The Right Way for a Charming Player to Navigate Infinite Worlds

The plot goes too fast. It's easier to recruit these Liangshan heroes than it is for me to play different colors in Rock Kingdom, and there is no character arc. Although the characters of famous novels come with their own memory points, the ones you wrote are not eye-catching. Even if you wrote 108 characters of famous novels, it is not as good as describing one character carefully.

The idea is good, but the plot is a bit sudden? 😵 For example, the woman suddenly recognized the protagonist and formed a team. My first reaction at the time was that I missed it 😰 Probably because I just saw in the comments that the author explained that it was okay to use his real name, as it would confuse his face, but he was instantly recognized within two chapters🧐 It always felt weird🧐

I seem to have read a similar book, and the talent is the same. The first game is the Three Kingdoms, and who is Yuan Shao? I remember that it was okay at the beginning, but it fell apart later.

Can the children of small aristocratic families after the Tang Dynasty be considered powerful and powerful? As for the Song Dynasty, wouldn't this word have to be used at worst to refer to the children of the Prime Minister's family who were the governor of the region? How dare a child of a small aristocratic family touch porcelain?

It can be seen that there are some minor problems. For example, the NPC at the beginning calls the player Yang Sha Mr. Zhang, but the problem is that the main character is introduced as Yang Sha and does not say his surname is Zhang. There is also the female player who said that the Qi outside the mountain temple has changed, but it was not mentioned before that she can look at the Qi. It just feels like a setting or a sentence suddenly comes out. But there is no foreshadowing ahead.

The writing is okay, but one copy is too long, and it becomes like watching the Three Kingdoms

Whether you are a charming player or an ordinary player, the most important thing is whether there is a mechanism for converting attributes into damage. For example, in Baldur's Gate 3, the dragon warlock's noble charm damage can be used to give the paladin invincibility.

Author, you might as well write about the Three Kingdoms

Many readers have made suggestions. Although it was patched later, it is still inappropriate. The first copy is now all called by code names.

Readers are welcome to design talents and skills for their Liangshan heroes. The template is as shown in the article. (Note: The talents of some unethical characters will later become pendants)