Another World? Tell That to My Return Scroll

A person has been missing for months and no one has found him? No one called the police? If the protagonist comes back and calls 110, then disappears again. I felt a sharp explosion coming from the police station in my jurisdiction.

60 Seconds... Too stupid a setting... Bungee jumping; normal people have to slow down for a few seconds... Time and space travel; even if the protagonist does not slow down for one second; what can you do by checking the watch to see if 60 seconds is enough? How about changing tires on this racing car? 😅

It's okay, it's a classic Japanese magic currency system, with a killing line that will lead to financial collapse, and the circle will never come back. I suggest the author think carefully about how to change this currency system, or delete the specific numbers directly.

The protagonist didn't report this situation to the country?

The author had better understand what 60 seconds is. If such a short time travel cannot transmit information at a high density and cannot have logistical support, it will be very useless. There was nothing I could do except go back to the city for a glass of water, and walking down the stairs to the pharmacy for a month was too much.

The protagonist himself was so infected that he was about to die. He only needed to take two pills of amoxicillin to be alive and kicking. But when he gave the medicine to the half-elf, he ate it like food. He gave him a whole pack of several days' worth. Moreover, he opened the capsule of amoxicillin and mixed it with ibuprofen. Are he really not afraid of dying from it? It is also called "in order not to be suspected". In the face of fast-acting and powerful antibiotics, the broken capsule is the least worth caring about.

The rhythm is so chaotic. Only 5 days passed from Chapter 18 to Chapter 54, and I returned to Earth once.

The environment at Qidian is much better now. If it were in the past, if the protagonist dared to contact the country and benefit China, the author would be bullied by some readers online, and even the novel would be reported and removed from the shelves.

Just don't write about the shame of a time traveler like Yi Xiaochuan

If the author doesn't really learn mathematics, I really think the content is okay, but the economy is really a problem and I can't bear to think about it.