From Magical Girl to Breaking Through Cyberpunk

Aren't you the companion beast poet? Compared with him, Q Coin looks very kind.

I like to see the conflict and contrast between cyber society and the values ​​of magical girls, especially the protagonist, a normal person who is out of place in this society but has to work hard to survive, and as a magical girl, she subconsciously wants to break the world and bring hope to the world.

Rhodes: As a father, he is a real supermodel. He is also sincere in his love, but he is a bitter man. She even repays her kindness to her benefactor (and can backstab her for profit) Rhode's daughter (M): There is currently no character card. She is a little sister and a female imp. As a logistics hacker, she feels much more at ease after confirming that the protagonist is not malicious and cannot be offended. She may be able to become a sister-type character, but Rhodes is not mature enough to raise her, so the future is promising. The logistics partner who may have been stabbed in the back, has white-green hair, and was hit in the abdomen... Rhode's daughter (Mu): Her brain is burned out, and she has a sleep quality comparable to Sleeping Beauty. Nyao-chan: "Nyao-chan is a legal and sound cat girl magical girl. She is a good citizen. For the sake of the association, she must not cause trouble, nya!" Her friends are her bond. As long as she is tied to the association, she cannot make trouble with the protagonist at will. However, the association also has the main line of the association, so it seems impossible to be marginalized at the moment. She has outstanding abilities and is a good fighting force. Unfortunately, she is a stupid cat girl. Once you take off your basic defenses, it feels easy to trick someone into getting home. (A coupon can be defrauded) Yiko: She is just like a little animal, and her current performance is too little. I feel like she is the kind of person who only has two kinds of social relationships, complete distrust and complete trust. There is no way. Judging from her performance, her favorability towards the protagonist has increased too quickly. It should be because she has very few friends, but everyone is a true friend. There is no such relationship as an acquaintance or ordinary friend (no wonder it is a social fear). Callie 13: Caged bird, lacking the concept of good and evil, loves magical girls, and hates magical girls who do not meet his ideal. It may be a mini-boss or a future teammate. It mainly depends on whether the other party can be changed. Sutu160: A super nb elite who can climb from the bottom to a big family in District 13. Interests come first. He is not greedy for small profits and has far-sightedness. Progress is more important than life. It's a bit strange xp. Iris: A nuclear bomb on the face will not kill you, an absolute strong man, and the loneliness that comes from this. What taught her to love was——Lu Guo's sheets. Floating: He is not a human being. He is a delusional cyber qb with no malice towards his master, but he is too stupid and something will happen to him when he does things. What does it mean to "adapt to the times and let magical girls sell it?" Can you be more conservative with your experience? I'm a traditionalist. Mig 37: The big brother of the underworld, giving people a pure sense of peace of mind internally. Bulu Bulu: The underworld think tank, but his vision is too small, he can only be a stupid wolfdog. The general main line may be, anti-capitalist scourge, fight against the omnic crisis, and alien enemies. By the way, is there an outline for the Tianwai part? I was really afraid of writing this part badly. Supplement Dandelion: The ability in the association record is the wall of the heart. In order to maintain the state of mind, it is necessary to maintain a sense of distance from others. It is suspected that he has a strong ability to observe words and colors, and the possibility of reading minds cannot be ruled out. Generally speaking, abilities probably revolve around the probability of the mind. Joan of Arc: President of the Magic Protection Association, she is not a magical girl and cannot protect her, but she is an association. The background, motivation, and purpose are unclear, but it can be seen that he is a handful of people who care about magical girls after admonishing them for their impulsive behavior. I have very little experience in life and am a bit eager for success. Could it be that I actually have low self-esteem? Mary: A former magical girl, an older leftover girl, currently the mentor of the trio of magical girls, a scientific research talent, very good at refining magic embers, and even further developing new products for use with magic weapons.

It's nice to look at, the setting is novel, 💩I've eaten too much, and finally got something good.

I just added it to my bookshelf and haven't read it yet. The setting of your book reminds me of a magical girl novel in which the protagonist died suddenly in the middle. The protagonist was in the qb ecological niche. It was also in the cyberpunk style, but because the author made a mistake in the general direction, the readers rioted and died.

It's strange. The setting is novel, the characters are online, and the whole process is hilarious. Why are the results so poor? Is it because the core point is not clear enough? Or is it caused by the magical girl theme debuff.

In fact, this book is quite like a magical girl. The protagonist inherits the legacy of a failed hero, witnesses and experiences the suffering of the world, and in the process continues to get to know and unite partners, battle wits and courage with hostile forces, and persuade some enemies to change their ways, turn enemies into friends, and unite all forces to defeat the common enemy while growing stronger. How about calling it "Through the Cyber, Magical Girl's Hero Story"?

Seeing that spiritual magical girl invading the protagonist's mental space, I can only say that it's so classic, goodbye.

I think the problem may be that there isn't enough "fantasy" in science fiction and fantasy. Magical girls are inherently idealistic. When people are unable to overcome the current predicament by their own strength, magical girls lead the people forward with the power of miracles. And when people don't believe in miracles, the power of magical girls will also become ordinary. It means that you care too much that the power of the magical girl cannot match the power of the company, so that the magical girl can't do anything when she is in trouble. 5000>500 Is common sense, but miracles can make 1>10000. It feels not bold enough in this regard. Also, the content related to disaster beasts is basically invisible, and the main line of magical girls is basically not promoted, resulting in it being too similar to ordinary cyberspace. Magical girls should respond to people's thoughts of resistance and turn them into strength, but here magical girls are just like ordinary legends, and it is difficult to resist. And the protagonist is not well developed. Iris's failure tells us that we need to gather everyone's strength, but this obviously takes a long time to do. Originally, the power of magical girls can shorten this part of the time, but the capital forces are too tight, and it will appear in seconds.

First time writing? The writing is pretty good and doesn't look like a newbie.