
A Band, or a Love Triangle?
乐队,还是修罗场?
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 788k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Subgenre
- Everyday Romance
- Updated
- 17h ago
- Source
- Qidian
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372Chapters
256Votes
3.3kRecs
13.5kFans
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It feels like there are multiple female protagonists, so I recommend a single female protagonist. The extra female protagonist can be given to the male counterpart. Because Qidian readers like single female protagonists, writing with multiple female protagonists is too old (Reference )
Is there a band in a domestic high school? If you want to write about it, why don't you write about Riqing?
It's very well written. Why do you only have this score? It's strange.
A little suggestion
I feel like this kind of light novel is a light novel that has a relaxing ambience. Please don't arrange too many villain plots. It's originally meant to be relaxing. But since I participated in this competition, I've met people who can't get along with the protagonist. I don't see much interaction between the protagonists in the daily updates. They are all formulas and routines that make people feel tired. That's not to say that there can't be conflict, but if it's like a diode, either crazy about the protagonist or inexplicably hating it to the point of gnashing its teeth, then the whole atmosphere of the book will be a bit screwed up. As for light music, it would be nice to have more gentle passers-by and companions who occasionally cause trouble. It would make the world a little more normal and it would be more comfortable to read ~
Let me correct this mistake for those who have studied music for several years. You don't need absolute pitch to pick up songs, just relative pitch. As a music student, relative pitch is a required subject (sight-singing and ear training are included in primary school). Complex music is difficult to pick up whether it is absolute pitch or relative pitch. But popular songs also say that if you don't know how to pick up, you can only understand it with a poor student.
About Jiang Ping changing her name to Jiang Yi. . . . .
I like Yiyi and Ning three times a day to widen the gap, and then I just saw a video of Jiang Ping changing her name, which almost broke my defense. How should I complain about this. . . . . Of course, it's not a big deal. After reading the Love Locking Spell, I could still come to Qidian to read Xueda's book, which is enough to prove my tenacity.
Why does the author plagiarize?
Why did the author plagiarize my high school life? Should he pay me copyright fees and compensation for invasion of privacy?
The second song is so cool. I listened to it to the junior high school students in my class, and they all complained about my old Tang Deng and sugar song competition.
Looks okay
I should be able to follow up on the reading, but can you change some of the difficult points? First, even if the male protagonist writes and copies them on the spot, how can the other (drum and bass) scores be produced immediately? And I have never practiced a band before, but I don't believe that I can get it right in the first rehearsal. The second is that you didn't give the protagonist a memory buff. It's a problem for the protagonist to "completely" remember a few songs.
The writing is quite good, but the soul passage is a poisonous point. Author, can I copy your book and re-write it? I have changed the soul passage, which should be able to be read by more people. I will write on other platforms.