Reborn at Twelve: My Childhood Friend Died After Graduation

Let's talk about a few points. What attracted me to this book at the beginning was, on the one hand, the professional development in the field of architecture. At least it can be a fresh read for people who have not known this before, and it is more or less different from other poorly written urban novels. The other is the beautiful childhood love between the male and female protagonists. In the end, it turned into a narrative of Internet entrepreneurship. Although it was not written explicitly, didn't the plan and direction go towards Douyin? The career line is vulgar to the point of being completely trashy, but the writing power and knowledge reserve are not enough to support the writing of this aspect of the story. The various plots and characters are all classics. And the emotional line has become extremely poisonous. Doesn't the heroine's character feel separated from the front and back? I also followed other people's example of pretending to be a love saint and setting up a Shura field. Do you understand what you learned? Once the field is laid out, it turns into a polite test again. Stop at that point? So what should I watch? Don't you understand that it's nice to see you all awkward and squirming? Actually, when I first read this book, I thought I had discovered another seedling (the one next door, Rebirth 08 Diagnosed Medical Master, I have been following since I first read it at 100,000 words), but I endured and read the entire content, and ended it here. It's a pity.

This book is well written and highly professional, but there is a big problem with the character design. Introduction: There is a single female protagonist, and her character always emphasizes that she only loves Qingmei. But through the description of Lin Xiao's PUA and her previous life's financial affairs, it's disgusting to say one body and another. You are not as good as the Chen Gou next door. You are a scumbag and want both. Urban single heroines are still a minority, let alone the harem. Two or three heroines with a lot of descriptions of Shura field conflicts are enough for you to write.

If you have a single heroine, don't give away a girl as a supporting character. If there are more girls, just accept them. Don't give away girls.

I'm speechless. I don't want to vote for the monthly ticket anymore. The main palace has lost his memory. What kind of plot is this?

From the very beginning to now, when something happens later, I feel like the running account has no sense, and in order to speed up the plot, the business line is being streamlined like crazy...

The writing is not bad, but the proportion of love is not high, so the poor results are expected. After all, most readers come here for sweet love. However, it may also be seen that the author is indeed good. The next book can be written in a different track, and this one can be cut.

You mean, 2012? Chronicles?

The previous plot seems smooth and comfortable, but starting from chapter 60, it becomes a little different. The interspersed cliche plots are a bit like a plate of delicious dishes suddenly discovered by flies, which is incompatible with the author's writing style. The literary youth flavor, coupled with the cliché plot, feels a bit too forced. Also, the author is really not very good at writing female characters. None of the female characters are likable. I don't know if it's intentional, or it's caused by the author having too few contacts with women. The pretentiousness, coquettishness, artificiality, and stupidity of women make people feel bad and make them hard to like.

This book has a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists. If there is only one female protagonist, there shouldn't be so many emotional scenes involving other girls.

Since the heroine's car accident, it feels like the story was written by two authors. The front part is at least somewhat logical, but what is behind it. The female protagonist lost her memory, and the male protagonist went to the United States to open a gold finger. Not to mention that his American family history is as funny as a child's nonsense. Even his character has changed and he has become a complete Riddler. The main line of the story is not advanced. For a little Karami like Juan, you would have pried open his mouth with one-tenth of the golden finger in the United States. Just the ink will make it mysterious. In addition, from time to time in the article, the deep love for the heroine in the past life is recalled, "What a life of losing her and having the whole world but nothing." As a result, good guy, the heroine lost her memory, you ran away to the United States, and soon you accepted Lin Xiaoxiao. In the past two years, I can count on one hand the number of times I have met and contacted the heroine, and even said "take your time". If you and she don't interact actively, how can she think about it again? All she has to do is wait. . . The deep love I share with you is all just lip service. Anyway, there are so many warblers and swallows around me, so if the heroine loses her memory, just lose her memory 🙂. As for the main plot, it is estimated that we have to wait until all the heroines have been collected before we can move forward and the heroine can recall it.