Comprehensive Comics, My Literary Princess and Heroine Came to My Door

The author's experience makes me unable to believe that you can write this book well. Don't copy anything good, just write passers-by and R0. You also write about demon slayers and slimes? Except for R0, the popularity of these works is not due to the quality of the work itself. Demon Slayer and Slime are all produced through animation, while Passerby relies on the concept and character of the Passerby heroine.

The protagonist is already a great author in the light novel world. Selling tens of millions of books, I only made 50 million yen. It's not the super-capitalist Japan that the protagonist traveled through.

To be honest, I have seen this idea at least three or four times, but I have never seen one that could be completed. The idea is very good, but there is a natural conflict between the protagonist, the pseudo-author, and the real-life characters in the novel. It depends on whether this novel can handle it well.

Where is the protagonist's brain? Write a novel with special powers. After mapping it to reality, you can learn supernatural powers, and then you can crush any plutocrat to death. Also, don't let this female villain go in the end. She was the cause of the destruction of the protagonist's family. If she was let go, writing a novel would be a mess💩

In the first chapter, there are two obvious illogical points. One is that the information cannot be found, and the other is how the protagonist's information was exposed.

Ever since the female villain appeared, this has become toilet paper. She killed the protagonist's parents since she was a child, causing her sister to become disabled, and the world's consciousness is targeted. What a garbage plot.

The author has no idea about physical publishing, but if I check the information before writing, I won't find any situation where the author gets 30%... Kazuma Kamachi, who is the highest in the industry, only gets 15%, and the publishing house only accounts for 30 to 40% of the profit distribution, which is all given to the protagonist, but it's okay. You don't need to pay for early-stage publicity, right? It's a loss-making publication... You should check the information related to light novel publishing before writing...

What the hell? Does the author know the concept of "archetype" in literary and artistic works? How can the prototype be exactly the same as a real person! At least the name can be called a prototype if it has a different name! No wonder the protagonist is so popular and makes so much money, the profits are all lost to real people, right?

What kind of setting are you writing? The setting you wrote is so convoluted, and it has become a reality. The most important thing is that the protagonist is still an idiot. This kind of plot has to be interesting only if the protagonist is smart. If he is an idiot, he will definitely abuse the protagonist in various ways.

If the setting is toxic, just find some novels about the inevitable destruction of the world, publish them, and then live in another world.

There are a lot of flaws. I just feel like the main character is not very smart. Even if normal people can't find the information, just to be on the safe side, changing the character's name won't hinder anything. Then we formed the relationship with Asuna, who clearly wanted to change, but ended up not changing midway. I feel like the author wants to play with these people. They don't exist originally, because the author wrote the novel and then automatically integrated it into reality, so that these people exist. If this is the routine, you should say it earlier. Otherwise, designate someone to spray you.

I am Sima Qian. Let me explain history.

At first, I thought about whether there were other female characters. I didn't find out whether there were other female characters. Let's not talk about the heroines of the big families. How did you know that Megumi Kato was not there? How do you know that the heroine of some ordinary families is not there? Since you changed the name of the male protagonist in the original novel, why not change the other names? The further you go, the more outrageous it becomes. Write about whether the protagonist has a younger sister or a sister-controlling sister or a brother-controlling one. Write about how cute and beautiful the sister is. Give her a hug and say that you have no feelings for her. Are you still a sister-controlling one? Like a eunuch. The other heroine's scenes are also a mess and all of them are subdued. Some readers don't understand. Don't those who write novels understand? How could one person create so many powerful novels in just a few years, with different styles and different writing styles? Everyone who writes novels knows that this is impossible. Just talking about the style of writing is not just a change. Kasumigaoka Shiha didn't question it, Yukinoshita didn't question it. No one in the world questioned it and praised him for his greatness. Haha, it was all Ruozhi. Later, the heroine discovered something was wrong from the name. The most speechless thing is that when someone threatens someone, the protagonist's first reaction is to kill and silence him. A boy who grew up under a red flag can overcome the psychological impact of killing after being reincarnated. It's amazing, and he can still have murderous intent. Even if I kill him, will I be able to solve the problem of leaving a bomb behind? After a simple search, the person disappeared after meeting you. Why do you still want to exterminate the clan? Is this a city? It's a fantasy novel where the main character has no story line and has an attitude of rejection towards anyone other than his sister. It's a story about Yuan Zhikong. Their names are called Brother Eunuch and Brother Controller Sister.

Bro, the plot is going to be a bit violent. The protagonist keeps saying he wants to do whatever he wants. It's already fifty chapters, so watch it. Who left clues and what enemies were analyzed for a long time, but there was no conclusion, and then I started to write about my daily life. The main daily writing is not good-looking either. The plot is very frustrating, and even though there are many hints that there may be a supernatural background, the protagonist in Chapter 57 is still a noob 😁 and there is no hesitation. Alice, do you want readers to refresh their minds? Although I am already a mature reader and should have mastered this skill. But in 2025, there are very few readers who can get excited when seeing an anime heroine interacting with a book protagonist. Anyway, let's do something cool?

This type is still too poisonous. Does your own woman like others in your own comics? Can't the appearance be his own, and the behavior be patched up so that he is not the same person? There is only a name to let them know that it is not the male protagonist. Please be careful. Isn't that better

Develop your daily life well, can't you? If you have to do any miscellaneous things, you can just do it. The most important thing is whether there can be less flaws. Before chapter 30, the problems were not big and it was very round. After chapter 30, let's not talk about how the protagonist will become in the future. Let's just say that the protagonist has no way of heaven to release the world's oceans. I can't think of a reason why he is not dead.

The previous writing was okay, but it started to look a bit ugly from the beginning of the dream, and then the law of heaven came out and I gave up the book.

Okay, you're fine. The whole future and the whole abstraction of Alaya's assassination are for nothing. I don't understand. It's a good feeling, but it's ruined.

I felt something was wrong from the moment I discovered that there was something supernatural going on. Without a strong script, Yuan Yuan would never come back. A proper eunuch's work

The idea is good, but the plot is terrible. It should have been written more interestingly, but the author doesn't seem to have that ability. You have no writing talent.

Starting from Chapter 33, I can't stand it anymore. The previous series of loopholes can be reversed, such as world fusion (mainly a comprehensive urban daily life, don't blend in all the miscellaneous things) or the world wants to develop, and the male protagonist happens to travel through it. Tiandao discovers the anime in his memory, and Tiandao draws on the integration and development. At the end, the integration is completed, and the protagonist is rewarded (this mainly gives the protagonist the confidence to harem, after all, you can't surpass countless groups in two or three years, this is daily love, and there is no business development), and the middle is daily life with the heroine, The result..., What is written, the loopholes are so big, the protagonist is stupid and stupid, and there are also interspersed with the pursuit of heaven, time and space return, etc. Let's not talk about it for now, I just want to know, that day Taoist Let's talk about the villain, how the protagonist lived in the past, and the mission arranged by Tiandao. She didn't even confirm it. Let's not talk about it anymore. She arranged for the other party to turn around and then fight against the protagonist. Opposite is the top chaebol lady, and there is the Tiandao boss above, and the protagonist... The protagonist is not dead, and it is protected by Tiandao. By the way, the protagonist in the future will definitely cheat, otherwise...

The setting is too fragmented, and the flaws are very obvious. It gives the protagonist the ability to write a story and realize it, and he clearly knows that he is being hunted by Heaven. The main plot must at least be to fight against Heaven or avoid Heaven to start the plot. But after being thrown out of the setting of Tiandao, still continuing to fall in love daily can be said to be a complete failure. It can be said that it is set for the sake of setting, which is superfluous. On a ten-point scale, the writing can be given 7.5 Points, the setting can only be given 4 points, and the plot rhythm before the Tiandao setting is thrown out can be given 8 points. The old bottle wanted to hold new wine, but a stone sank into it. The wine was not full and the bottle broke.

When I saw Meng, I didn't want to read it anymore. The protagonist's low-class, middle-aged lady's money-hungry attitude at the beginning was very alien to me, especially since I copied several copies of the novel a month. I almost couldn't watch it anymore. And the novel he wrote came true? Don't you also look at the garbage protagonist created by the author? ? ?

You traveled through time and entered a world of comprehensive animation. By copying classic comic novels and light novels from your previous life, you made a lot of money in this world As a result, you found that there were several very good novels at the same time as you, and even you also I have read The first one is a mecha novel There is also a crime novel There are also a few comics Until one day, Sasuke Uchiha came to see you with a knife Many other characters in your works also came It's up to you Characters in the manga Knowing that you pulled out long-lasting memories from your own memory You find that this is actually a world view that is integrated with the creator The villain boss in this world view can pull some tasks out of the anime Intervening in the second dimension and the real world You imagine, Sasuke, and Zeref, characters from the pirate world, characters from the Bleach world, and many other characters from anime and novels,

Sure enough, when I scrolled down and read all the other reviews, they were all on chapters 30 to 40. This was the point where I gave up on this book.

Does anyone know of a fanfic that writes about Rental Girlfriend

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?