Twin Cities: Son of Zaun

The biggest mistake this batch of fanfiction about two cities made was writing too quickly. Most authors found themselves running out of material soon. Once they deviated from the dual-city setting established by the writers, the vast world of League of Legends simply couldn't handle it (even the official team seems unaware of this).

The main character, an indigenous person, isn't very interesting.

This is the best-written and logically structured novel I've found among the Twin Cities stories after watching the anime recently. Although I've said this three times already 😁, this one is truly excellent. In particular, the passages describing the characters perfectly match my feelings about the characters in the anime.

I also think this is the best Twin Cities fanfiction to date. For me, as long as it's not too disgusting, the female lead's issues are fine, and I think the author can control the romance. I feel the book's weakness lies in its lack of satisfying moments.

After reading the latest two updates, I think they're acceptable and alright. But I feel bad for all the money I spent on my book tickets and reading coins. It's really terrible. It seems like I wrote some changes, but it's just based on a few changes requested in the anime comments section, and then I replaced certain characters in the work with my own.

It all comes back to the same plot as the original. Why bother writing fanfiction? Just go watch the original show.

Lately, I haven't even had the desire to open a book. There's nothing that's appealing enough to make me want to keep reading. I've already complained about the boring plot development. It's like a real estate gangster boss is being treated like some kind of gentle protagonist in a Japanese anime.

It seems that Qidian (a Chinese online literature platform) is not suitable for stories that involve abuse of the main character.

What's the point of watching if the main character doesn't know the plot?

Can't you be clear about this? If you can clearly define it as a multi-female harem, I can continue reading and I'll give you as many tips as I can. If you can't, then don't be so vague; it's not good for anyone. If you're going to write a single-female lead story, don't include other female characters. If you really like Ike, why not make him the main character? 🤫