
Holy Eyes: the Record of Clearing the Wrongs with National Style and Star Patterns
圣瞳:国风星纹洗冤录
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 138k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Eastern Xuanhuan
- Updated
- 3mo ago
- Source
- Qidian
Stats
0Monthly votes
4Recommends
0Fans
48Chapters
Synopsis
Reader comments
Readers also read
Global Mutation: My Collection Can Be Upgraded
Beastmaster: I Can See the Hidden Evolutionary Path
Extraordinary Saint, Lord of Dreams
Please Stay Next to Me, I'm Here to Fry the Fish.
I Am Unparalleled in Troubled Times
Corpse Hunter
Become a God from Water Monkey
Ordinary People: Start from the Yanjiabao Branch
I Made up Magic and Taught the World-Destroying Witch?
In the Name of Supernatural Power
Defeat the Entire World with the Power of a Dragon!
Gou Became a Saint in the World of Martial Arts
Omega Vision: Book Spirit Star Pattern Cuts the Ruins
Just became the first investor
After reading it for 30 minutes, I felt that the text was quite good, so I was curious why no one had invested in it. For my investment, if you, the author, read the comments, I will tell you my suggestions. This book is completely ruined by the title and introduction, and these two are the most important. The title has too many elements and is very complicated. It includes holy scriptures, national customs, star patterns, and a record of vindication. A normal person would have no idea what these three are at a glance, and they would be confused. Who would actually click in to see what this is? A good title should let people know at a glance which section of the book it is and what kind of story it tells. Then there is the introduction. When readers are looking for a book, the first two lines of the introduction will be displayed before they click on it. However, your first two lines are a bunch of complicated nouns, so readers still cannot understand what you are writing, and they do not seduce the curiosity to click into the text. Please change it, it will definitely become a hit. The original setting is really good.