Heir of All Mankind

Nowadays, the rules of the book review area are corrupt and traitors are everywhere. This is due to the lack of updates. If the author diligently updates ten thousand words every day, then the traitors will be afraid and retreat, and the moral gentlemen will rejoice. This is a feat worthy of praise by Yao and Shun. I heard that calves born in sheep pens will not behave like sheep when they grow up. You are at the starting point and your computer keyboard is often used, but you have lost interest in updating it. Is this reasonable? The reason why Qidian is strong is that we have inherited the etiquette and skills of our ancestors. Stop bursting, the pressure has nowhere to release, and instead you become tired. Isn't this the same as abandoning the roots of the tree and pursuing the treetops? If this continues, great disaster will surely happen! The reason why Bai Jin can earn tens of thousands of royalties and not be harmed by villains is precisely because they are willing to listen to what upright gentlemen have to say! But Pujie cannot get royalties, and is even looked down upon by his girlfriend. This is because they are close to evil villains. I hope you can think carefully about the difference. There is one thing for which the author can cry bitterly, and six things for which the author can sigh. Since ancient times, when performing actions, the words are often very passionate. If they are not passionate, they will not be able to move the actor's heart. Harsh words are akin to slander. Author, you should think carefully about whether such a thing is right or wrong. Those authors who updated less, delayed, or missed updates had no time to feel sad about themselves, so they were drowned in the torrent of works, leaving only later authors to feel sad about them; later authors felt sad and did not learn from it, and future authors felt sad about it!

So far, overall so good. The logical narrative is also ok, from the initial stronghold, to the small town, to the royal capital, everything is good, and there are not too many idiotic plots. . Although it's a bit stiff to put together. Let me focus on a few shortcomings here. 1. Pandora came out too early. As a result, I had to use the name of cultivating the protagonist's growth to deceive, but in fact I didn't see how much the protagonist had improved in these hundred chapters. His connections were burned down, and his combat effectiveness was gone, so he made some money and got a bracelet. And overall performance, Pandora does not appear very smart, more like a tool to publish the main line. I think that in the future, you should not use the pretense of cheating and exercising, as it will affect the perception. At present, Pandora cannot be sealed, so we should find a way to fix a few more problems and create some branch plots to let Pandora play a role. At the same time, we can also polish the protagonist and enrich the world view. Don't get involved in such a mess too early. I don't know, I thought the finale was about to come. 2. The emotional line is as bad as ever. Not every work must have a female protagonist, especially this kind of work. When I was writing about this female knight, I felt very alienated. At first I thought this sister was just a guide, and after leading the princess, everything would be fine. As a result, he appeared in many places where she was not required to appear, and it was as if she was controlled by Yuri. She was once a brainless princess, but later became a brainless hero. Why don't the other four pillars lick the male protagonist? Just because he saved his life, he could quit the company where his family has worked for hundreds of years? Illogical. But there aren't many scenes in this section, so it's still acceptable. But why did he end up becoming a knight for the male protagonist? So many of the previous scenes were given to the princess, but the dungeon here was gone as soon as it was over? This is the kind of person who comes here to give people hope, and then makes others despair. Nothing is done before and after you, and you make a mess. And it is equivalent to getting 0 income from this copy except for the main props. You should at least tell the princess that you are fine and have other things to attend to, and ask her to take care of the country and wait for you to come back, and hide the news about you. This can at least show that this copy has a potential ally, and it is also worthy of the princess who has spent several chapters describing it. And the princess is definitely acceptable. In the follow-up, either don't adjust the emotional line, position the knight as a tool man, and don't give too much psychological description, or go back to the princess' emotional line, ride on this mountain, and plan the subsequent actions. 3. If you can't write hard science fiction, don't try too much to describe the principles. In fact, there are many things that violate the principles of science and technology. It's not that everyone can't see it, but it's because the plot is smooth and everyone is unwilling to delve into it. Like the concept of psychic energy, when the protagonist faced Mars, he relied solely on the bones of the previous people to help him. As a result, Pandora couldn't explain it and pinned the protagonist's life and death on miracles. I don't think this guy cares about the protagonist's life or death that much. There are also powerful psychic powers and the combat power has exceeded the standard and will never come back. Originally, this kind of thing should weaken the sense of existence as much as possible. To me, the sci-fi sense of the entire wasteland world has been completely destroyed. I don't have much desire to read anymore. The high opened and the low went. I estimate that I will pay attention to it for about ten more chapters. If the problems of Pandora's uselessness, princess love, and the collapse of science fiction combat power cannot be solved within ten chapters, I will stop reading.

It is somewhat similar to the world view of Warhammer 40k. The only golden finger of the protagonist is the high-tech legacy left by his predecessor and the genes of being a pure-blood human. What is a little frustrating is that the protagonist has no power to restrain the chicken, and will most likely be grafted with spirituality and psychic abilities in the later stage. But now he is a typical Tang Seng. To be honest, it is a bit unreasonable that technology is so advanced that it has not been cyberized. The energy that destroyed the continent was made into necklaces, and there were humanoids engineered by gene editing. This technology is incomprehensible without mechanical ascension, but it is difficult to understand when it comes to genes. If it is an abandoned planetary testing ground, it is okay, but if it is the kind of pan-universe human extinction, it is completely unreasonable. Unless it's a fantasy-level subspace curse. The whole structure is not so rigorous, there are many pitfalls, and there are many poisonous points. The most important thing is that the protagonist is weak. It's a bit of a slow-moving article. If the updates are good, you can continue to pay attention.

What a waste of such a good subject!

A truly high-end AI should detect the protagonist's existence through satellite, radar, and the Internet as soon as he arrives, and send a drone to pick him up. Not to mention future technology, the current world's technology can almost do this, and the protagonist will not be reduced to the current situation, and he has to fool these genetically modified people.

After reading this book, the biggest problem the author has is that he can regard embarrassing and pretentious things as great writing. For example, a hero said a few pretentious revolutionary words about celebrities and thought that he was a revolutionary pioneer and could enjoy the fruits of a revolutionist's victory and be admired by others. The writing method led to many plots, villains, and high-ranking bosses who were very unqualified and made dumplings out of jealousy. If the author likes to write pretentious articles, I recommend reading All Quiet in Peking to see how the characters and events develop logically.

The subject matter is creative and the writing is okay. It's just that the writing style is too poor and the progress is too slow. There are too many cliché pretense slaps in the face, which slows down the pace. As the last pure-blooded human being, be it a machine or a spirit, wouldn't it be a good idea to lead the universe in ascension? Trapped in a remote area of ​​​​the planet's surface, the cliche pretense of slapping and kicking a wild dog to death is too stingy. In a world with mature AI technology and psychic powers, the map shouldn't be so small. For more than fifty chapters, I am still trapped in such a small border town. When will I be able to escape from this small planet? P Club players just feel bored, fast forward to the old experience to control AI, keep their hearts sacred to things, clean up the world, and recreate the world. What I want to see is the stars and rivers bleeding and the universe burning! ! !

Good news: It's not ai according to the writing style Bad news: It's not as good as ai

When I saw Chapter 24, I just wanted to skip and read the rest. It was all about the protagonist pretending to be pretentious. The protagonist has no confidence. If he doesn't do it, he will die. But as an author, you cannot make your readers feel unconfident. In the entire 24 chapters, you didn't give readers any information about this world. What does it mean to exceed the limit by 30%? Don't take unwritten information as foreshadowing, that's not the mystery, that's the Riddler. No sense of expectation at all!

At first glance, I feel like I have been a human being The writing is very good, and at first glance, I feel like I have been a human being. The writing is extremely real and completely fits my personal experience. My memory was blurry and chaotic in the past, but now when I think back on all the dusty past, I am filled with countless sadness and helplessness. I worked hard to accumulate bonds all the way, and survived to the 200th level. I thought there was still hope for the future, but in the end I suddenly realized that I had been trapped in a cage, completely trapped in this world, with no chance to escape, completely unable to get out, all escape routes were cut off, everything was completely too late... Loli Island echoed in my heart over and over again, becoming a lingering nightmare. I hate that cunning old guy, why did he go to such great lengths to fabricate lies to deceive me😭👊🏻Why on earth did he have to be so cruel! 😭I have never met him. We have no grievances in the past and no enmity in the recent times. We are just strangers who met by chance. Why would he harbor such mean and heavy malice towards me and push me into the abyss! 😭😭My heart is filled with endless regret, and all kinds of unwillingness well up in my heart. Why was it that I was the one who suffered so much when I encountered such a scam? Why can't this misfortune happen to others. The only little extravagant hope I have left now is that during the long journey of three weeks, I can once again meet a loli with a pure, gentle and kind heart, and heal the scars in my heart with a touch of warmth. Every time I think about my carefree life as an ordinary person, I feel overwhelming regrets. The once stable and happy daily life can never go back. The beautiful life that I should have had was completely ruined because of a malicious scam. I once trusted others with all my heart, stepped into a carefully laid trap step by step, and fell into deep misery from then on, unable to extricate myself. I will be trapped here for the rest of my life, watching others run away freely, but I will be stuck here and suffer alone. No matter how much regret and sadness I have, it will not help. The lost time cannot be recovered, the broken past cannot be perfected, and there is no place for regrets. In the long years to come, I can only survive the endless days of loneliness with my heart full of loneliness and regret.

New here, you should know what's going on with this book when you see all the bad reviews.

First-class creativity, almost perfect opening rhythm, and unpredictable and wonderful angles. As a lv5 author, he should have controlled the heat, but he still burned it into a mess with less than 500,000 words.

My evaluation is that five chapters should be condensed into one. I was disgusted by a chronicle tonight. When I came back to the bookshelf and saw your five chapters, I even regretted subscribing and putting you on the bookshelf 🙂

After it was released, the two consecutive climaxes were written as if they were sleepwalking. There was no preface or logic, and the burning was inexplicably put away. It was like a grandma driving an electric wheelchair to participate in the Olympics and inexplicably won the competition with consciousness and belief. The content of the battle of wits was comparable to a middle school student outsmarting an elementary school student with a lollipop. The creation of the princess was okay, but the collapse after the protagonist left was still unclear. Bai, the reason why the protagonist left is even more unreasonable. I feel that the author first conceives a grand picture in his mind and then fully uses the picture-writing story technique he learned in the third grade of elementary school to write it. However, the logical relationship between the pictures is just prevarication. In addition, due to the limitation of the author's writing power, the emotions expressed in these magnificent pictures are also awkward.

The author writes about an ordinary man without any characteristics, drifting with the general trend. He can be manipulated by others, has no characteristics, no grandeur, and no heroic epic. Maybe the overall plot is initially suppressed and then expanded, and will it change in the future? But until more than ninety chapters, all I saw was struggling, which I didn't like. He touched the author, but not me as a reader. In my personal opinion, this may be a good book, but it is not a good novel. Of course, it is a different matter if you like to read about suffering and hatred. Just being a human being, please bear with me if I am inappropriate.

No, with his ability to plan plans, how could he launch such a big move, the illegitimate child war, and destroy the previous families? I can understand what you wrote as a failure in writing, or else it's just a set-up.

The author's writing style and plot design are both good. However, a group of people in the comment area found it too slow, either for being a noob or for being a virgin. When I clicked on the homepage, I saw that the audience was full of Long Aotian's cool articles. Nowadays, people are too impetuous.

She is stupider than the main character and has a horribly low IQ (◎_◎;). When I first realized that my bloodline might be very high, I just wanted to run away without thinking about getting information, and continued wandering around like a headless fly. I won't talk about that. Then I saw a group of people who worshiped machines and wanted to change and save, and were not afraid of death. I just wrote whatever I thought of. You can take your time in shaping the character. If you want to be a virgin, you should at least understand the situation first. You have to say eh from the very beginning, I am so great, I want to change, I can't stand it, I feel distressed, I feel soft, I feel sad, it shouldn't be like this 😰😰😰[ fn=51]😰😰😰 I can't stand it anymore after reading chapter 10. The first three chapters are very well written. Why are you so eager to feed me💩? ? ?

It's so eloquent, Che Zhulun talks back and forth, the number of words is mixed, and even the simplest thing is not described clearly in two or three chapters.

As the only human being in this world, considering the background, he must eventually explore the cause of human extinction. Along the way, he collects clues, explores various heritages, makes companions, and develops maps and branches. The protagonist also grows step by step from the ordinary person he is now. And the guidance of the main line in the chapters that can be seen now... Feels... Not as good as Genshin Impact. You get energy at the beginning. There is nothing wrong with the first mission of the main line. Why is it useful → Human Heritage accepts prerequisites, so where is it used? What type of inheritance can be achieved to what extent? Does the protagonist have a strong pursuit of this? There is still a lot of lack of foreshadowing. As for the character plot, after subscribing, the first chapter is the growth chapter of the Golden Princess. Has she really grown? Like, just like the protagonist of Saya's Song loses Saya and simultaneously masters the ability not to eat beef, he has to kill all the evil meatballs to find inner peace. I really don't see the wisdom of the wise king. In addition to making the Golden Princess feel peaceful for a few days, what else has the protagonist done? Before it was put on the shelves, the description of the protagonist was quite realistic. He was an ordinary person with a little cleverness. He had just come to this place and was not familiar with the plot and history of this world. Even if he had to rely on quick wits, he could get it right. The protagonist creation after the ashes chapter is basically written in a dream. There are many flaws in the description of this plot. The burning is inexplicable. It's not that it can't be burned, but the foreshadowing is not in place at all. I sincerely recommend that the author edit this paragraph. Then the protagonist always wants to run away when the main line guidance is weak, but in fact according to the plot, the protagonist is not so urgent. The king and princess are well protected in the imperial city, AI is everywhere, and they are completely safe. Why does he need to run away in a hurry? After the protagonist ran away and went to Da Luo's house to reason, it was a bit unbearable. The portrayal of the protagonist was not well connected with the previous ones. If there was no growth, it felt like a living person. The author is also keen on writing plots that touch him and are actually not interesting at all, such as the wonderful filter of Da Luo Fangfang's AI on human beings, or the author will later patch the thousands of people at the end who are noble personalities who can sacrifice for others/human beings are extinct because of their nobility. Finally, there is the problem of world expansion. The protagonist lacks understanding of the world after traveling through it. Whether it is the world structure or history, or the distribution of races, you can obviously learn common sense and world knowledge after obtaining Pandora. Finally, if the author can maintain the quality before it is put on the shelves, I will not complain so much. It is really a bit deceiving. The good news is that it was not written by AI. AI does not have so many typos

About 40 chapters after it was released, I couldn't read it at all. It was full of nonsense and nothing serious. Inexplicably enjoying myself, not having fun, and also likes to be the Riddler

The only advantage is the settings. . . .

It is seriously distorted. Compared with when the book first traveled through time, several miscellaneous animals could crush the protagonist to death. But now, the protagonist still has no fighting power, but is directly invincible in the ruins. As mentioned earlier, human ashes do not suppress spiritual energy but activate it. (The princess was immediately crippled as soon as she encountered the ashes, and the article also said that the suppression was gone.) Then the protagonist used the ashes to block Martel's attack. . You are not immune to physics. Is it acceptable that a high-tech identification gun cannot be fired, but no soldiers come up to give the protagonist a knife? Are those soldiers so fragile that they collapse from fear? In the end, if you use human ashes and emotions to add points to the protagonist to activate psychic invincibility, forget it, but the result will still be a weak chicken. . .

Can I stop drinking water? Even if you use AI to do it, you won't be like this. Damn it, it's so good! It's so bad that no one is willing to promote you on Kuaishou, okay, brother?

I'm speechless. It's been so long. Just call Tianji AI and board the spaceship. I keep writing about breaking the palace. Golden humans don't have giant structures. It's nonsense.

It's not worth subscribing. It's all about cheating with free chapters. There are a lot of paid chapters. One narration can be shown in three paragraphs. It's worse than TM's variety show.

I feel like these chapters are getting more and more popular. A proposal can last so long 😅. I want to run away.

You can write more, just write more

Is it similar to the one next door? The front is good, but what about the various harem content in the back?

Damn it, is there a strong sense of separation between the framework of this book and the setting of the protagonist? The further you go, the more outrageous it gets. It's okay to mix humans with bugs. I usually feel weird when I see Africans who are not my species. Then you told me that the protagonist is facing an android who is even worse than a monkey. He is a shy one. You set it up so well in the early stage and you wrote it for me in the later stage. What are you doing? This contrast is really suspicious. I've changed people. I'm here to read Shuangwen. It's embarrassing for you to be unhappy. You asked me to read woolen threads.