Daily Game, I Can See the Voices of Animals

It's pretty good, but the author's writing is a bit too God-like or a bit self-indulgent, and the rhythm is a bit weird. The distinction between the characters' appearances and actions is not obvious, it is too full and not accurate enough, and many places are not clear enough. To put it simply, the transition is not overly dramatic, the characters appear without any foreshadowing or details, they jump out suddenly and then leave immediately, the supporting characters, passers-by and even the protagonist have no focus ( ppt-style appearance (with a lot of text next to the character's appearance to mark the introduction of the character), and the writing is about daily life, the writing is about animals, and the writing is about people. The transition is too fast and too hard, there is no room for emotions to ferment, and there is insufficient preparation: the cute details of the steamed buns, the tiger's wit and the feeling of a big cat, Lao Jin's restrained calmness, especially when the information is being sorted out, the feeling of sadness here is suddenly the next scene. There is also the appearance of an old friend. It is true that the son of an old friend is too exposed in the front and too dense, and he will immediately cause trouble in the back. And why did the old dean give the protagonist such high authority? The protagonist's career choice was too quick and hasty, with insufficient preparation. The author is splicing the story together with events, but the rhythm of the story is completely lost, it is too anxious.

It's pretty good, it looks very comfortable, just for daily use, but the game has the warmth of daily life and the adventure of the game.

It hasn't been updated for three days, so it won't be gone, right?