Douluo: Lu Mingfei Picked up Little Huo Niang at the Beginning

Can you add an original character named Herzog and Jiang Nannan, a pair of fateful mandarin ducks?

Super Fusion, Senior Lu Mingfei, Senior Huo Yuhao, Senior Li Xingyun, please lend me your power of light and fuse and sublimate Ultraman Orb's triple form. Cenozoic Alpha, Lu Mingfei, Huo Yuhao, fusion, Cenozoic Carpet, Cheng Xin, Li Xingyun, fusion and sublimation, I have no limits, Ultraman Zero has infinite forms, Dada is too strong.

The multi-female protagonists of this Douluo World currently include Huo Yutong, Gu Yuena, Wang Dong'er, Di Ruiqiu (Wang Qiuer in the original work), Meng Hongchen, Ye Guyi, Zhang Lexuan, and Ma Xiaotao. That's about it for now, there may be some changes in the future. This book is a reboot of the one I wrote before. Some plots will be changed and some will not. Everyone is welcome to discuss rationally, and I hope it can be approved this time.

What you wrote about Mingfei is really Mingfei. It's so simple.

Originally, the Dragon Clan was already a bitch, and the things in it were inexplicable and petty. Adding in the Douluo Continent, it really felt a bit like a fake carving, and the way it was written felt very much like a female channel. Please change the gender.

What can I say? It's written like a memoir. It completely abbreviates the plot of Dou Er and then inserts Lu Mingfei.

What you wrote is so exciting. It's clearly not Lu Mingfei, the hateful author. Please compensate me for my mental losses.

Over 130 chapters, Lu Mingfei has experienced the destruction of the world and the death of all his relatives and friends. Shouldn't he be particularly protective of those around him? At least Xing Luo's title should be banned half to death, and then let go without any price? What if Lu Mingfei, who had just entered Kassel, could still explain the past? This was because Lu Mingfei, who had experienced pain, had no temper at all?

Grilled Fish Dana and Little Huo Niang

Originally I didn't want to watch it when I saw Lu Mingfei, but because the heroine is Huo Niang, I recently decided to watch it with limited exemption.

Cute and arrogant Wang Donger

Chicken ribs, tasteless, tasteless to eat, a pity to throw away

You are really annoying. I see other people commenting that this is no different from the original work, except that Lu Mingfei was added to it, right? I have less and less desire to watch. It's been several days and the main line advancement has been almost zero.

It's almost a hundred chapters and no observers are here, so bad reviews 🤭

It's okay, but Lu Mingfei doesn't have that taste, and he didn't write that kind of childishness.

Why doesn't Lu Mingze change his sister?😌 And if he is still in Lao Lu and can see everything in his mind, then he will have to watch everything he does.

After reading Chapter 28, I have discovered two problems. No. 1 The author doesn't know if it's because he has his own ideas or some other reason? You like to change the original work, although there are certain benefits to doing so, such as serving Shuangdian. But first of all, the author has not figured out his position. You are a fanfic author. The original plot can be changed, but not randomly. You can't create cool points just for the sake of cool points. The main readers of your fan text are the readers of the original work. If you randomly change the plot, it will easily make the original readers uncomfortable. No. 2 The author is too hasty, which may be one of the reasons for the first problem. The two protagonists have not yet established their main characters, and they are already leaving very hastily. For example, Lu Mingfei's positioning can actually be used to set up the character of Gojo Satoru in Spell Return. But he has always been in an awkward and abstract position for me from the beginning to Chapter 28. It gives me the feeling of the male protagonist of a light novel.

When I saw Chapter 98, I didn't want to read it. It was too flat and didn't give readers a point to continue reading. What was the difference between the previous chapter and the original text? There were very few changes.

At the beginning, no one knew that Snow Emperor was going to rebuild. It was just luck. Otherwise, who would put a 600,000-year-old soul ring and soul bone on the auction house?

It's totally not enough, no, no, no, no, absolutely impossible! That's why! Overeating! Overeating! Our hearts and stomachs are trembling with excitement because of renewed joy and fullness!

Author, you know, I want to see the yandere transform into a little Huo Niang, shutting the prison road into a small black room and making money hard😋

But there is not much description of the plot of Ming Fei. I hope you can show off your coolness 🙂 and crush the Golden Eyes character.

I don't even take a look. Tang Ya was captured, right? Wait for a while

It looks pretty good, and I feel comfortable watching it.

🙂🙂

How can I put it, I always feel a little aggrieved. The protagonist didn't fight the Red King hard enough, so why did I feel a little weak when I got to the academy. Although it is said to be someone else's territory and one should be restrained, I don't understand why Ma Xiaotao let a little girl take action when she was bullied to the point of being bullied. Maybe my understanding is different, and my temper is quite explosive. In a place where force is paramount, things that can be solved by force are not used. I don't understand this either. Let's just talk about the part where Dai Huabin kneels down at the end of the freshman exam. Why is our Xiao Huo blocked in front of the protagonist? Can any old bookworms out there give you some advice? Is this book worth reading? Thank you.

Why didn't you see the way to the prison? Don't die Yan Ling🤔

I don't quite understand that Lao Lu obviously has the ability to kill or beat Xu Tianran, but up to now he has not even seen Xu Tianran (from Lao Lu to the Sun and Moon Empire). He knew clearly that the other party wanted to kill the people around him, but Huo Yutong escaped because of the means to save his life and the negligence of the Holy Spirit Cult. He also wanted to kill Lao Lu later. Although there was no way he could die, but these recent chapters you have written, it feels like Lu Mingfei has no temper. Don't you think it's a bit outrageous for a king to do nothing after being offended in this way, and to sit down and consider Xu Tianran's charity-like conditions (I didn't kill you, and now I'm asking you not to retaliate, as long as I don't disturb your territory later). What ability does the Sun and Moon Empire have to influence the way of prison? Both parties who can negotiate must have the bargaining chips. Obviously the Sun and Moon Empire doesn't even deserve to be on the table, so where is the face? Can you please stop writing like this? I can understand that Lu Mingfei wanted not to participate in these bad things in Douluo Continent, but his friends were hurt and did not take any action. This is a bit inconsistent with Lu Mingfei's character. Lu Mingfei is a person who can spend a quarter of his life again and again for his friends. So can the author hurry up and give a good ending to this incident? Don't let Xu Tianran suffer no loss, and the old battle strength is here. Can you write it more forcefully 🙂? The last two chapters are so good🐢

Can those who haven't seen Dragons understand?

Now that I have seen more than 130 chapters, what is the purpose of writing so many prison stories for others to tell, and does it advance the plot? It is also very abrupt. It is a competition, but the protagonist is a nanny at this age and does not participate in anything. I want to see Lao Lu use his invincible power to sweep Douluo. It is obvious that such a strong power is revealed in front of him, and he can kill the Soul King and Soul Emperor in a few times. All forces must be looking to win over the protagonist, so there is no need to worry about resources. Whether it's wandering around the world with a girl or joining a force to conquer all directions, it's all easy to write. In the end, it will definitely be about going to the God Realm to kill Tang San, and then interspersing it with some sweet daily life to complete the story. How should I put it? The invincible novel cannot describe the invincibility of the protagonist. Instead, it always writes about how bad he was in the past. In my opinion, the protagonist has been showing off but the people around him don't seem to realize it, and instead keep provoking the protagonist. I backhanded the White Tiger Duke's Mansion to ask him for an explanation. I covered this girl. You don't know who I am, but I will show you my strength. Then the protagonist sits in the grilled fish restaurant, and various forces and friendly people come to ask for cooperation. This kind of behind-the-scenes work is not impossible. Every reader who has read Dragon Clan knows about the protagonist's past. There is no need to write about it. Just write about the state of mind at that time and add a sentence or two. Now it's really boring to read more than ten pages. When the author sees it, he will reply and see what your thinking is. I don't have an outline