The Right Way for a Charming Player to Navigate Infinite Worlds

The plot moves too fast. Recruiting these Liangshan heroes is easier than farming for different colors in the game "Rock Kingdom," and there's no character arc. Although characters from famous works are memorable, if your writing is uninspired and just a rambling account, even if you include 108 famous characters, it's not as good as carefully describing one character.

The idea is good, but the plot is a bit abrupt? 😵 For example, when that woman suddenly recognized the protagonist and teamed up with him, my first reaction was that I must have missed something. 😰 I guess it's because I just saw the author explain in the comments that using their real name is fine and would confuse their appearance, but they were recognized instantly after only a couple of chapters. 🧐 It feels really strange 🧐

I think I've read a similar book before. It also had this kind of talent. The first episode was about the Three Kingdoms period. I was transformed into Yuan Shao or someone else. I remember the beginning was okay, but it started to fall apart later.

After the Tang Dynasty, could scions of minor aristocratic families be considered noble and powerful? In the Song Dynasty, at the very least, this term should be used to describe the sons of high-ranking officials who held the position of military governor. How could a scion of a minor aristocratic family dare to stage an incident?

There are a few minor issues, such as the NPC at the beginning calling the player Yang Sha "Young Master Zhang," but the protagonist's name is Yang Sha without mentioning his surname Zhang. Also, the female player mentions that the atmosphere outside the mountain god temple has changed, but there's no prior mention of her ability to read the atmosphere. It feels like a setting or a line of dialogue suddenly appears without any prior setup.

The writing is alright, but one of the chapters is too long; it turns into reading about the Three Kingdoms.

Whether you're a charismatic player or a casual player, the most important thing is whether there's a mechanism for converting attributes into damage. For example, in Baldur's Gate 3, the Dragonvein Warlock's noble charm damage makes a Paladin invincible.

Author, you might as well just write about the Three Kingdoms.

Many readers have suggested that, although a patch was later added, it is still not appropriate, and the first instance should now be referred to by code names.

Readers are welcome to design innate skills for their favorite Liangshan heroes. Templates are shown in the text. (Note: Some innate skills that do not conform to moral principles will become optional later.)