Peninsula: Goal Slam

(2026.8.12, Comments after the publication of Chapter 242) This book is very strange 1. His writing style is not that good, but it is definitely not bad; 2. Many plots are extremely cliche, but many plot settings are very smooth; 3. This book can be regarded as a Korean entertainment article, but in fact, compared to other Korean entertainment articles, the most attractive thing is tennis; 4. This book is also a very old-fashioned systematic sports article, but its Korean entertainment attributes have attracted many readers from non-sports circles. For a separate sports article and a separate Korean entertainment article, this can only be regarded as an ordinary novel to pass the time, not even reaching the mid-level level. But for readers who span both circles, this article is a rare upper-middle-level novel. At the same time, everyone in a single circle can regard it as a novel without threshold. Pure Korean entertainment readers can use this article to open up the tennis and even sports circles, and pure sports readers can also use this article to open up the Korean entertainment industry. I have to say it is very amazing.

Don't be a eunuch

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

In what age is this kind of compulsory system still in place? Don't worry, it's on the new book list now. You can continue writing. If it's on the high-quality list, I'll take it.

The plot development is too slow, and sadistic main stories are no longer popular nowadays. It has been dozens of chapters and it has not yet entered the main line.

I don't know if it's the author's style or something, but the writing is too literary. The tennis part is okay, but the Korean entertainment part is particularly awkward. It's a bit uncomfortable to read like this, and tennis and Korean entertainment are a bit incompatible. You just played heartily on the court, and suddenly you cut off the emotional line of Korean entertainment and all kinds of literary youths. It's so disconnected.

The writing is very good, but it is too literary. It is okay to write about love, but it feels awkward to write about sports. The passion for sports events is not written at all. It is only written to be awkward and hard to read.

It's so shameful that I only have 4,000 words after using AI.

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For example, if Faker and Son Heung-min want to play female stars, it may be as easy as drinking water. The main character is set to be the most handsome and can win the championship. He will definitely be out of the industry. In Korea, his social status cannot be soared like a rocket. The female stars he talks about are considered to be high-flying.

See the latest chapter so far. How can I put it, the overall flow of the story is pretty good. There are many AI sentence patterns in the early stage, but it will be relatively better later. I don't know why the Korean Wave as a whole treats the protagonist with a condescending attitude whenever he appears. Then the classic belittles it, and then later finds out that the protagonist is a child or some real situation, and then suddenly the reputation is good and the story changes. This writing method has been used several times. The most commonly used writing method is to write a lot of depressive writing methods for Balabala, and then after a while, you find out that the protagonist is actually Balabala or something, and your favorability begins to increase. Then the entire novel feels dull, not at all like Korean entertainment or sports literature. It seems extremely boring. There are interesting parts, but it is still a bit boring. It is kind of interesting to read, but it just doesn't make you happy. I have wanted to delete the book several times, but I thought the story was okay, so I kept it.

What is Shura Field? Professional athletes don't think about this when they compete. It's not professional at all. They can still lose. It's boring.

I feel that the age of the main character is set too young. The female characters are much older than the main character. There is a lot of ambiguity in my heart. I always feel that the female character is taking advantage of the main character. After all, the main character is a handsome 17-year-old who is underage.

In the early stage, you can earn money and data, and then fall in love once you are famous. You can't go to high school like this. You have been having an affair with two girls for 100 chapters, and it's nothing. You're bragging so hard that you're so awesome. Isn't it the end of this kind of competition in the early stage? I've written 100 chapters and am still grinding in Novice Village. I'm convinced.

It's still a bit awkward. There are too many off-site conflicts, and the protagonist has a lot of psychological activities at every turn. There are too many psychological activities. Others are fine

I saw at the beginning that the main character is only 17 years old, which makes the heroine Fei Zhuhyun 30 years old. There is a difference of 13 years. The age gap is too big. It is equivalent to having a 40-year-old girlfriend when you are 27 years old.

It's too watery. I can't imagine how watery it will be after it's put on the shelves.

It's like forcibly arranging a white identity among black people. It's weird, isn't it? When you talk about Korean entertainment, a time-traveling Korean character would be more suitable. I don't quite understand the current novel environment.

If you use AI, you can update it quickly. The one next door uses AI to write 20,000 to 30,000 words a day.

Posted after voting for a monthly ticket. The protagonist is always looked down upon by those companies, always spread rumors, and then slapped in the face and then spread rumors again. An endorsement has gone through so many chapters and has not yet been finished. I want to know when I can play high-level games. And why did you suddenly add Taeyeon as the heroine? And if you classify it in the sports sector, then it must be the main business line. Your current career line is not attractive at all😦. If it is classified in the sports section, you can have one female protagonist Liu, or three female protagonists Liu + Baicai + Zhang Yuanying. And even in the Korean entertainment section, few people write about Kim Dong-hyung. Not many readers paid for her

The designed protagonist is under too much pressure. He is a senior in high school + abroad + an ordinary family + zero foundation, and the system is still mandatory. I can see that the protagonist is trying his best and fighting for his life, but this is physical. The protagonist is cruel to himself. I absolutely approve of his attitude. But what about psychologically? Why tennis? Why can the protagonist accept such a disgusting system? You can't just accept your fate. I didn't see how much the protagonist wanted to get ahead and stand shoulder to shoulder with the female star. What I felt was that the female star threw down a rope and the protagonist pulled her up, not that the protagonist believed in his heart that he wanted to stand on the top of the mountain. You can't endure suffering all the time, you have to use your inner strength to move forward! Of course, the daily sweet articles are really well written and it's a pleasure to read. But if the core doesn't complement each other, the sweetness won't complement each other, but will overshadow it.

There is a medical text next door that was good at the beginning, but it is only a few hundred chapters in. The ball is still in the hand and has not been shot. Why are there so many female accounts if you don't even shoot a single ball? You have a system to talk about love and launch it directly!

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I beg the author not to do what Chen Gou does. Sometimes readers just want to watch a sweet romantic comedy and don't want to watch a Shura field where there is bitterness and hatred 😭

Many people say it's a waste of time Use AI to write more, obviously Qidian does not support AI You are still asking the author to go against the trend, the big authors are changing, you want the author to say it straight Some people are just joking, some have bad intentions, and some are just real fools

I'm looking for books, is there anything similar to this book? I'm really fed up with the Korean entertainment books on the market. Most of the male protagonists' careers are related to the entertainment industry. It's really boring.

If you need to reduce it, reduce it. Looking at each other so smartly that your scalp goes numb.

Once you use AI, use it hard! It's not going to be on the list anyway, so please update more!

Since you already use AI, can't you update more? The manual player next door updates 5 times a day, but your AI updates at least 10 times a day. Now, if you can't get into that ranking list anyway, it will only hurt your sales.

Is there any meal replacement? I'm afraid it will be discontinued based on this update.