Xiaoao Started from Being Exterminated by Songshan

The whole family is almost wiped out. No one from the Five Mountains Sword Sect is here?

I have resources, I have talent, I have secrets, but I just can't settle down enough to practice hard, and I don't have any golden fingers. I just want to go out and have fun. I can't understand. I'm just crazy.

It doesn't reflect the style of the Demon Cult at all! Even the righteous path is full of conspiracies and conspiracies, but the Demonic Cult actually feels like the sun is shining brightly!

I can't figure out what the author was thinking specifically, and the more I read, the more boring it becomes.

It was so amazing in the early stages, but since the apprenticeship started, I couldn't understand the plot. It didn't fit the character.

The writing is very good, but the progress is too slow. There are too many patient people now, and there is too much ink on Songshan Mountain. It just seems like the plot is progressing.

There is a problem with the author's pacing. He gave the protagonist Ren Yingying the golden opportunity to be a master, and also gave the protagonist talent skills. The readers complained that the protagonist's resources and martial arts talents were not lacking, but he wasted no time in developing them first, but wasted them everywhere. The author was too open-minded about the protagonist and did not want the protagonist to achieve success in one step, so he arranged for the protagonist to wander around, which would be contrary to the rules.

Please don't go to the Zhongnan Mountain Tomb Sect to find the Nine Yin Manual and other martial arts nonsense. We believe the author can come up with new ideas!

There are so many Swordsman fans who take the Huashan Line and the Demon Sect Line that I'm tired of seeing them. It's not as interesting as taking the Songshan Line to win Zuo Lengchan's bird position.

The first part was well written, but after finishing Escape from Songshan, it became more and more sluggish. It was a no-brainer to suppress the protagonist's combat power. Linghu Chong, a loser who had lost all his internal strength, could fight against the Thirteen Taibao more than ten years later with the Dugu Nine Swords. Nowadays, a protagonist has top-notch swordsmanship, inner strength, mental skills, talent, and talent. How did you write it? You can't fight, you can't practice gong

Internal strength is internal strength, why do we use the word internal energy? Forgive me for being uneducated. I get into trouble every time I see these two words.

The protagonist's current level is only as high as Linghu Chong, a second-rate goalkeeper. Now there is even a Hall Master named Qu Yang. A Hall Master of Qu Yang's caliber is a piece of shit?

I can't write anymore without water, it's already very broken

It is a rare good book among recent Xiaoao books, or among martial arts fans. But the difficulty of Xiaoao is that without heel, it is more difficult to learn martial arts. There are many magical skills in it, but they are all famous, and it is difficult to teach them. The only wild one is the sword manual to ward off evil spirits. There are many good martial arts masters in other martial arts, but the methods are not passed down to others, and the sectarian opinions are very strong. It is difficult to practice martial arts well.

What kind of stories were written after escaping from Songshan? They start fighting out of nowhere, make excuses, and run around forcibly to make the plot watery. Speechless

Okay, okay, this Swordsman has been tricked by the big guys! First there was "Sword Leaving Hengshan", and then there was "The Family Was Destroyed by Songshan" This is too martial arts! ! ! Isn't this really Su Ye's trumpet? This book must be a hit! Must be on the list! Otherwise I'm sorry to the readers!

The foreshadowing is a little too procrastinating. If I keep writing like this, I will suffer.

The author's writing is good and has a martial arts flavor. 🙂

Top-notch, just a little less. Come on, write about it like a sword out of Hengshan, and earn more than working 😁

11 Monthly votes have been cast. This book is very strong.

Except for the slight flaws in the handling of the emotional line, this book is top-notch in terms of wording, sentence construction, plot design, etc., And it is highly motivated. Many of the plots and dialogues are enjoyable to read, and the writing has a martial arts feel, rather than the current fan fiction that can only be regarded as a martial arts novel. The only regret is that the handling of the emotional lines is not straightforward enough. It is both necessary and necessary, and some are collected for the sake of collection. The feelings are treated back and forth, which is detrimental to the chivalry. Overall, the flaws outweigh the flaws. In my humble opinion, it is a bit better than "Sword Out of Hengshan" which became popular some time ago, not to mention the rest.

I read it on QQ. I didn't expect that the ending would come so quickly. From the beginning of the ancient tomb, I felt that the plot was about to end because the combat power was about to collapse, but I didn't expect it to be so fast. When did the author practice the Sunflower Book?

I now reserve all the monthly tickets for you and the first affectionate relationship with Gulong next door 🙂 Your protagonist is the elder in yellow of the Sun Moon God Sect, and the protagonist of the senior next door is the senior brother of the Hengshan sect You write so well, why don't you recommend it! I hope the starting point has some B numbers to make you popular!

Great book! Come on👏

It's too fast, it's too fast, it's like practicing the evil sword.

Actually, it's over 😆

The author's martial arts writing is very strong, and it's much better than the previous one.

What is this chapter about? The sword energy of Zhu Xian is written in average, it would be more appropriate to write it as a fist.

If you don't update, someone will mess with you.

I thought I had to defeat the bosses one by one, like Zuo Lengchan, Yue Buqun, Let Me Do It, Dongfang Bubai, but in the end, I killed all the bosses in a few chapters, but it was also very good, it didn't drag out, the pace was fast, it was very exciting and enjoyable! ! ! I really have no money, otherwise I would really join the Silver Alliance 😍