We're All Reborn, So Who Still Wants Pure Love with Rising Stars?

Oh my god, you wrote it all! I can't get past chapter seven.

There's no Dilraba in the character cards, yet they insist on including her like a simp. It's ridiculous. Do they really like Dilraba that much?

The character of Song Yuqi, the girl next door, also has problems. The male lead's sense of boundaries is very weak, and the writing style has a Japanese light novel feel. The ambiguous tug-of-war between the older brother and the girl next door has no boundaries. I personally think that writing it like this in the Chinese entertainment industry is a bit inappropriate. The plot is also confusing.

I haven't even finished reading the public chapters; I've only read up to chapter 59. It's a complete mess, jumping from one thing to another. There's absolutely no detail, no nuance. My first impression was that it was written by AI, or maybe expanded by AI. The plot was already a mess, and after reading almost 60 chapters, I still don't understand the protagonist's character.

Generally, it's a haphazard, piecemeal approach.

Since Zhou Ye revealed she has a boyfriend a few days ago, many fanfiction featuring young actresses have downgraded her from the female lead to a supporting female character.

Let's delete Bai Lu. The pacing doesn't matter, the main problem is she's not good-looking. I checked the latest update and scrolled through the character list, and this is the ugliest one. Anyway, she hasn't been written yet; she hasn't appeared in any episodes.

Chapter Three, how did you come up with that? 😅

It's alright, but could you please work on the background? Also, it's a bit disjointed.

I just looked at the first page, and Mencius is really hard to read. Changing it to " (yí), (yí), (yì)" would also work.