Guo Jing, the Condor Shooter: I Am the Zhou Shizu

To be honest, it's not interesting. Zhuge Liang started to be brought out in the first few chapters. I don't know why, but many authors write ancient texts according to the ideas of later generations. Since you were thinking about fighting for hegemony during that period, you should try your best to ignore or even belittle the Shu Han characters. As a political figure, there should be no clear fan filter. History always serves current politics. Respecting Liu and demoting Cao was the ideological output of the Southern Song Dynasty in order to maintain a corner of peace while claiming orthodoxy. Since you have decided to treat the Southern Song Dynasty as an enemy, you cannot play within the other party's rules. The most practical way is to restore the Tang system, invite Cao Cao back into the Imperial Temple, and move Liu Bei out. In this way, you can directly use Fa Tong to compete with the Southern Song Dynasty. It is not that the blood theory formulated in the Southern Song Dynasty is not a human being inside and outside. Tang Dynasty - Later Tang - Later Zhou - Your Zhou, this is a complete set of legal inheritance. What if you fall into the legal system established by the Southern Song Dynasty and become emperor? How to combat its ideology?

Guo Jing is the original stock of Mongolia. He can definitely inherit the Mongolian Yuan and then restore the Han Dynasty to conquer the world. Historically, the Mongolian Yuan Dynasty only knew how to fight but not govern. With the addition of China, Mongolia will fight from the front and China will govern from behind. It is not impossible for the whole of Asia and even Asia, Europe and Africa.

The writing style is very good, and there are no poisonous points. Just pay attention to the rhythm. I saw that 70% of the latest chapter is about the protagonist's layout in the Central Plains, and the remaining 30% is about the Jianghu. It is not impossible to write like this, but this book is in the name of shooting the Condor. I found this book through a search for "Shooting Eagle". I was preconceivedly expecting plots such as wandering around the world, love and hate, and martial arts battles. However, what I saw was that the protagonist was doing business with two countries and competing with the court. I was inevitably disappointed. But after reading it yesterday, I put down the Dangwu novel to read the plot, and it is excellent to read it as a historical time travel novel. If the author focuses on history, it would actually be better to delete the "Condor Shooting" in the title of the book. Otherwise, people who come here for a long time to read about the Condor Shooting fandom will not be able to see the content of the Condor Shooting. If you want to continue to write a combination of martial arts and hegemony, you should pay attention to the ratio of the two. In the early stage, martial arts 60% and hegemony 40%, like this The proportion will be better. In the mid-term, the proportion of hegemony will be adjusted to that of martial arts. Because in the early stage, martial arts and power are weak and need to be developed, and the real highlights of martial arts fantasy are mostly concentrated in the period of the protagonist's progress and growth. In the mid-term, when the martial arts is strong and there are not many opponents, there will not be much to write about in the world, so it is natural to focus on the struggle for hegemony. Speaking of which, I always felt that there was something weird about Fuxue yesterday. Now I realize that Guo Jing in the original novel is simple and upright, and in that plot, Guo Jing was able to defeat the civil servant group of the Song Dynasty. Although I knew he was a time traveler, the stereotype of Guo Jing caused a sense of contrast. After reading that episode, I felt that it was well written. In general, it is a very well written book. It is a pity that the book is not popular. It may be due to the subject matter. But if you keep writing it, the author's writing style will definitely make it popular slowly. Good luck to the author.

Everything else is okay, but the description of the Tomb Sect is a bit biased. It is obviously based on my own perspective and writes them all in a bad light.

The pace of this book is too slow. And martial arts turns to Machiavellian tactics. It's starting to get boring.

I drag Leianda to death. I no longer have the heart to distinguish between right and wrong. I live forever in the sky. I want the blood of his enemies to spread all over the grassland. ——Guo Taizu's Northern Expedition to the Grassland🤓

Don't forget that after the protagonist learns internal strength, he is not as good as his original self, and Guo Jing should not be ugly, otherwise Cheng Yaojia would not like Guo Jing and intends to give her body to him, but he will repay the favor by being a cow and a horse in the next life.

Martial arts is written about fighting for hegemony, and fighting for hegemony is written about martial arts. What a fucking genius.

This title is all about Guo Jing avoiding the original work and holding on to Xiangyang until his death. It does not describe Guo Jing's status in Mongolia and the expansion of his army, his attack on the Jin Kingdom, and the reaction of the Han military princes in the north. The Southern Song Dynasty learned that the protagonist's surname was Guo and he was called the King of Zhou. Instead, it wrote a lot of political plots in front of it, which was very boring. To sum up, it was nothing more than becoming famous and obtaining trade routes and financial resources. Is this something well written? It's not bad, but it has nothing to do with what readers want to see. It can definitely be a transition in a few chapters. And I feel like the protagonist is a bit unclear in doing this. Like the logic of female videos, reputation is very important. What are the crimes and legitimacy of the Manchu Qing Dynasty? Isn't it better to persevere until modern times?

Guo Wei's whole family is dead, how can there be any real blood of the Guo family?

Moreover, he has a petty attitude and lacks any spirit.

More than fifty chapters, all over the world? I thought I would go back to play military hegemony soon

This oath of Luoshui still needs to be kept. After all, everyone knows the fate and name of Sima Yi's descendants , and the financial backers are already sixty-two, and they will be nearly seventy when they capture him in the future. There is no problem in raising him It won't be a problem.

It's not a martial arts novel, it's 80% Machiavellian writing.

You reminded me very well: Guo Jing, whose surname is Guo, can be used as the subject of the accusation against the Song Dynasty...

First order on the shelves, spend money to watch the main character suffer

The writing style and content are both good. It's a pity that the history written in martial arts is usually based on the interest in martial arts, promoting major events, and making great efforts. However, the writing style is not civilized and martial, and it feels awkward if you don't read it. So it's not that your writing is bad, it's that you don't write what I expect. You have to write orthodox farming counter-tweets and rebellion articles, but you don't have that temperament.

I read the first volume of another book, but this one was not powerful enough. Unfortunately, the second volume of the other book fell apart.

When I write a fanfic, I kill Guo Jing's mother at the beginning. It's too poisonous.

You can write more about territory occupation and management, as well as the selection of talents In the later stage, if the rule is just mentioned in one sentence, it will be too skinny There are also subordinates, you should write more

Therefore, after Guo Jing was brainwashed, he could at most be regarded as an overseas Han who brought his own dry food to fight against the Mongols. With such a background, it was impossible for a ruler to let Guo Jing defend the city. Guo Jing could at best be regarded as a royalist. Guo Jing's starting point for defending the city was loyalty to the emperor, not the people. Protecting the people of Xiangyang was incidental. It's a bit like Che Guevara going to other countries to help resist aggression (Guo Jing is not considered a Song person based on his place of origin, but is considered an overseas person based on his place of settlement), but the difference is that Che Guevara is for the people at the bottom.

Mongolia is broken into pieces like this

So Mu Nianci should give it to Yang Kang? ? ?

Even the timeline of The Condor World is written by the author in a messy way.

It's okay. The author's historical writing is actually better. He has pure history and a little martial arts elements. The author's history alone is better than many historical writers. Of course, I've only read Chapter 40 and haven't read the follow-up yet. The results of this book don't look very good. I hope the author can keep writing.

"I am"! Horrible title!

Huang Rong

The writing is good, but it's too smooth and there are no dangerous twists and turns. After reading 100 chapters, I was numbed by the pleasure and then became tasteless.

Many people don't realize that the ancient army was very fragile, and the national system was also very fragile. In the late Yuan Dynasty, Fan Meng, a small official, killed all the ruling officials in Henan Province, which caused most of the Red Scarf Army to revolt from the ground, let alone the martial arts masters. And the setting of Qinggong is even more buggy, it can easily destroy a national military organization

In fact, Guo Jing can kill indiscriminately if he uses his vulture archery skills freely.