The Detective Lady Is Dead, I Did It

I originally thought it was a serious Sherlock Holmes-style investigation, but why did I end up playing Werewolf all the time 😂

Now that you have read the latest chapter, let me know what you think. This book is very creative and can write a lot of good things. The elements added are: deceit: sequence (starting from 9), deepening the abyss (outer gods) and cultists, witches (from exploring knowledge to forbidden experiments, not much mentioned), and detectives (divided into civil and military): each detective has his own unique ability (upgrading the sequence by judging criminals). If you keep writing with guaranteed quality, it should be able to become a niche product.

The detective lady is pregnant, I did it

Didn't see it? Is the image of Tachibana Shirley?

If the current Sherlock Holmes is a fake, will there be two Sherlock Holmes in the future

Originally, the beginning and middle were pretty good, but from the beginning of the Witch Trial, the plot was like a wild horse running wild. As for the Witch Trial, I think it was probably the author's jealousy in writing this novel, and now there are not enough dumplings to fill. I started to feel something was wrong when my sister was force-fed drugs, and the plot that followed was really hard to describe.

Hurry up and write about Witch Trial. It's too long and gives me the feeling of being long and smelly.

Although the male protagonist claims to be the righteous party, his actions are not righteous enough. This is probably what I don't quite accept.

Let me know when the detective lady is pregnant 🙂

There are so many things to write about Werewolf, 6

It's hard to judge the experience of reading this kind of copy.

Why do I feel that the protagonist's name is so common? Is it some kind of studio article or stereotyped article? 🙂

Some settings from Scarlet Bullet are used, but I think one of the highlights of the original work is the modern setting, which allows for some big scenes such as airplanes and submarines. Moreover, currently, the girls have their own characteristics, and the protagonist's abilities and personality are a bit boring.

It should be to create a righteous protagonist, but... It's not

Shen Nong tastes a hundred herbs. It's quite interesting just for the story, but it doesn't have much in the way of outsmarting detectives. Maybe it's because of the existence of plug-ins, which reduces a lot of suspense factors. At present, there is enough suspense in the big main line, and the small unit can be seen at a glance

What a two-dimensional setting. Currently, the main male protagonist is a male detective.

After reading Chapter 55, let me talk about the advantages first. The early plot design and setting are considered good, and they are self-consistent before unfolding the map. However, everyone has good inspirations, and it is difficult to form it into a million-word story. Most of the authors who can appear on the recommendation list can do the above two points. If you go to the front row of Red Persimmon and pull up the book to read, it will be difficult to have problems with these two points. As for the shortcomings, my evaluation is the same as the previous two novels. The protagonist's character is mediocre. Character problems are a fatal flaw in this kind of novel. If the writing is not good, don't force it on. Just replace it with a few unmistakable characters. The plot design and character performance both have a hint of self-pleasure. The problems in the first two books have not been removed. It is recommended to think more and polish them before releasing them. Also, the author's own poor plot control has not yet appeared. This is really a no-brainer. It is a common problem of ordinary authors. Write more articles to see if it can be corrected. Based on my experience of the author's previous two books, one eunuch and one half-dead, I can only say that if the above three points are not optimized, the follow-up will not be optimistic.

The left hand is strong, the right hand is strong The strength is really strong, the strength is really strong The strength is really strong, the strength is really strong

My sexual fetishes are: first, the thin white detective, and second, cyberpunk. Now that the white, thin detective has seen it, where is the cyberpunk?

Generally speaking, there is nothing to criticize, but characters like Sherlock Holmes tend to be more witty, and here, whether it is solving the case or many other performances of the protagonist, Holmes, the villain, and the truth of the case, it is a bit too naive. These are acceptable, and there is nothing wrong with it other than that.

The contract will be officially signed next Tuesday. Anyone who wants to invest and earn some coins can invest with confidence.

My evaluation is finished. The update is finished. Please update more. 😭😭😭

I didn't understand it at first. Is the protagonist a soul traveler?

The Werewolf script is over. Kick me.

Where is my acceptance speech? Why put it on the shelves directly😭😭😭

I just noticed that the author is dual-opening, awesome

It's a Western-style novel, but it's not Western enough. It traps our morals. After all, Eagle Sauce is a country where you can get custody of children by any means as long as you're pregnant. And then you refuse to accept those who signed the Child Protection Act. I feel that their morals are too high. That factory boss Mo was ecstatic.

The setting of this branch is a bit like the setting in Magic City Elite, and the president will not be the same character as Yamashiro Ren, right?