Pseudo Survival Notes

The protagonist is a genius but has an emotional disorder. He is a perfectly behaved child, but everything is just a disguise. He is actually a "monster" pretending to be a human being. It is a very interesting character design. The story of being involved in a supernatural dungeon by a ghost bus and starting to survive in the world of ghosts, pseudo-human + supernatural, a very interesting combination.

The plot is a bit nonsensical, but it doesn't explain how ghosts should be dealt with. They usually contain them. A few things happened in the story, but it was kind of nothing. Because the protagonist is still crossing the river by feeling the stones. . The overall reading is not bad, but I feel that the ghost may not be particularly perverted. This is in the eye of the beholder. The writing is still successful, there are no big pain points. 🙂 You are the first one who made me feel that it is not watery. When I think about it carefully, the plot has not advanced at all. The beginning is suspenseful, and everything after that is running away 😍. Let's see how it progresses later.

The pseudo-person didn't see it, they were all ghosts. The protagonist, the pseudo-person, had a clear heart and behaved more kindly than the real person. So what about the fake people?

My protagonist has written a record, so the record will be discovered by others in the future, right? 😏

Advantages: 1. The author's writing style is solid and does not look like a novice. The introduction is well written and the overall writing style is smooth and engaging. 2. Some ghosts have their own ingenuity, and the design can be said to be a surprise. For example, the design of the ghost bus's escape route and the twin ghosts in the hotel (let's use the twin names first, otherwise there will be spoilers), the author has carefully conceived them. Disadvantages: 1. The title of the book is "Pseudo-Man", but in fact, the characteristics of the protagonist, the Pseudo-man, only target humans, not ghosts, and do not have any special attacks against ghosts. Before I opened the book, I fantasized about how the inhuman protagonist would use his pseudo-human qualities to survive the monster crises. However, after reading the book, the protagonist would only show off his pseudo-human side when facing passers-by and supporting characters. He smiled brightly and transformed into Gu Yue Fang Yuan's various calculations and uses in his heart. But I will still be scared when facing the devil, or I will turn into facial paralysis. The basic description is "a frown", "pupils shrink" and so on, which is very boring. 2. The description of the horror atmosphere is about zero. There is no place that makes people feel scared or chilled after reading the whole story. Even in some plots where ghosts appear, the author will describe it like this: "The ghost has a pale face and stares at the protagonist sinisterly, as if to say "I see you"". At least in my reading experience, this kind of personification of ghosts seems to be saying something, which quite destroys the atmosphere... Of course, the fact that it is not scary may be considered an advantage for some readers?

Doesn't the beginning look a bit like that book that starts with the analysis of ghost stories?

The author should write less emotional scenes, it's a bit awkward, but other parts are good

I tell you in the most straightforward and understandable way that I don't understand.

At first, I thought the protagonist was really a pseudo-human. It was strange to think of a pseudo-human being trying to survive in a modern city. As a result, I unknowingly read more than seventy chapters before I remembered that I was not here to see urban supernatural beings.

The author should change his name and concentrate on writing ghosts. There is no need to force the protagonist to be a dummy.

This book seems like a book I have read before. Let's start with the weird anatomy story.

The book is good. You have survival skills, but your pseudo-person is not reflected very well. At most, you are just like an ordinary person with indifferent emotions.

Forgot about the front, forget about the back In short- Are you a fake person? You just write?

It's pretty good, except for the occasional dazzling and depressing moments.

Thanks to the readers who have followed, Hamster is currently working hard to stock up 😳

The last few chapters are suitable for summer reading

How can I say that the protagonist is a pseudo-human and has so many emotions? He is sometimes shocked and sometimes angry.

After reading Chapter 20, I feel like it's a decent starting point for the supernatural infinite flow. The protagonist is described as a smart young man with some psychological problems, without the mechanics and values ​​​​of a dummy.

I feel like I'm getting more and more watery. What's going on?

The fourth meaning of pseudo-human: A person who behaves inexplicably in the game and makes people wonder, 'Is he really a human being?', Commonly seen in Identity V.

The dungeons of Ghost Notes, Ghost Bus, Twin Ghosts, and Train Ghost are all well designed, but the overall rhythm is really not good. The middle dungeon is very slow, and the foreshadowing in the front is too long, making it a bit difficult to read, but the flaws are not outweighed.

Is the protagonist really emotionless? I feel like the protagonist is scared to death when he encounters a ghost.

The protagonist in this description doesn't look like a genius either.

Please update more, I saved up for a few days and finished it in half an hour 🤓

The protagonist hasn't gained supernatural powers yet, what do you want to do? Are you writing a novel, or do you want to write about the artwork in your heart?

I recommend a million-word niche book "I Can Go to the Past and the Future". The first chapter is voiced by a female loli author. It is a male-channeled light novel. It is a passionate adventure interspersed with daily love affairs. The floating city in the interstellar era is the world view, and the magic potion sublimation + sequence is the core of the timeline setting text. The plot is interlocking with wits + decisive killing. There are many foreshadowings such as grass snakes and gray lines. There are no bloody routines and brainless plots. It is relaxed, interesting and semi-invincible. Brothers and sisters who are interested can come and take a look, maybe you will like it.