I Will Strike in Gandalf Form

Well, Gandalf can do that because he is a demigod. As a test of order, his Holy Light spell can indeed make the Balrog uncomfortable for ordinary people.

Counting only the official battles, the first battle involves fighting 17 bat-winged demons and a variant, the second battle involves fighting earth elements controlled by humans, and the third battle involves fighting a necromancer. This intensity is too high. The point is, why does the protagonist get involved in this muddy water? It's not a plot reason, but his personal reason - does this Necromancer have to be beaten immediately? Even if it is related to the career plan of the protagonist, otherwise it will feel like a high-pressure game with little reward (as for the elf, this is a very conformist supporting character). Of course, this is not impossible, but you really need to start the main plot. After defeating the Necromancer, you must start the main plot, and you have to confront the foreshadowing in the past, otherwise the plot will be confusing. Let me ask, do you have a main plot?

The more traditional fantasy DND team upgrade flow is one strong and one weak, one ignorant and one experienced, similar to the setting of ghost blowing the lamp, but the character design is still a little bit different. Well, the plot setting of Seven Samurai at the beginning was okay, but later on I felt that the plot was not that good. Hey, I put my heart into it at the beginning, but I still have to think about the plot later.

In The Lord of the Rings, Gandalf is set as Maia, that is, a god. Although his power is limited, his essence is still a god. If it were placed in ancient times when it could exert most of its power, miscellaneous soldiers such as the Balrog would be instantly available.

It's really uncomfortable to cut it. I feel like this fantasy adventure story has ended before it has fully unfolded. I look forward to it every day, and I want to save up to read it together 😭😭😭 Of course, I still hope that the author can create a better world, write better stories, and get better results. Because the results are not good, cutting the book is really too uncomfortable, especially when the writing is very good.

The writing is good, but the plot is mediocre and can only be described as passable. This is a common problem in most novels. Other than that, there are some minor flaws that are not a problem. Compared with other novels, the excellent writing style of this book makes the development of the plot seem more comfortable and harmonious. It is one of the best works in the literature.

The protagonist is a pure saint, and his efforts and gains are completely out of proportion!

It's nice to watch, it's immersive, the explanations are well written, and the characters are well created. Goldfinger is also quite fun. It's different from the ordinary ones, quite innovative and attractive. I've only found one problem in the 20 chapters so far. The first crisis comes at a bad time, and the first task is done like this. It's almost death, and the pressure is too great. In fact, it's better to use chapters 2 and 3 to transition a few tasks in the middle. Otherwise, the hand of God will be too obvious, and readers will feel violated and uncomfortable.

Awesome, the boss pushed you to cut it

🎭Character: Wen (Gou) Jian (Dao), a pig's trotter who feels that he may be weak. 🎬 Plot: It's still a bit popular recently, a low-level adventurer starting out in the Western fantasy genre. ✒️ The writing style: Basically there is nothing wrong with it. There are not many typos, but it is not outstanding either. It is a straightforward narrative type with a lot of inner drama in pig's feet.

I've finished reading it. It's really well written.

It's a bit surprising, and it doesn't match the feeling given by the title of the book. It's not a novel, but a very serious fantasy work. Skills need to be practiced, to advance you need to have formulas to make potions, and to do things you have to think through, in short, food and grass

It's very nice. It's better to change the cover. Many people won't even click on this cover after seeing it.

Under the skin of the melee mage, there is a relatively rigorous structure and power system, and the plot is also understandable. It is not the kind of world view and characters that have no sense of substitution. Let's wait and see for the time being.

It's similar to my mission log, it's beautiful, I love reading it

Let's make some short jokes🤭

The writing is good, it doesn't look like it was written by a newcomer.

It's okay, daily fun, combat is okay too

The first time I heard that sentence in the movie, I also heard it as "attack in Gandalf form"

Shit, I just found out that I cut the book after just two days of reading 🙂

Just cut it. It's a bit hard to follow this book. At least I should cut it before it goes on the shelves. This is my attitude. If I write it in the future, I will still praise you.

It's a pity that it's rare to find a fantasy book that is interesting and enjoyable to read.

Writing a book these days is just like making an independent game. It relies on love to generate electricity. If you don't have savings or other income, just let it go. Those who are eager for quick success cannot engage in artistic creation

Not bad, but too short. Are there any previous works that I can look at?

Not bad, it's quite fascinating to read. Please update! ! ! !

My problem is, every book I look at is cut off 😭

Brother, you are holding on, your thinking is still okay at the moment

So does the author have any other vests? I'd like to check them out.

What a pity, a good book that was cut into pieces

It's a pity to see the author cutting up the book. Tell me what I think. To be honest, before clicking on this book, I had already seen that the latest update was 6 days ago, but I still clicked on it. There is no doubt that this title attracted me and made me want to take a look even though I knew there would be no follow-up. However, I only finished two chapters. To be precise, it is a chapter and a half. The first chapter is very interesting. The Hannibal-style villain and the counter-attack of the low-level adventurers are actually very touching. However, dear author, you have finished writing such an interesting plot in just one chapter! The beginning of the second chapter is an ordinary adventure, fighting monsters, and selling gold coins. Really, I have seen too much of this stuff, and I am tired of it, and I have no idea of ​​​​reading any more. At the end of your book-cutting speech, I even wondered whether the supporting characters in the beginning affected the absorption. Oh my god... Let's start again. If the line of Hannibal's supporting characters continues, there should be more exciting plots.