The End of This Ascension Realm Is Approaching

Stallion? Are you showing off? Are there many bees?

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Overall, I personally think it is a good grass. First let me talk about what I think is the most important point: the early stage of the game has a strong sense of literary youth (which is also the main reason for dissuading some people), and in the middle stage it gradually becomes lighter, and in the later stage there is basically no particularly obvious sense of literary youth. It can be seen that it was written by the same person before and after, and the overall style has not changed much, but the author's writing style is gradually improving, there is no doubt about it. Secondly, about the rhythm at the end. It can be seen that a considerable part of the branch plots and daily routines have been abandoned, but ignoring the problem that the last ten chapters only have the main plot, the previous rhythm is well controlled. (Also: When I was watching it, I always thought that the ghost city was just a small dungeon in the early stage, but I didn't expect that it was directly related to the penultimate boss... I was still wondering why this part of the plot kept being delayed. It turned out to be a special arrangement) (Also: The final Hedao turned out to be a key plot point, but I feel that the explanation of Yao Wang's final Hedao choice was not so obvious, and I feel that this hole was filled in a bit hastily) Third, about Yao Wang's character design. To sum it up in a few words, they are probably: banditry (likes to "become alms"), decisive in killing, retributive, and clear about love and hate... He is extremely protective of the companions he recognizes, and there is also a ruthlessness that cannot be ignored throughout the character's image. In general, this book is actually very well written and worth reading (of course, you should ignore the content of this chapter as it will affect your mood)

In fact, if it is really the time traveler's mentality that he has just traveled through, coupled with top-notch martial arts and 300 years of hard training before his death, he should be acting crazy, completely desperate and turning into a madman to kill.

To be honest, if you all become immortals, you will all be from the motherland. Anyway, I can't become the protagonist. I will live for more than thirty years and I won't have enough to eat, drink and have fun. The protagonist is awesome. He can become an immortal through his clothes and his thoughts can also become an immortal.

You brought me to the Internet literary circle. Have you ever thought about watching me write a book!? Do you know how I am bullied here? Just because I have no talent and do not understand the market. They all laughed at me! My favorite! I can't write a book while riding a horse! I'm scared. I am afraid that readers will scold me every day. I'm afraid that one day they won't read my books! You are amazing! What a broken place, broken place, broken place! ? I just want to reach the top step by step, step by step! I want to stand at the top of the Internet literary world! ! ! ! !

In the end, the protagonist transforms into the giant shark king and starts killing, or just like a maggot The protagonist goes through a process. Or just open it In the early stage, pretend to be infected with a disease that is not painful or itchy, in the mid stage, you will suffer from a deflated belly and go to hell, in the later stage, you will kneel on the ground and beg your opponent to get sick, and finally die like 🤡

I look forward to turning into the giant shark king Kou Ya in chapter 100, killing, killing, killing. Although I feel that the author will support dozens of chapters to slaughter the world, now it seems that it is okay, keep the knife.

The protagonist is too kind, even too kind

Is there a Shen Nong? How about this book?

To be honest, you can directly expose the fact that you can't survive the next thunder tribulation (I'm about to die, don't force me!), So that both the same level and other transcendent forces will be afraid (fear of death), so that you can do social experiments (do whatever you want). The above speculation is based on Lu Xun's roof-lifting theory.

I don't have much to say after reading it. It's too little. Go away and eat ashes on the bookshelf. I'll read it if I survive 550,000 words. If I don't survive, I won't be able to take advantage of the enemy.

Thank you for adding a bookshelf. It's important to read new books, so I'm sorry to bother you. Updated every day from 18-21 o'clock. ———————— Reply to two questions uniformly. 1. Does it suppress combat power? Answer: No, and I will not engage in plots where I am forced to pretend to be a pig and eat a tiger in order to hide my clumsiness. 2. Does the protagonist kill indiscriminately? Answer: The protagonist's personality is Chen Guilin from "Zhou Chu Eliminates Three Evils", so he will kill everyone who should be killed and will not let anyone go, but the good guy protagonist who should not be killed will not kill indiscriminately. Some people want to see the massacre of people. This kind of inhumane plot will not be included in this book, and they dare not write it. Such articles will be blocked.

You, the protagonist, entered the world feeling that there was no hope of surviving the next disaster, so you chose to enjoy your last moments. Wander around the world and observe the world, and just fully appreciate the last time during this last period. Although I know you want to find a theme for the protagonist or the story, this so-called search for meaningful things is really nonsense. As a master of cultivation who has less than a hundred years to live, is there anything more meaningful than surviving the next thunderstorm? You are a stranger to the whole world after traveling through time. If the next meaningful thing is to correct the path of justice, punish rape and eradicate evil. . . That's true. . (Hope not) I didn't read the post of your introduction about "Looking for Meaningful Things" before. As a result, when I saw the monk's death, I had a conversation with the protagonist about "Looking for Meaningful Things" which was very embarrassing. I hope that the meaningful things you find for the protagonist later are very reasonable, otherwise it will become more and more inconsistent with the protagonist's setting. Come on

Wouldn't it be possible to become famous all over the world just by beating up the person who announced the results? Do you still need to pick up the list?

Fast forward directly to: Come, come, come, come - all despicable things and inferior creatures will die under my god-breaking thunderbolt.

If you like the fairy flavor, you can use it as fairy grass. I think it is Liang Cao+ at the moment. What I want to watch the most is the sentence in the introduction, "The time is about the same." This kind of plot. At present, in the twenty chapters, it seems that the author wants to write about the transformation of the character's personality, similar to Chen Guilin's. So I am looking forward to the plot of the killing mode. Judging from the foreshadowing, it should be soon. If you like it, this is the fairy grass for me. Summary: The current plot is not toxic, and the writing is really strong. At least more than 70% of the authors are worried about whether they can control it. Invincible is not easy to write.

Brothers who are cultivating immortals, let me tell you good news and bad news! Good news, I am going to transcend the tribulation and ascend! ! Hahaha, what about the bad news? I can't survive the thunder tribulation, hahaha.

Recommended for new readers who like classical pretense and immortality.

Cultivation is a kind of evolution. The gap between advanced evolvers and ordinary people is the same as that between ordinary people and mayfly creatures. How could a normal person go to an ant nest every day to get a can of boiling water?

No? The protagonist has to languish in the underworld and wait for the country's capital to be destroyed before taking action? What's the protagonist's reason for not taking action? Too lazy to save Fufeng Country? Even if there is no relationship at all, it is purely calculated based on interests. Fufeng is besieged by the world because of its support for the protagonist. Not to mention that the protagonist does not owe Fufeng Country a mutual benefit transaction. What Fufeng does is essentially to pay homage to the dock. It is now a subject country of the protagonist. If you say it is a small trouble, it must be solved by itself. But now it is a big trouble, or it was caused by the protagonist (Yue's appearance also caused the Ning family to further increase their stakes, which is equivalent to solving a small trouble and causing a big one). Why doesn't the protagonist take action against the big trouble that Fufeng Country cannot solve? The current situation in Fufeng Country is essentially that other countries think that the protagonist is dead (disappeared from both lists), and the Holy Land issues an order. The solution is very simple, just prove to them that the protagonist is not dead, but just improves his strength somewhere. Due to the Holy Land, they will definitely not retreat directly, but they will definitely slow down the offensive. Coupled with the threat of the protagonist, it is enough to drag the battle until the protagonist comes back. And what is the protagonist doing now? Put Yue back, simply declare that he is not dead, and then give Kou a message. First of all, it was an obvious mistake to let Yue come back. In the eyes of the Ning family, Yue, who had killed his whole family, suddenly resurrected and was accepted as a disciple by the protagonist. Now something happened to the great leader and he cannot come back. Isn't this clearly forcing the Ning family to take action? Yue and the Ning family have a life-and-death feud, and it is impossible to reconcile. In addition, Yue suddenly hugs his thigh, and now is the only chance to kill Yue from the perspective of the Ning family (killing the whole family is not the same as killing the disciples. From the Ning family's perspective, Yue must kill and if he doesn't kill Yue Tie will definitely be killed. As for the protagonist who will be angry if he kills Yue, anger is better than Yue blowing off the pillow, and he can always struggle). This means that the Ning family will definitely increase their efforts to attack with all their strength. Secondly, simply announcing is useless, you have to make others believe it. I believe you are just taking it somewhere and will return soon without losing any strength. So the protagonist should prove two things. 1. He is still alive. 2 Is that his strength is useless. Finally, it is not difficult for the protagonist to do this. He only needs to choose a suitable country, cast a spell in the capital, and at the same time announce that if another country attacks, he will end up with this country. Other countries will naturally believe that the protagonist is not dead, and at the same time slow down the offensive out of fear. As for how to release spells in the capital, it's okay to seal the spells on a ghost and have Qilin take them back? Not to mention that the protagonist can't kill, he has just learned the formation, and the Daishan God is still on the side. They are in the same camp now. There is no way that even the Daishan God can't do it, then he will really live to his old age.

A little too literary but okay

Including some famous books, the explanations of many concepts are very different from common sense. For example, if many online writers want to emphasize their materialism and express their criticism of religion and traditional mythology, they might as well write about realistic themes. It seems awkward to write myths to counter myths. If you make the characters called gods behave like monsters, why not just write ghost stories?

Don't listen to the opinions of readers. Come here because of the reputation. People say that this author is the most classic case of listening to the readers' words, which caused a promising book to immediately become popular.

The first half is quite interesting But in the second half, the protagonist still hasn't found his own meaning... Is this another kind of deviation from his original intention?

Overall, it was okay. Later on, I felt that the author was a little unsure. Blindly letting the protagonist squirm makes the readers' threshold for pleasure a bit high. The temptation to engage in a sadistic plot is suppressed at first, but they don't think about how to make up for it in the future to make readers come back. In addition, although there were many strong players on the scene in the later stage, few could withstand a slap from the protagonist. The failure to improve their records and KD caused these so-called strong players to look weak, and the excitement was diluted again. In fact, you can write more about the experience of the mortal world. After all, we are all ordinary people, and there are many trivial things in life. Even writing a vulgar plot about hiding in the city and pretending to be a slap in the face of a mentally retarded villain can still arouse some resonance I don't think there is anything wrong with the outline, but I think the handling of some contradictions is a bit stiff. The same goes for character creation. Among the three female characters with more roles, Shen Ling and Feng Huanchao are NPCs who simply show up and look familiar. Fang Youqing (I don't know if she is Qing or Wei now) is actually the best character created, at least she has a basic personality. The male character Hu Wei's portrayal is pretty good, and the others are all NPCs. Although it is normal for supporting characters to be marginalized and NPCs later in the online novel, at least the basic characters should be established before becoming NPCs.                                                                                             I was very comfortable watching it, I had a great time watching the plot of walking around and watching the world while pretending to be slapping people in the face. In the later period, after I went to the underworld, I couldn't stand it anymore, but fortunately, in the end, I filled in all the holes that needed to be filled, and it can be considered a complete ending.

Suddenly I saw that the investment was completed, it was completed so quickly

🤓 To be honest, this should be the author's first book. It should be considered a good achievement to achieve this result, but the completion is a bit hasty and the ending seems a bit sloppy. To be honest, I am very optimistic about the author's potential and will publish a new book soon!

After watching more than 30 photos of Suppression of a City, I still feel uncomfortable about why my hips are stretched so far.

Good friend, when will you publish a new book?