Qualified Candidates: Start as a High Wall Worker

It's obvious that I'm a newbie, the writing is very green, the writing style and plot are not very good, and I have no desire to read on.

The plot is exciting, the writing is good, and the pace is tight. But there is too little psychological description in the connection process. At the beginning, the male protagonist had a disagreement and overloaded the plot with revenge for his boss, and then started fighting. There was no psychological description or connection at all. It was very abrupt and a bit difficult to get into. Also, does the male protagonist show this fighting power as soon as he wakes up? It feels too strong, and he automatically controls it without adapting or learning. Other than these minor flaws, overall it looks great.

Excluding Qidian official and the author, I am the eleventh one to post. I can only say that I am an ancient person and I don't really want to read it. I am waiting for the author's later works to mature and see if I want to taste them. Here I am trying to be an elder first.

Once you sign the contract, you will be speechless

Author, let me do the math for you. You code one word per second, which is 3,600 per hour. There are 24 hours in a day. You sleep for 6 hours, eat for an hour, wash for an hour, and give you another hour for conception. With 15 hours left, you can code 54,000 words, a chapter of 2,000 words, almost 27 chapters, but what does it mean that you only updated two chapters?

Good looking, please read "Chen Shang Sword Journey"!

Invalid introduction. In addition, it is best to delete the first two books. They are deducted points as past works.

It feels like a hodgepodge. So far I have seen Sky Blaze, Pacific Rim, one with spinal implants and mecha control, and one with high coastal walls and mechas.