginings that turned false into true (｀Δ´)!

I didn't see the latest chapter. Is there a ccb? I saw the reply! I don't want to watch a cigarette-smelling male protagonist, that kind of male protagonist is too disgusting

After the new chapter is released every Tuesday, click to the last chapter, crab crab crab crab, that is, after the new chapter is released tomorrow night, I need to recommend it on the pk for follow-up reading on Tuesday. I don't want to run naked.

Chapter 2 gave me a headache, especially the dozens of chapters about the Holy Grail War. The author wrote too much and too densely. But Chapter 3 is much better and worth recommending

The author sews a lot of things, but it doesn't matter if it's too much. However, there is no explanation at all, as if it is assumed that the readers already know these jokes. Then it started too slowly. In the first 20 chapters plus the protagonist, there were four core characters, and then I kept going around in the settings without any specific progress.

The good grass is pretty good so far. Come on, author, don't be too eunuch again.

I can't understand, Japanese, English, magical girls, and fire swords? ? ? ?

If there is God, then it's even more doomed. What kind of things he does are in line with God's mood 😏

I sewed too fast, I was afraid I wouldn't be able to grasp it later.

Shennong: "It is recommended to skip the first chapter and start reading from the second chapter."