Blackstone

The following is a test of the opening of my long article, and I beg for criticism. Ten days later, there was a competition within the door. The winners stay, the losers get out. Yue Tingxuan had resigned himself to his fate until he picked up a strange black stone in the back mountain. He didn't know what it was, but he only knew that the sword became lighter in his hand for the first time since then. This is just the beginning of the story. The grudges of mortals, the survival of sects, and those existences that are above martial arts - have not really unfolded yet. Whether this is a good start or not is up to you. Does the character stand up? Is the rhythm tight? What are some of the places that make you stand out? See you in the comments section.