
Immortal Ni: Time Travel to Liu Mei's Belly at the Beginning
仙逆:开局穿越到柳眉的肚子里
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 164k Words
- Genre
- Cultivation
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Cultivation Civilization
- Updated
- 2mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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589Fans
79Chapters
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Let me see how much you can write
As title
Personal opinion, a little opinion
The author has done a very good job in character creation, emotional rendering, and plot control. At least I can't find any obvious black spots that I can criticize. What's rare is that as a fanfic, I think it is relatively consistent with the original work, which shows the author's level. But the only thing I don't understand is that the protagonist has a game mentality from the beginning to the end. Book friends say that the protagonist is a scumbag. My evaluation is that except for Liu Mei, the protagonist treats everyone like an NPC to the outside world. I don't know why he is shaped into such an unlikable character. This is difficult to criticize. . .
Come on, author, write well
At present, these chapters are too awkward. To be honest, they are not very good. Also, the author's updates are too slow and too infrequent. I have already given you the monthly pass. I have given you all my monthly passes this month. Come on, author, update more chapters. It is best to do four chapters a day. If not, three chapters will do.
The title of this book is gimmicky😁
Can you update three episodes every day?
Can you change the protagonist's scumbag?
😡😡😡😡😡😡
If it's even slower, I'll change the size to a larger one and write it myself 😄
I update three episodes every day and add two flashes of inspiration.
Author: I want to see the love life of Wang Lin and Liu Mei. I feel that the protagonist is a substitute. How about changing the protagonist to a supporting role? Please! I am willing to write a gushing poem