Ascension to Eternal Calamity

It is indeed very depressing starting from around Chapter 180. I left Lei Lei and changed my name to Shaoyin. All my previous efforts were wasted. After becoming the Zi Mansion, I was restrained everywhere. The world was so big and the side effects of plug-ins were very big. I felt that the author himself was restrained everywhere in his writing. However, it was really satisfying to feel all the suppression until the final explosion. The world is vast and one sword can move alone. Until now, there are no chapters. It is indeed that the world is finally vast.

It's very well written, much better than what others have written. Whether it's the plot or character settings, I hope it won't be too high or too low later.

I'm currently at chapter 180, and I can't stand it anymore. It's so boring. I was confused from the beginning to chapter 30 of this book. After chapter 30, I feel that this book has just begun for me. Personally, I feel that the 100 chapters from chapter 30 to the release are very well written. Various calculations, reversals, peripheral characters, etc. Are all very well written. However, since it was released, sometimes the protagonist can talk to himself for several chapters with zero interaction, and he can repeat what he has said repeatedly in one chapter. Various calculations also seem naive and far-fetched. Also, this is about cultivating immortality, not the political arena. If cultivating immortality requires so many clumsy calculations, then it doesn't matter if this immortal is not cultivating. In the final analysis, I did not feel any satisfaction from the article. The several re-cultivations of the protagonist have worn out all my patience. The weirdest thing about this book is that in this book, there are zero people who have any contact with the protagonist, no matter it is relatives, friends, enemies, or elders, the protagonist is like a ghost wandering in the world, and no one knows that there is such a person. It's like carrying an emulator and playing a stand-alone game.

I haven't read it yet, but it made me laugh. Does the author have a glass heart? Just three words made you post forty comments, but no one responded to you.

Isn't this a little bit? The protagonist is still borrowing Li Lei's front foot, and he reveals his true feelings to fight against the cannibals. After he is not restrained by Li Lei, he starts to kill an innocent person with a borrowed knife. This world is ugly and the world is bad. How did you come to the conclusion that I can harm innocent people? The protagonist also explained that he is not a cannibal but a murderer. It is understandable that the protagonist is not the kind of person who can risk his life for justice, but is this a bit

Yes, I mentioned that the writing is not good. I think the writing is quite good and the plot is compact. So far, I can't fault the plot. The most important thing is that there are hooks and foreshadowings in many places, which are fascinating. Some people say that it is like AI, which is completely black. AI probably cannot write the feeling of being a fighter. The author is actually a fellow countryman with me. Can you update 600 times a day?

Volume 1: My Earthworm Master (Completed) Part 2: My Li Lei Master (Completed) This is currently the third volume, everyone is welcome to read

Tell me what you think is good and bad. Good 1: The protagonist has a decent personality, a good IQ, and is not one of the homogeneous ones on the market. I personally prefer a self-interested protagonist to one who always saves the world. Good 2: The world view is okay, and it has the flavor of magical power and immortality. -------------- Bad 1: The world view is a bit different. Forget about the interior and exterior scenes, the real person can tolerate it, but what the hell is Daoguo? This name has too high intentions, but its realm is so low. Did Dao Ji change it? It's not necessary. It's a bit awkward to call him Zhenjun when you have Zifu. And Mingming, isn't he just Taixu? What's the difference? I haven't written it at all. How can I say that the system has been changed? It feels nondescript Bad 2: The problem of rare characters. You can use some rare characters to highlight an ancient style, but there is no need to fill in some rare characters. It is very abrupt and awkward Bad 3: The problem of roles, women There are too few characters, and the better female characters are also very attractive to readers. Bad 4: The problem of expectation. After switching to Shaoyin, I suddenly lost the sense of expectation and the motivation to continue reading. Moreover, I personally felt that the core was written off. Moving forward, what is the core plot of the book? Deduction is the core. In the world of magical power flow, deduction is the core, but what is written later. The flavor of the deduction flow is gone, the real body is used, and various restrictions are imposed, which results in the taste of the front and the back being completely different. You should write in the simulator, or a reopened flow like the First Saint Demon Gate. Now you limit the deduction, and the world view is very locked. Where is the sense of expectation? There is no sense of expectation anymore. There is no plot, no characters, no world view. Most of them have no sense of expectation, which limits the deduction. How can you reach your climax? What's the foreshadowing? The purpose is to climax and explode, but the world view is so tightly locked that there is no chance of explosion. Even if there is, there are still people who want you to explode. Isn't this a clown? Bad 5: The core taste has begun to change. Why are you reading this book? Because of the world view and the protagonist, the protagonist accounts for a larger proportion. The unexpected side of the protagonist is the highlight. If you do something unexpected, others are surprised. This is a bit more exciting, especially when the world view is locked.

I keep writing the same plot as a side story, but the main plot is not drawn at all. The writing is still the same as a running account. Sure enough, most writers will finish their work in the later stage. Withdrawn

When it was first released, this section was really boring. To do one thing, you have to do A, but B, idea C, and finally D. It takes a long time without plug-ins, and it takes a long time with plug-ins. It's almost addictive. Does Shen Nong know where it starts to flow smoothly?

I like this protagonist very much. No matter who he faces, he dares to say no, and he dares to say that I don't want to. If you make him unhappy, your blood will be splashed all over you even if you die. The best time to read this book is when you are alone, using Li Lei, and there are all monks in the world who are invincible. Evil! Evil! Evil! Evil! Everywhere you look, they are full of man-eating demons! Kill! Kill! Kill! It's a pity that the protagonist gave up on Li Lei and switched to Shaoyin, which changed from a passionate story to a boring and sinister plot.

The more I wrote, the more exciting it became. I read 106 chapters in one go. The early stage was uneventful, but the later stages were spectacular. This book is the only strange book I have read this year. I just ask the author not to stop reading and to finish it.

The previous content is quite good, but abandoning Li Lei and cultivating Taiyin resulted in a regression in cultivation. It is a bit poisonous to me. It is equivalent to more than half of the content which is meaningless. Li Lei Side Eyes, Guai Lei Magic Weapon, Divine Power Nail, Pressed Gold Thunder, Wangyingzhou Island... This kind of operation is really a bit disgusting. If there is a problem with Taiyin later and the cultivation regresses, it is equivalent to infinite hydrology.

After arriving at Shaoyin, he began to lose his intelligence. . . Not interesting

Li Lei is the master 🤭 and the bouncer 😌, and the cultivator is ⭐️wrath 😥😄! Li Lei is easy to train, good outdoors, easy to control, easy to show off The so-called slaying demons is because it is too exciting 🙂, ⭐️can't stand the anger, and wants to be exposed in front of evil spirits 😃, please lower the gear 😭! Good training: train ⭐️Wrath to be like yourself 😍 Good outdoors: Li Lei needs ⭐️Wu to often go outside to see monsters 😌 Good control: ⭐️Wrath is controlled and increases when seeing monsters Power, oh🙄🙄🙄😆😆😆😥 Good to reveal: ⭐️Let the evil spirits see their body in anger , begging the master to lower the gear 🙂🙂🙂😭 Those who repair Li Lei are all M, ⭐️ stay at home angrily, the master does not agree 😡, go and slay demons (exposed) [f n=31] Otherwise, increase the power. ⭐️When you see evil spirits when you are angry, Li Lei will trigger the bounce. ⭐️If you can bear the anger, just clamp it down and endure it. If you can't bear it, just oh I am going to slay the demons 😌😌😌! The more people you see exposed and stronger, the more satisfied the master is, and the more it stimulates Li Lei's desire for training, so ⭐️Wu can't stand it anymore, so he goes to slay demons and slay demons (reveal), the more satisfied the master is, and turns down the power, and then sharply increases the power, allowing Xing Fury to continue (slaying demons and slaying demons), and the cycle continues!

At first glance, I thought it was a fast food article. But when I saw it, it turned out to be grass jelly. The setting and plot are indeed referenced, but my own story frame and settings are outstanding. Update soon!

Taiyin is the master, and Shaoyin is the wife. When something goes wrong with the master, there are also some problems with the wife, so he can control the maids of Huode, but they can't control the evil slaves of water, so the evil slaves become lustful and want to make the wife and Shaoyin their own, and violate them violently. Those who cultivate Shaoyin are like Shaoyin's natal family People want to help Shaoyin inherit the inheritance of Master Taiyin, but the evil slave Shui De does not agree, so he hinders it. Now it depends on whether the widow Shaoyin will inherit the family property first and get rid of the control of the evil slave, or whether the evil slave Shui De will successfully train Shao Yin and ravage him 😍😍😍

Didn't I just post a scroll that starts out very much like Netherworld Painting? Why can't I find my post?

The author can't control the plot. In the world of Xuanjian, practice qi and kill the fake Zifu. This is just written like this when it is released. It would be strange if it doesn't collapse later.

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It seems to be the unified dilemma of Xuan Jianliu, the endless crisis and the sense of relief.

I haven't read it yet, but according to the introduction, the population of the world in the book should be refreshed

The protagonist's personality is more suitable for Da Linmu

I now believe that this is the author's first book. The plot after Xiu Shaoyin is interesting but the setting is too poor.

It is suggested but not taught to the author to write a book and may be adopted as appropriate. In fact, you can use the realm of the Xuanjian system, and then add the settings of the interior and exterior scenes from the realm, instead of directly using the interior and exterior scenes as the realm, which is better. The current state of things is a bit strange. It cannot attract people who like the Xuanjian system, nor can it attract other people, so we have to start over. I hope the Taoist settings are not random settings, but have some basis, otherwise the reading will be very vulgar and have no artistic conception. After all, Da Chi Xian Sect is already very good at writing about thunder, while writing about the Five Elements and Five Virtues is very cliché. I hope I can write something new.

There are even gaps in the character changes and plot transitions. It is estimated that many people gave up immediately after reading the first part

That is, before each use, you can describe in detail that the protagonist is about to enter the death mirror. Every time the author writes about the death mirror, it is too vague and obscure at the beginning, resulting in the interweaving of reality and fantasy. If the reader is a little careless, he will not be able to find the main line.

Every chapter of "The Empress of the Purple Mansion" is very literate, and I'm not used to it. I don't have that kind of cultural background, and it's tiring.

It makes no sense, the protagonist system, the plot, the character's purpose, the main line, the hidden line, none of it is right. This book will not be published for a month, I will read it.

Nowadays, the plot is becoming more and more boring as it is written. It is like a pool of stagnant water, and it can be watched or not watched.