But I’m Not a Magical Girl

Let me say something nice first, I'm afraid I'm too hasty for the author This is not bad, it's plain and simple, the idea is not bad, the little girl playing around is not bad Then I'm going to start talking Male protagonist, you will start to put psychological pressure on the male protagonist in a few chapters... I won't express it for now, you can write it. But what do you mean by updating the last two chapters today? I don't see the use of the "monk" personality that you have put so much effort into creating ——It may be that you haven't had time to write yet, but that doesn't stop me from scolding you first. After all, you have laid so much groundwork in front of me that it really feels like this thing is a blackened template, or it gives people the impression that this monk will transform into a magical girl as soon as he goes online Speaking of the magical girl transformation, I have to say it again You, the male protagonist, transform... Do you think it is a high imitation now? What is a high imitation? It means that you, the magical girl, are fake Of course, you may have plans later, so let's not talk about it for now... ... Don't say it at all You can become a magical girl and you still have tragedy, so what have you changed into, and what have you protected? Really, the last two chapters you wrote today made me feel uncomfortable Sudden literary youth, sudden tragedy I'm sorry, you have already written the supporting role for me Character arc? What about arc light? I only saw a good man who did his duty and died And your male protagonist was just recalling the past, and then killed someone else once You can't do anything Really, I don't understand what you mean by writing this out of the blue br>Really, my friend There is also a little girl who has become a magical girl ... Well, I can't say that, she is just a child Sudden memories, get rid of them, you just added it at the end of the last chapter, now you are killing me with memories? I'm having a fight with someone else I've written a lot. Oh, author, take a look. If it doesn't work, you can add a chapter What you wrote has no beginning or end

The climax of your plot is that the good guy seems to be killing the bad guy, and then the protagonist has a schizophrenia and pretends to be schizophrenic, leaving a few words to the magical girl who likes the protagonist and running away? Where's your profile😰Now there's a bunch of chatter about a schizophrenic psychotic giant baby who messed up everything about himself, and then said in a coquettish way that I will kill good people even if they survive, and finally ran away? Is it a bit too much of a stream of consciousness? I don't dare to pursue you. Even if you want to go in the direction of a magical girl, I have nothing to say. Now it's like unbuttoning your trouser pockets and stuffing yourself into a bag of bad things, which has completely confused the characters and readers. Then the heroine will work hard to become stronger and then find the protagonist and then do [I will break your limbs and take you back to the town] and [I will correct you! This passionate comic unfolds

I haven't been in a good mood for a while. I haven't read enough to get into the first round of recommendations. There's nothing I can do about it. I thought maybe I could get into it if I got 100,000 words and got a smart recommendation. Now there are 100,000 words, and what follows is the climax of the first volume. I will use everything I have, and please lend me your follow-up reading. Please!

Gua, when I learned about this book, I had already run out of investment opportunities this month 😭

It feels like so far, writing in the early stages is relatively slow. Nowadays, most people are impatient. How should I put it? The gender-changing magical girl genre is what many people want to see. The protagonist's struggle with gender. Become a magical girl and fight monsters, and post daily routines. But as of now, the early stages of this book are a bit like cultivating immortality, but it's just a magical girl. Of course, that doesn't mean you can't write like this. But I still think so. These early stages can be written as extras or something like that. At present, it seems that there is basically nothing exciting in the early stage, and it feels very slow. But now many people are more impetuous and find it difficult to calm down and watch. Chapter 42 ends. The protagonist only transformed three times in total, and only showed his face twice. The third time was the fight. And it's also crushing, and it's very fast. There are too few transformation links. I read the author's comments and said that the climax of the first volume is approaching recently. But the problem is that you were so mediocre in the early stage and no one watched it. No matter how wonderful your later writing is, no one will read it. Personally, I always feel that unless you have absolute confidence in your writing style. Otherwise, if you don't have a fan base, it's best not to write slow-burning articles. First write a few books with four to five hundred chapters. A cool ending. The pace is a little faster. Let's accumulate some fans and talk about it later.

Is the weird incident in the new chapter a reference to the ungrateful comic book Utopia in Birds of Paradise, a sweatshop that purely exploits people? When I was 24 years old and just graduated and entered the industry, I heard this kind of thing, and I immediately ran away from the industry for fear that I would be exploited in a similar way.

Uh, what are you writing in the last two chapters? Why do you feel that the plot is a bit fragmented, not to mention that what you wrote seems a bit... Jiangnan flavor is too strong. It is really difficult to hold on. The first volume is like this. The second volume is probably not the same as the next door "Loan and Become a Magical Girl", it is all cut out.

Fill it with camellia sauce, meow~ Fill it with camellia sauce, thank you, meow~

What is the name of the author's previous book? I want to see it.

Oh damn, if no one reads the last page, Vadasi——