The System Reward Is the Corpse of a Magical Girl

After reading the third chapter, I discovered that the mortality rate of magical girls in this world is extremely high (generally less than one year) (pure consumables). With such a high mortality rate, the world has not become a magical girl for all people. I feel that the transformation of the magical girl mentioned is still random, and my father also died very quickly after inheriting his mother's magical girl profession It's a bit annoying

I feel like the author will give up writing it within a hundred chapters.

The setting and world view are innovative, and it can be seen that the author deliberately shapes the cruelty of the world view. In the first few chapters, people keep dying, even traditionally important characters like childhood sweethearts. But the author treats these characters too casually. In many cases, there is no foreshadowing or follow-up at all. It seems that it is just to create a cruel atmosphere. Readers will naturally have a feeling of whether these people are refreshed every day. As far as my personal taste is concerned, I would like to read some stories with a faster pace and a heavier experience in such a background setting. A typical case of this kind is Attack on Titan, which also has a relatively cruel setting, but through the extremely fast pace in the early stage, readers can directly enter this unique world view. The author's choice seems a bit unwise to me. Obviously, you can use the dead childhood sweetheart as a foreshadowing to create greater pressure, and then quickly advance the plot development and use a faster pace to catch the readers. But the author writes as if nothing happened. It is clear that someone close to the protagonist has died, and the protagonist himself is about to die, but the reading experience does not feel oppressive at all.

This book is too boring and can't be read. And there are still many shortcomings. A big gimmick was set up in Chapter 1, saying that the protagonist will die within a week. I'll find out later. The cause of death was a ruptured heart, followed by the disappearance of the heart inside. The first question is why not upgrade to Lei level as soon as possible. Now that I know I will die within a week. And the cause of death was also known. Why not increase your strength as soon as possible to deal with the subsequent crisis. You have to hold it in, what are you doing? Is it possible that after three years of being a magical girl, he still has some luck? The second thing is that the system has no sense of existence at all. Except for a corpse drawn by lottery in the first few chapters, it has never appeared at all later. It has not been mentioned at all. It's really strange. A systematic document. The system is written down. It's a bit abstract The third is that some characters are too intellectual. For example, the taxi driver has been in disaster for so many years and still can't run. How did he live to middle age How to say? The author of this article may want to write a suspenseful and dark magical girl novel. But the problem is at present. I only see the protagonist drifting with the crowd, and his strength has not improved. Tends to a show-off mentality. It's like waiting to die. Another reason is that society is too repressive. It makes it very uncomfortable to watch. There is nothing exciting, and the system has no sense of existence

To be honest, this story can be written well, but it obviously feels that the author has not thought about how to write it later. It will probably be completed quickly. Don't finish it too fast. You have written so much. What do you call it if you finish it quickly for a fee?

Many people in this genre like to write people as mentally retarded and the protagonists as idiots. You can just read them without thinking.

The protagonist is really conflicted, his left and right brains are constantly fighting each other, and the system has no sense of existence. He will die after writing more than a hundred chapters like this. If you ask me, you should just stop turning into a magical girl. Turn into a monster or a witch. It doesn't matter whether you are good or bad in human form. After the transformation, the habit of having left and right brains fighting each other at least has an explanation. I probably won't read it again, but I still want to tell the author that the main character's reaction in the novel cannot be the same as the author's. He is not a prophet. I felt quite disconnected in Chapter 70 or 80. Why should I be so arrogant about the only hope of saving my life? Later I found out that it was the author's fault, my mother's legacy. The setting was okay, but the author needs to write more to solve this problem.

Why not tell readers? Isn't it because of Lei? Looks dizzy

This system doesn't have a strong sense of existence and is of little use.

The overall atmosphere has always been depressing, and the villains are written to look the same. The system appeared for a while at the beginning and then disappeared. The character conflict is also very average. The main reason is that the NPC is too brainless, or the protagonist Shi Lezhi In the end, it doesn't feel like a magical girl. Except for this ability, which is called a magical girl, the rest cannot be seen as a magical girl.

Is the body only your own? Are the ones you drew previously out of stock?

In addition to the official starting point, this is my second post. I want to be a real veteran and follow the author. Liu Ming is not a good friend.

It feels like the author has given away a lot of takeaways? She is a takeaway magical girl. 😅

I have always felt that writing other than stories is a very personal thing. A writer inviting a stranger to read his words is equivalent to having prepared a cup of tea, dressed up, and expectantly opening the door of his heart to invite you as a guest So friends, please be more patient. Even if you only stay here for a moment, you must have the etiquette that a guest should have.

Let's just say, can't the author update 800 times a day? 🙂

Wow, newbie? There are very few posts. The writing rhythm is very good, I support it.

At the moment, I can still feel the desire to read it as I read it, but the pace is too slow and there are too few updates. There is no drama behind the corpse that was promised, and there is only one corpse until now The most important thing is that there are obviously two chapters a day, but there is an illusion that it has not been updated ()

Finally revealed a little bit about the threat after becoming a bud and why the body is in a state of no buds It can be regarded as writing this that has been hanging on people and makes people feel uncomfortable.

So why does the protagonist hide his identity from his relatives?

You'll die faster than our G-series running team. The speed of hair cutting cannot be compared.

It looks awkward. It creates a depressing atmosphere and gives people a playful and smiling look. It feels very emotionally incoherent.

The protagonist is a senior magical girl who has the only spiritual sustenance for her sister's future that she cannot let go of. When the personal cheat system provided him with news of his impending death, he instead used evasion to reduce the possibility of appearing at the scene and prevent himself from finally becoming no longer human. For the time being, monsters of different levels are constantly popping up in the plot, but the murderer with wisdom and special abilities gives at least half the chance to become the human world. The human world is the place where monsters train humans into magical girls as living resources (similar to MH directly collecting materials from living monsters).

Is the author no longer on the shelves? It's almost over

Have you ever been a magical girl? Some things are written randomly, taking it for granted

I have to say that when I think about it, I asked a question on Zhihu...