The Godfather of American Comics? Call Me Officer!

Changing America? Are you kidding me...? You're not a capitalist, you're just a lowly cop. I just read the character profiles below. To change America or a region, you need connections, ability, capital, and to be a mayor. Without jobs, what can they change?

To put it bluntly, your writing style should ideally stay consistent and avoid becoming overly repressive or constantly shifting when it comes to women.

It feels a bit dangerous. Marvel isn't very popular anymore.

Was the Battle of New York really necessary? Is acquiring alien technology really that difficult? Nick Fury can communicate with Granny Marvel on his own, and you can get it from Thor if you want. You don't think Thor, being a magician, doesn't have alien technology, do you?

The beginning was quite good; the fights weren't one-hit kills, there was a gradual process of getting stronger, and the combat wasn't just about using super strength, but rather combining strength with super mechanics, which was quite interesting. However, I don't know if they rushed it, but then it suddenly switched to Devil May Cry, and when it came back, the writing style changed abruptly, jumping from one side to the other without any regard for plot coherence, which made it a bit boring.

I've noticed that the most popular characters are all neurotic protagonists, and those who are more abstract and use internet memes for laughs.

The pace is definitely too fast. It hasn't been long since I started writing, and this Dragon Blood Potion is practically cheating! Just by drawing a vial of someone's blood, you can copy their abilities, and the power level increase is simply outrageous.

Aside from the protagonist's somewhat juvenile yet humane emotional outbursts of justice at the beginning, the story gets interesting after the gangster massacre. Unlike many Marvel novels that immediately piggyback on the popularity of Iron Man and Spider-Man, this one focuses on the protagonist while gradually developing the world. I prefer this approach of nurturing the protagonist.

It sounds too AI-driven; could you please polish it a bit?

The writing style is great, especially the actions after the second instance of the dungeon raid – ruthless, precise, and fast. It's a very enjoyable read, doesn't feel overwhelming, and doesn't feel like an overpowered character, even considering the setting of Hell's Kitchen. The previous book, Bleach, was also excellent and worth following. 🙂