
I Can Control a Magical Girl for Ten Seconds
我能操控魔法少女十秒
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 118k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Original Fantasy
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
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51Chapters
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The settings are a bit bad. Basically, it's still a Japanese style of early magical girl singles, and it doesn't match the settings. According to the background setting, there must be a complete set of selection, training, followers, special cars, special planes, logistics, assists, rescue, comfort, summary, scientific research... A complete system that provides food and clothing for millions of workers. When fighting, there will be a group of assistants responsible for defense, pulling, and seduction. Only the most important attacks and the most dangerous parts require magical girls to do it.
About me controlling a magical girl to do whatever I want within ten seconds
What a terrible title. Now newcomers don't understand what starting point tomatoization means. However, the writing is very smooth and a lot of effort must have been put into it. The title and introduction are almost meaningless. It's best to take the time to change it. Speaking of which, hasn't the tax on magical girl themes been collected by Green Tea 80 years later?
The text and creativity are okay.
The introduction is not good, and the plot is too fast-paced, leaving no room for foreshadowing or breathing.
Can you please stop civilians from being so confused? Magical girls are still kind-hearted. What about national propaganda and spiritual symbols?
Can you continue writing it?
The subject matter is okay, the description is okay, but the pitfalls are huge. Can the author continue writing it?
The starting point collection monster is here and has been collected.