Peninsula: Counterattack from Defeat

The author asks you to read some information. Eiko during the pill period has nothing to do with the sense of coldness. I started pretending it after I became popular during my marriage period.

Too bland. It feels like completing tasks in a web mini-game, one after another. The plot is skipped, the running account is the same

It's too bland, the dialogue is almost NPC-like.

It's very awkward. It's written in a literary and artistic style. It's too awkward.

There are so many shortcomings that I don't know where to start. If you are a full-time student, the author recommends finding a class. Are you writing a novel or a collection of dialogues between characters? . . The subject matter is pretty good. . . You have written about the top five generations. But it was too bland, not like reading a novel.

There was a bit too much dialogue. I suggest you reduce it a bit. The number of words in one chapter is not that many and there are so many chats...

Thank you. You say too much and your head gets big. We are close, so don't say thank you anymore.

Not this. . . A breath of ancient Korean entertainment dragon pride

I found that in many Peninsula articles, the authors did not have a very serious and clear understanding of copyright and singles. The Korean producer has a very high status. Bieber's song made at least several hundred dollars that month. Some singles made more money than the album.

I need to post a picture, it's a bit like an AI article

Good novels with pig, pig and snake heroines +1

I feel like I'm reading the outline 🙂

I hope the system rewards won't be about money. It's unnecessary. Otherwise, why would you make a debut? The proportion of your presence shouldn't be too high. Just come out occasionally. Then the heroine should be better portrayed and don't write from a fan's perspective. So far, it's okay. Come on.

How should I put it? It's not interesting. It's a routine article. It's ok but I hope there will be a step-by-step process. If you look at the good writing, there will be a slight twist 🙂

I'm not the author. I don't know if you wrote it yourself or if it was modified by AI. Your general content and format are similar to the outline I set for Doubao. What he gave me is very similar, and there is nothing routine at all 😂

Emmmm, it looks too bland. You can talk about singing and get an audience's evaluation, or let the protagonist participate in some variety shows. The plot is really bland now, just sing and sing and send a message to say thank you, and then continue the cycle. I have no desire to watch anymore.

AI writing, the routines are the same

Many authors have a big difference between the world and Korean music. Why many people want to go to the United States to make a career is because the United States is very profitable. This is only one and two. It's because the United States can make the world famous. I'm not nitpicking. I read a lot of Peninsula articles' summaries. Why do American music singers make money? They don't make money from albums. They make money from the popularity of one song. You are like many rappers.