Douluo: Peerless Ling Guang

To be honest, I don't know who the protagonist is these days. In my opinion, the biggest poisonous point in the novel is the flow of clones, and this clone has recently become much larger than the protagonist. Slipping away.

A story about Zhou Yi can fill nearly ten chapters, so I'll give you some water.

Before I made the clone, the writing was quite good, with a good degree of relaxation. Although it still has the old problem of focusing on picking up and putting down lightly, it is much better than the author's previous works. As for Huo Yuhao, I actually think it would be good to directly train him into a "roaring dog". Although Huo Yuhao in the middle and later stages of the original work is really unbearable, the early Huo Yuhao can be considered a good child. It can only be said that he was really ruined by education (except for Lao Yi, there is no moral teacher, let alone Tang San who is doing evil behind his back). The problem is that when it comes to creating clones, can't you just make the whole alien body concentric? Unless the clone has an independent personality, the body is still that of an evil soul master. Is it necessary? It is said that Minghui will not be given a harem. The problem is that the main reason for not adding a harem is to prevent wasting too much space on the harem and affecting the overall rhythm. You have given so much space to the clones, and the rhythm is almost distorted to grandma's house. It also emphasizes the distinction of independent personalities. This is a bit disgusting. It was originally a good work, considered the author's pinnacle work, but it suddenly fell apart.

Actually, I think it's thanks to the fact that the speed of time in the God Realm is different from that of Douluo. Otherwise, wouldn't Ning Rongrong and the others have gone crazy? After all, there is no realm. Only cultivation cannot control immortality. There is only an immortal body, but no immortal mind.

The first book knocked down Douluo: Good The second book was struck by lightning at the beginning: Excellent, food and grass! The beginning of the third book was stolen by Tang San: Good (it was excellent in the early stage, and it would have been a decent ending after becoming a god in the later stage, but in the end, there was nothing to write, and it felt like cutting leeks. Overall good) The fourth book was a waste of the author's accumulated popularity! Comprehensive evaluation: You don't need to write it! Get a new book!

I have subscribed to all the books of Chili Pepper, but I really can't subscribe to the fourth one. Whitewashing Xuanzi, trampling on Yan Shaozhe, and going to the sun and moon to play with the girl's feelings with his clones and working as a nanny for Huo Gou. You should continue writing Dou Yi. You are really not suitable to write the series after Dou II.

Don't encourage others to do good unless they have suffered. If you suffer from me, you may not be good to me.

Why are you watching Dou Er? Collect the harem and rebel against Tang San. It turns out that this book has fewer wives than his previous books. Is that true? I felt quite frustrated watching it, especially the part about the Valley of Questions. I couldn't stand it and skipped it. After watching the ending, I was done with it, so the ending part was more enjoyable. I killed and resurrected and continued to kill.

I can only say that I admire the author for daring to write a clone flow 🙂

The last few chapters can't even be called garbage. What a clone flow. It's disgusting.

Huo Yuhao: Look, this is how I use it!

? ? ? A sudden poisoning, a conscious clone? Still inherit your own memory? ? Even if you jump to write, I still feel like I'm being fed💩

It feels okay at the front, but becomes more and more like a lump at the back.

Obviously, after the doppelgänger plot, the pace has obviously become faster. The important process of obtaining the main spirit's second spirit and seventh spirit ring is directly explained in one stroke, which is outrageous! There are more descriptions for the clones than for the protagonist, and the writing and plot are not as good as before the plot of the clones came out in this book. And looking at it now, we still don't know what the protagonist's final plan is for the Four Kingdoms, and it doesn't give readers any sense of expectation.

. . . The plot is too bland, just like a running account, practicing this today, practicing that tomorrow, the woman is blushing but there is no move, and the fusion of Zhang Lexuan's martial arts has not solved the problem of Beibei in her heart, you are,,,, alas, there is nothing to say.

The recent plot is a bit boring. I recently watched the updated version and I can't understand it. The sense of fragmentation is serious, the plot is bland, and there are also clones. I hope this plot will end soon.

It's too watery and I can't stand it 😅

It's so bland, I'm tired of writing about these women.

These families are really not as good as the Bluesilver Grass Orphans who stirred up Tang San.

Among the author's books, I still like the one about Blue Silver Grass the most. The protagonist doesn't have too many tricks. Everything is done by using the information gap to fight for his life. It is unique among Douluo fans who generally cheat. But at the beginning of this book, the protagonist is given a coaxing martial spirit, which makes everyone lose sight of him.

Not finished yet? Seriously, Chili, you're getting more and more disgusting.

Summary of Douluo Dalu: Dou Yi (Tang San's internal record), Dou II (Tang San's dog training record), Dou San (Tang San's release of grandparents and escort of male homosexuals), Dou Si (Tang San's ungrateful record), Dou Wu (seize the house!)

The plot after the clone is not very good

I feel like Huo Yuhao won't look good after he comes out

It's a bit hard to comment. I'll tell you a few little things later. How can I tell 78 photos about the martial soul fusion with Zhang Lexuan? The quality of Scallion has declined since it was put on the shelves. It's also very poor 😥

Du Er is difficult to write. If you can't avoid the plot in the early stage, you can write a few more scenes in order to promote the subsequent plot. Things like competitions can be dealt with in one go. They can be more compact and not so procrastinating.

Will the next book be a genius or a waste 🙂

I don't know why, I just don't like these princesses and princes characters in Douluo fanfics. In my opinion, they are just a bunch of remnants of old-era aristocrats who grew up in a country sucking the blood of civilian soul masters I have read a comment before that these princes and princesses are actually just a little noble with a name🐔They are just grandma ducks. If they are placed in a communist society or a federal system, their true identity will be revealed and they are nameless.

Too watery, talkative? Cultivation does not mean writing, but the mouth keeps outputting.

I think the writing is okay, but the plot needs to be accelerated.