The Ten Shadow Demon Warlock in One Piece

The overall rating is three and a half stars, mainly because I think it's too confusing to divide one chapter into two halves to write about pirates and curses.

It's too confusing. How to write a paragraph from another world's perspective at the end of the film? Isn't this how anime is written?

There are some spell-returning worldviews, and the plot is pretty good, but the only unpleasant thing is that you don't think about it at all. After reading a long list of pirates, and then seeing a few spell-returning episodes, it makes your eyes hurt. And there is very little plot, which is completely unnecessary.

After seeing Chapter 26, let me tell you about the problems First of all, there will be a memory of a spell at the end of the chapter, but it doesn't have much impact on me. I just said it when someone complained about it. The second is the character of the protagonist. I haven't seen what character it is yet, but it gives me the impression that it is a multi-dimensional character. As the author's narrative changes, the personality changes. At the beginning, when I got the Shadow Fruit on the ship, I thought it was a bold and careful person similar to Blackbeard. Then I fought with the major general and was about to self-destruct. I knew it was playing on Fushiguro Megumi, but it looked too weird. The protagonist felt like he came here to gamble his life. It was completely different from the previous exchange between the protagonist and Hancock. Later, when I was getting along with two women, I would always touch their heads. Who are they? They would keep touching their heads. If you are an adult, I think it's OK, but aren't you also a child? Don't you think it's awkward to touch your heads when you are the same height? Also, when I subdued the bird later, I found that there was no ability to use the shadow fruit at all. Then I thought about whether there would be no difference in the protagonist's eyes if he got the fruit before or after he subdued it? Also, it is obvious that you can train a few shikigami stably and learn domineering at the same time, but you say that not being afraid of challenges and overcoming difficulties are the conditions for determining domineering. I didn't stay in the spiritual time room during the two years when I was looking for Lu Fei. Why can't I take advantage of the period of rapid development to exercise? If you say you want to make thunder or something, that involves the timeline of the book, which will be discussed later. The protagonist was originally going to go to sea directly and did not plan to take Hancock with him. I would like to ask the protagonist if he planned to learn how to practice domineering on his own at sea? I'm a little confused as to whether he's an adult who makes a decision or a kid who's just crazy. Then there is the issue of the spell sequence. In the first ten chapters, the father and mother, the Tianwu Fist, and the various interactions with Shi'er, I even thought that the protagonist was the kind of child who knew the plot of One Piece but not the spell, and then first wore the spell and then passed through the pirate. But you told me that the protagonist knew about Kesuo, and the previous descriptions of the spell collapsed immediately, because this is not the behavior that a normal adult should have. Finally, it's about the timing. It was clearly planned to get the Shadow and Thunder Fruit, but why did we choose a controversial time point? There were Shadow, Tiantian, Lucky Fruit, and Hancock all together on the escort ship. This is also God's will, right? Just choose the owner of the fruit and it was perfunctory. How long have you been in time, and the butterfly effect takes effect so quickly? It is indeed God's will.

I feel that Moxuluo no longer needs to be strengthened. If you want to strengthen it, it should also be strengthened in the direction of conceptual level. Perspective analysis, information layer analysis, and opponent brain wave analysis should be adapted to each level.

In 80% Eunuch, the last two sections of each chapter with spells to return to battle crowd out the content of Pirates. It doesn't matter before it is put on the shelves; after it is put on the shelves, isn't it just water? It's better to set it up as a special extra chapter to explain the protagonist's experience in the spell return battle.