Super Monsters in Douluo Continent

The writing is quite good. All the characters are normal people and have their own reasonable explanations. Even those who appear only once will be shaped as much as possible, and the plots are interlocking.

The characters are relatively normal, but the plot is bland. If there is no writing conflict, just increase the update speed.

After meeting Tang San, the protagonist seems to have changed. And it just kept starting to get deflated. Depending on the situation, if most people didn't like this character, the protagonist would have started licking it.

As long as the author writes quickly, the flaws can be covered up.

The author strongly recommends deleting Zhu Zhuqing's paragraph or changing it, really.

The protagonist is too normal. Although this is in line with the logic of the novel, it does not conform to the logic of Douluo Dalu🙂. Because it is too normal, it makes this Douluo novel less authentic🙂

The author can do it, come on, come on

It's well written, I've finished reading it. The protagonist is a normal person. He doesn't start out with bitter hatred and deep hatred. He and Ye Lingling also know each other and fall in love normally. Getting acquainted with Zhu Zhuqing is no longer a cookie-cutter pursuit and rescue. There is no red eyes and panting like an ox.

I've read everything so far. It's a typical novice novel. The character construction is okay, but there are still some plot aspects that are quite inconsistent and need to be dealt with. The ups and downs of the plot are not big, and there are no high points. His cultivation speed is average. He can only be said to be a genius among the indigenous people. He lacks the speed that the fourth natural disaster should have. In terms of combat power, there is currently no great performance that cannot be evaluated. I can only say that I barely read it twice when I am short of books.

Is this a hand slip to send all the inventory?

What's going on with this update?

What's going on, everything is free?

No big problem, but the plot is a bit bland

I think the most important thing is to delete the plot of the auxiliary system versus other systems. If you don't have the bloodline, you can use your head to fight other systems.

The beginning of the ancient times is like seeing a savage

I suggest you delete or reconstruct Zhu Zhuqing's section. It feels like a sudden seizure.

Pretty good, why are there so few people here?

Finally found something to watch. You don't want to blackmail Tang San for no reason, just for the sake of being black. Many authors are slandering Tang San just to slander Tang San. I really can't stand it anymore.