I Ask for Longevity with the Sword

🙂I recognized you at first sight, please make it longer.

After reading two chapters, I know why my grades are so bad. There is no golden finger, and it is not a big problem for mortals to become natives. But the problem is that you have these premises, but you make the protagonist too frivolous, and it feels like he is not dressed up, and he doesn't look like a native at all. There are two ways to write Aboriginal style. One is to write out the innocence and even stupidity of the protagonist. The second step is to explain the background. The protagonist comes from a well-educated family, so that the story can be written in a more stable manner.

Who taught you how to practice qi and transform into essence? It's so funny

It's almost 300,000 words. It's miserable enough if you don't even have 300 collections.

Why is there still Aura +2.+2? Is this just playing a game?🙂

Weapon in hand? Wulin novel?

If you are interested, you can write about settings and characters. New authors can provide some materials, such as which characters extract what breath of heaven and earth, and what techniques they practice.