Gou Learns Witchcraft in Another World

There is no detective work, and the supernatural is not extraordinary. It is just wearing the skin of a detective, looking for some residue after the supernatural happened to inhale. However, the author's writing skills are not bad, and the writing is fluent for the time being.

The previous plot was a bit dry, but still watchable. Ever since I cut off Smith's line and added Nina's line, the reading experience has declined directly. Many authors don't write heroines because they are really bad at writing. You are the same, the writing is a piece of shit. I really don't understand. Didn't you read it yourself? What did you write?

I originally thought that after opening Nina's line, the plot would speed up and usher in the first small climax, and the world view and local wizarding forces would be further revealed. The plot turned out to be much more boring than before, and the viewing experience was not good. No one would like to work for someone else. Before, the protagonist was the leader after all, and had the right to decide whatever he wanted to investigate.

As you continue to watch, the plot design is a little lighter. After so many chapters, it's time for a small climax. Originally, the detective story and the supernatural were parallel, but in the end, the detective story was also bland and the supernatural was bland. If your pen power allows, you can design a climax in parallel. If you are not sure, just design them separately. If there are another twenty or so chapters that are not outstanding, the book may not do well.

How did the author come up with such a retarded plot that he parachuted into the extraordinary and became the team leader? The previous writing was quite good, but suddenly it felt like I was fed a shit.

How do you get the confidence to name a book like this? 🙂

How is the plot of Nina written? It's stupid and arrogant to talk back. The key is that the protagonist hasn't improved his abilities for a long time and just sticks to this boring plot here. It makes me sleepy.

The author's ideas on combat are very good! First test the intelligence, consume the enemy, and win with the last blow

It was very dry at the beginning, and it is still very dry now. It is not interesting to write a detective story. It is just like a running account. It feels like the protagonist is fooling around with life. The pace is also very slow after he comes into contact with the extraordinary. The only thing that left an impression is the scene of killing the mouse. I wrote a chapter about applying for equipment and another chapter over there. Do you really think anyone likes to read this? How many times have you used the spell you learned without serious fighting in a few battles? At stage 2, there are only five times in total. Do you really plan to start writing the protagonist after a few million words and really start to enjoy the story?

It looks good, the author should stick to it.

I think it's pretty good, so I'll write it slowly and leisurely. Don't worry, I'll just read it slowly and leisurely. I'll give you my monthly vote. Big authors don't lack my vote or two to support new authors and new styles.

Anyone? 😠

Slightly slow to catch on, currently it's detective - looking for something to suck - detective - looking for something to suck. . .

It's pretty good. The writing makes readers feel safe. It's my favorite taste.

Smith's luck is too outrageous, what kind of foreshadowing could it be?

It's well written and has adventures in daily life. I quite like it. The setting is also good, the world view slowly unfolds, it is not impatient or impatient, and it is a rare good article. Are there any similar ones and no recommendations?

No one in the whole of Europe calls out the word "senior"

I went to three posts and two official posts

The extraordinary power of the foggy city parachuted into the police headquarters. Will the plot finally speed up?