
Transform into a Home Ship: I Breed New Humans in Another World
化身家园舰:我在异界繁衍新人类
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- Ongoing
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- 328k Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Mystic Fantasy
- Updated
- 26d ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's quite rough, neither hard nor soft, slightly raw.
Can we let the mothership plunge into the war zone without escort, intelligence or communication? At least give us a reason. The reason given for the colonial mothership to land directly on the terrestrial planet is that it is afraid of damage to the embryo bank. Later, it was said that the embryo bank operates as an independent system. The colonial mothership has no reconnaissance capabilities and can only take a look at it in low-Earth orbit. The colonial mothership cannot carry out production work on its own and has to wait for the indigenous people. The huge humanoid robot has complex production and maintenance difficulties, but its combat effectiveness cannot be improved accordingly. When it comes to similar works, there is not much emphasis on the feeling of dueling with humanoid weapons. If you just want to write about falling in love and raising children and farming, you can skip the first part.
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The protagonist is a monkey who uses a high-tech warship as a fire stick to knock crabs. The ultimate veteran and commander who has experienced thousands of years of fighting? No, it's a monkey 🐵. High technology? Yes, you can even see an interstellar civilization that is extinct at any time and has been fighting hostile civilizations for thousands of years. It also produces giant humanoid combat robots and stuffs them into colonial ships that perform important tasks. (Humanoid robots can only abuse food, and it is almost impossible for them to become mainstream in a civilized war with peer-to-peer technology. Especially in the background, humans are obviously battle-hardened and cannot create such an inefficient thing. It is illogical and unreasonable in all aspects (it is also unreasonable and unreasonable according to the novel).) Evaluation: The bragging-type protagonist is actually extremely separated from the background setting and is almost not the same person, although the tone and technological level of the background are very good. But it's actually not as good as World War II. Pure monkey playing with wooden sticks makes the crowd laugh
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This novel gave me the feeling of wanting to write about a cruel doomsday dark forest but I couldn't bear the tearing of my mother-in-law and mother-in-law. All in all, it was strange. Although the protagonist's background setting technology is very powerful, after landing on the magic planet, it was weakened like World War II (actually not as good). I don't mean the technological level, but the combat, reconnaissance, and formulation of strategic directions. In my opinion, the various operations of the protagonist are really not like that of an ultra-high-tech veteran who can conduct large-scale interstellar wars and has been fighting for thousands of years. The author himself didn't write it that way, the protagonist is more like a new recruit. If the situation is not obvious and our side is clearly dominated by high-tech, and wireless transmission is affected by magical energy, is it possible to regain the possibility of monitoring the entire Arctic through base stations, wiring, satellites, etc.? At least in the content I saw, the protagonist did not try this at all. He retreated to the base like a tortoise and only relied on the "primitive man" trolls he collected to explore the way, wasting time. A technologically superior colonial ship, not to mention other things, should have top-notch manufacturing capabilities and productivity. Trying more is the correct strategy for a mature commander in an unfamiliar environment. The protagonist is like a new recruit who puts all his chips into a troll race, focusing on early development time and information acquisition channels. Even catching people requires trolls to bring them to learn magic. The protagonist also does not have many aspects and is completely single-track. He only relies on the troll family to obtain external resources and information. I am nesting on a battleship and raising a daughter with an AI, and I am extremely torn from the description of the ultimate veteran and the person who saves humanity. A protagonist who can almost be said to be bitter and hateful seems to have immediately forgotten the crisis, hometown and hatred. As soon as he arrived on the new planet, he couldn't wait to live a bourgeois life without shame. For technology: My evaluation is also abstract, and the author obviously has no technical background. In the scene when the trolls first arrive on the battleship, the protagonist releases a humanoid robot holding a giant sword. Because it can be released immediately and is still stored on a battleship that performs such an important mission. I think in the protagonist's worldview, this model should also be used on a large scale in interstellar warfare. But this is unreasonable. A human civilization that has been fighting with high intensity for thousands of years against enemies that can destroy its own civilization at any time cannot possibly produce a humanoid giant battle robot to fight and store it on a battleship that performs such an important mission. Although humanoid robots often appear fighting various monsters in film and television works, in fact humanoids are very unsuitable for fighting. Especially in the background, human civilization has been fighting against enemy civilizations for so long, so it is impossible to produce such inefficient giant robots. Advent plot and material exploration plot: It is impossible to understand that a super high-tech civilization needs the help of local indigenous people to explore minerals. Even if you write that energy affects information transmission, a mining machine equipped with AI can always be made. It is still easy to drill underground to explore for minerals. The protagonist didn't try at all. He was just a monkey who used an energy rifle as a fire stick to knock crabs.
A work that was okay was completely ruined by one character. You can't even tell how many generations there are in the technological generation gap, but you actually provoked the native creatures to become hostile to the originally gentle alien visitors. He also boasts that conflict creates progress. You can choose when the war starts, but you cannot choose when the war ends. The prerequisite for progress is separation and understanding, but can't the gap between the two sides in materials science be seen at a glance? Even if you are the will of the planet, can't you see that the other party has the ability to destroy a planet? This design is absolutely unreasonable. It has extremely serious problems. It is obviously not carefully thought out. It uses a character to create conflict at the first glance.
Shouldn't the home ship be a mother ship? Could it be a male mother?
The author just wrote a few chapters when he was overtaken by the little head. Even if the embryos on the front of the colonial ship were all female, he physically transformed the natives to be wet nurses. Does your technology not have the means to breastfeed? You think you are writing pornographic articles. You write these every day and cannot describe them in detail. It is purely redundant.
Indeed, this book feels very high-tech in setting and actually very primitive. I felt speechless when the mothership crash-landed on the planet earlier. For a mothership as big as 30km long, I didn't believe there wouldn't be one or two repair ships and engineering ships that were hundreds of meters long. To put it bluntly, this is a mothership, not a battleship. So there must be some boats among them. Okay, having said that, I won't mention the military situation. I just assume that you can only do this for various reasons. Let me talk about your technological content in daily life. I can only say that your technological content in daily life is too low. It's not much different from modern times. Normally, there would be projections of the whole system in any cyberpunk era, let alone the universe era. Things like tractor beams, anti-gravity technology, holographic projections, etc. Should be inconspicuous but common things in life. A high-tech civilization that is clearly capable of completely destroying the planet is living the same life as a native trapped on the planet in the 20th century. No wonder the previous reviewer said that the protagonist of this book is a monkey driving a high-tech spaceship.
Is it necessary to use natives as clowns who are so arrogant that even gods dare to challenge the protagonist? What's so cool about this?
After reading the introduction, you only have one brain left and still want to think about it?
Gives people a feeling of insufficient writing power
Especially the first three chapters. Readers who come in at most points will judge whether it is necessary to read the book based on the first three chapters. The author does tell a story about genocide and forced fire in the first three chapters, but the data in it is too big, which makes people have no real sense. You can say that the sailing speed is 2% of the speed of light, but how much is the specific speed? It's hard for fast readers to imagine. If you want to understand this sentence, you need to have basic scientific literacy. But readers who click in will not all want to read hard science fiction. Moreover, this book is not completely hard science fiction, and the command sentence at the beginning does not give readers effective information. The most taboo words in online articles are the word "" and the word "water". I hope the author can work hard.
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The settings are all lofty, but the operation is pure and simple. A civilization that can colonize across galaxies, a colonial fleet commander, and hesitating for a long time to deal with a civilization that has not yet crossed galaxies. It is pure clown, which makes me feel like the creation god of Marvel fighting with planets.
At present, I have read thirty chapters, and the technology is not reflected much. Instead, I have seen things that can be seen in various cyberpunk novels or animations nowadays. I don't know what will happen next. Also, if a reader is willing to leave you a book review of a few hundred words, it means that he has carefully thought about it and read your work. I don't quite understand why you are so anxious.
Thinking about it, bydo always hallucinates BYD Oh's curse words, is it intentional or accidental?
The author shows off his academic skills
Hope you can understand my title.
I obviously want to write enjoyable articles, but I feel uncomfortable writing them. . . .
It's okay, yes, that's how brief my evaluation is.
When I saw the introduction, I only thought of Roger Noem.
I remember there was a science fiction novel in which the protagonist only had one brain and drove a battleship at the beginning.
Will he return to the Human Federation later?
No, I stopped reading on the first day I subscribed and didn't see a new chapter.
I feel that the writing is okay, basically within the scope of cognizable science, and it is also an interstellar colonization type. I hope it will not be discontinued. The author has already given up on the last book I read.