While I Am Still in the World of Cultivating Immortals, I Will Build Immortality with Tao Fruits.

Getting better and better

It's well written, has details, and has good character settings.

I'm curious as to what the author would name the monkey🙂

Hello everyone, the author hereby sincerely asks for a follow-up reading! And I hope everyone can give their opinions so that I can understand the problem and make progress in the future. After tomorrow, the monthly ticket will have no impact on the score of the work, so I hope you can vote for two today and tomorrow!

To be honest, the golden finger of your book is very good, and the writing power is not bad. Two poisonous points. The first spiritual plant introduction has an immortality fruit. Shouldn't that be the golden finger of the protagonist? Why is there such a spiritual plant that defies heaven? If there is, then there must be many immortals in this world of immortality! Second, since the protagonist is an immortal, then join a sect or join a family. In the early stage, you have also thought about it. After getting along for a long time, others will inevitably find out, so Qingxiu is the king. Third, your subject matter is really good, but you should not use such a bad street spiritual root. Classical fairy tales, you must be a high-quality one, but if you set the spiritual root, you will really fall behind Fourth, it is still a cliché. Immortality is more behind the scenes. Although you are still in the early stage, you should have a higher B level. You should build your own dojo in the early stage. You don't need a good spiritual land. But you are an immortal. You can cultivate it yourself slowly. Fifth, since you are already an immortal, the ultimate goal of cultivating immortals is your starting line. What you lack is the means of protecting the way and sustainable resources. Then this should be your cool point and selling point.