Ember King

From rejecting endorsements to practicing hard, Tiangang Tadou's teachings reveal the truth that strength never comes quickly. Not bad~

Reunion in desperate situation, Lu Zhan's unexpected return, the tacit understanding between brothers and the warmth of the aftermath of the disaster are getting better and better, come on

Dear readers who are passing by, click in and read a few chapters. My story will not disappoint you.

No more votes, vote another day, it looks good 😜

Firewood, the setting is very clever and the ideas are unique.

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

The setting is novel, the ark key holder walking in the apocalyptic wasteland changes his fate against the will of heaven, and the more he looks at it, the more he becomes obsessed with it.

It feels pretty good. It's more interesting than expected. Please update more and see if you can sign up.

The world view and character creation are very eye-catching. The protagonist struggles to survive in the scorched earth and lights up the road ahead, which perfectly interprets the core of Xinwang. The rhythm of the plot is also very comfortable, making people look forward to the subsequent development of the plot.

Interesting setting, 🙂

Come and see by invitation. First of all, let me state that I am not a big shot and I don't know how to sign a contract. I can only give you my true perception as a reader and my humble opinion as the author. Let me talk about what I saw in the first chapter: A supermarket owner saw that the sky cracked and the world changed, and his mother called him to go home for dinner. End. Advantages: The overall sense of suspense is high. Disadvantages (overlapping armor, purely personal opinion): 1. The narrative is implicit The first chapter only did one thing, a sudden change. It feels like there is too little content. 2. Deliberate Cicadas, birds, cats, pedestrians. The initial chirping of the cicada was well laid out, starting from the sentence "The chirping of the cicada itself comes in bursts". Flying birds, deliberately, written to show the falling birds. Cat, deliberate, same as above. People, deliberate, same as above. 3. Three Golden Chapters (Since you asked me to sign the contract, I will not politely try to do whatever you want) Conflict, none. Suspense, full of excitement. Hook, extremely weak. 4. Four questions at the beginning. Who is he? Whose name is this? You have to shoot the protagonist, and it can only be him. In your first chapter, you can change the protagonist to a milk tea seller, an insurance seller, or a lottery ticket seller. Why does it have to be him? Why does one have to be a supermarket owner? Is it because the material is complete? Where is he? In a world where the apocalypse is coming, you have done this very well, because you wrote about this in almost the first chapter. What is he going to do? Not written. Why him? (Why did he do this?) Not written. Summary: The suspense is full, the narrative is okay, but the narrative has no sense of picture (you tried to write about the changes in the birds, but you didn't feel it; you had some cracks, and the picture was barely put together.) The above.

Nice writing, cheers~

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

Since there is no retreat, then move forward bravely! The flame in the boy's body will eventually light up the world!

As I get older, I really can't bear to see innocent people fall, so when the protagonist starts killing, I want to see the blood of these monsters flowing like rivers!

Damn, congratulations~ Come on, please update more, you will definitely be able to sign the contract, don't let down the readers who support you^^b

An ordinary person's extraordinary journey, I feel that in the end the protagonist may become the savior

Every time I see an ordinary person being the protagonist, I think it's ridiculous. I can only say that it has to be a setting.

The cover of the big book is beautiful^^b

Congratulations on collecting 1,000 pieces. Come on, for the sake of book friends, I will add more updates and you will definitely be able to sign the contract ^^b