
Ming Dynasty: My Teacher Zhang Juzheng
大明:吾师张居正
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 78k Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Song-Yuan-Ming Dynasties
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I rarely read historical articles, so I will only express my own impressions. Let me talk about what I saw in the first chapter: A time traveler, he has passed through his past life and this life. The focus is on a scene where his father lectures. The topic during the lecture is Zhang Juzheng. Leave suspense. I felt that the proportion of the content was out of proportion, giving them too much space for dialogue. It's just that his father is an alcoholic and won't let him learn from Yu Qian, so he introduced Zhang Juzheng to him, hiding an awesome identity. I feel that more words can give him his identity before time travel and his experience after time travel. Let readers enter this era from the perspective of the protagonist. In addition, in the end, Zhang Juzheng's perspective can be omitted. Your perspective distribution in Chapter 1. In the end, we were given a bird's-eye view of Yu Qian's great achievements and fate. Then give it to his father. Then it cuts to the protagonist, briefly passing through the protagonist's past and present lives, and finally giving the perspective to Zhang Juzheng. The perspective is too scattered and the reader has no anchor point. The perspective keeps switching, making it difficult to integrate. Above.